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Reviews For Heart of the City
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 28

Aw, oh my gosh, that last part was so adorable! Heee! "Saaammmmy! Come out to play-ay!" I love it! :D

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 11

Awwwwwww, that last part is so CUTE! ;D

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well illistrated I do like thos images of the brothers being something else besides human. I liked it alot. Thanks.

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 28

Ok ......... i waited until now to review again. This was just GREAT!!!!!!!

 I really enjoyed the way you wove the mystery , adding the boys own problems into the mix.AWESOME writing!!!

I love the cultural pieces in this story- how all things carried along the suspense and action , and still came right down to Sam and Dean and their own problems-our heroes , as always , helping others first.OUTSTANDING job!!!!!

You never lost your focus and the thing that binds us all to the Winchesters-the willingness to fight the good fight.EXCELLENT!!!

Your vivid verbage and excellent timing just enhanced an already interesting story-like the icing on a cake!!!

I will be reading this one again, I want to make sure I didn't miss anything. !!!!

I'll be waiting for your next story!!

BRAVO!!!!

Reviewer: tsweeny (Signed) · Date: 10/08/08 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 28

     I liked this story and thought that it was really good.  I especially liked Sam and Dean playing while Dean was in jaguar form.  I liked the humor and the interaction between Sam and Dean as well.  You've written a really good story and I enjoyed it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 8

So, interesting that he was holding a scret that could deffinently hurt Sam. I still like the story though.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 6

I do appreciate the method of how you placed Dean as a cut mutt. If the idea of over coming his soul to the beast, I would assume that he is safe from HELL. A very good idea. For they both need eachother.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 5

It is very hard to imagine that an enchanted bruja (spirtiual witch) would give these gifts to a character that not even he himself knows how to handle,but yet itrs so "PEECHY" for him.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 4

This story keep giving me high rates at the way you write. This  is great, but I would like to kick the character of DEANS soon to be extra hole, because I don't think he relizes that with in a couple of months he will be leaving his brother and I don't think SAM would keep going in hunting.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 3

This new wave of Dean being able to turn into a preditor in sleep could help but what if he did it an awaken persona like SAM was able to sense entities in his awaken state of mind. Interesting procedure of this intreging writing. I like it. RATING:) 125 ++++

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm understanding that this story has Mexican History of a very important god. How does it help Dean in solving anything when he has paid the price for his brothers life. This is an interesting story and I'm likeing it cause I've studied Mexican and American folklore a bit and I like it. So, thank you.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 20

I've just caught up with your story.  I'm enjoying it very much.  I absolutely adore how Dean acts with Sam when he's a jaguar.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 20

I've just caught up with your story.  I'm enjoying it very much.  I absolutely adore how Dean acts with Sam when he's a jaguar.

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 16/07/08 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 13

Ok... I waited until now to review , basically because i just wanted to read more.

This is a great story. I really liked your"Sacrifice of the heart".

you have woven an taunt mystery here -all the right pieces are in play-AWESOME job!!!!

Dean as a jaguar is too cool. Sam as the shaman-totally on the money.OUTSTANDING writing.

Youe vivid verbage have made it easy to "see" this story clearly.OUTSTANDING!!!!

Your are a talented storyteller with a unique style!!!

MORE PLEASE.

BRAVO!!!



Author's Response: WoW.  Thanks!  Now I can start sweating.  Need to live up to expectations. lol

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