Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 02:00 AM · On: Infant Ghost

Nifty tale you have here. this line in particular had me chuckling out loud:

It seemed that rather than fork out for paint or wallpaper the owners had simply had someone vomit all over the walls. 

I loved the image of an "irrationally" pissed-off Sam, being denied internet access, getting annoyed at the sexy goings on next door at the motel!

The freaky plot twist was so sad. The image of Dean holding a ghost baby in his arms was sad enough, but that you made her his lost twin really hit me with the emo hammer. good job!

-- cricket