Supernaturalville
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 14/02/08 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

Talk about your BIG debates!!! I think you took this one on with thought and care, I didn't find it offensive at all.

I think your version offered a deeper picture of why Sam believes and Dean can't believe. I loved the twists you put on both... you gave it your full attention and were not sidetracked by worries about being "flayed by a hooker from God" (Sorry couldn't help it, that line is GOLD!!!!). The way Dean tells Father Reynolds that it's a good thing he doesn't believe, has such an edge to it and a really strong image with your description of the "cruelest form of good".

But in your portrayal of Sam , you excelled!!!! That Sam wants to believe not just to save himself, but to protect Dean, was beautiful and the fact that Sam still has questions about God (like a lot of us) but his faith in Dean is beyond question - you ended me with that!!!!!

One of my favorite lines was;

" Dean knew though that if he even stole a glance at Sammy, the tears he was hiding behind his green eyes would come streaming down his face, and he wasn’t about to show any more weakness and fragility than was already being witnessed by his baby brother."

I LOVED the way Sam's heart broke when he fully realizes how much pain his brother is in, and who doesn't dig a Winchester "I love you" moment!!!!

Great one shot!!!



Author's Response:

wow...what an amazing review!!! and thank u so so very much. I'm really glad that you liked this one shot that much to give such an amazing review. I did really try to get in the brother's heads, i do it for all my stories but especially this one because of the topic at hand. These reasons were the only ones that really made sense to me as to why Dean wouldn't believe and why Sam would want to. After that episode ended I just felt like there was so much left unsaid.

Thank you sooo very much for taking your time to write such a long review. The fact that you even picked out favourite lines and the part of my story that really got to you, means a lot :D:D

And "flayed by a hooker from God" hahahah i couldn't stop laughing lol

Anyways thanks again, so very much:)

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh great! That is what it all about lil10. I am glad we could inspire each other. I look forward to reading more of your work. Mwah!

Fantasy



Author's Response:

Yeap! And thx i hope you enjoy the other stories:), one which i started like months ago but i'm trying to finish up now lol

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

OMG! That was so beautiful, and well written.

I loved it so much, whenever I need inspiration, I hope u won't mind me coming back to read this.

I think this doesn't just relate to Sam and Dean, it also relates to us too, how we feel or dont feel about God. Who believes in him and who don't. I think this oneshot is special:)

Love Fantasy



Author's Response: wow thanks so much...I'm glad you enjoyed it...I've been soo busy with other stuff to finish off the other story that I've started and to start new ones, but you know what, I think you just inspired me to start writing them again, so i should be thanking you lol

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was beautiful!!!

Love the stuff you write

Bxxxx



Author's Response:

wow thanks soo muchh:) I'm really glad you enjoyed this and the other ones

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice work, and don't worry I thought you handled the God/no God question very respectfully! Well done.

Author's Response: thanks a lot for your review:D and I;m glad you thought I handled the situation well:) thx again:D

Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed) · Date: 19/02/07 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was really nice :) Great chick-flick moment but still in character for them both. And both explanations of why they do or don't believe in God made total sense.

Author's Response:

thanx a lot for your review:D I'm glad you think the explanations made sense, that was the whole point of this story, just to show that both Dean and Sam were justified for their reasons of believing and not believing.

 Thanks again for your awesome review:D

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