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Reviewer: flamelily (Signed) · Date: 11/10/08 01:30 PM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

Absolutely gripping and heartwrenching story, MORE please - I wait with bated breath as to what is going to happen to Dean now SOB

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I should have the next chapter of this one up next week. I've been head down in the eidts for my book and just came up for air! More soon, I promise!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 09:53 AM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

scary and awesome. so awesome. so glad dean's coherent and back. totally scared for what's about to come. great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I had to have Dena back, it was killing me. And you might need to be a little scared for what's to come. I'v eknown all along it would get worse once Dean was Dean again!

More soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 08:23 AM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

So great, love it - He's back!!  K.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Yep, he's back, and back to stay! I promise.

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 10:04 PM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

OH the cliffy!!!

Can't wait for the next update. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! SOrry about the cliffy. My cliffie demon is acting up again and reminded me I needed to let people know it's not over-not by a longshot!

More soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 09:08 PM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

That's it... I'm crying. I'm sobbing like a baby. Dean being Dean... oh my God, I mean... it's Dean! I love you! :D But what does he mean by it's gonna get worse.

Oh God, that was a fantastic chapter... that was awesome.

But man.. when I was reading it and got to "Dean opened his eyes" I had to stop and quickly go back because I don't recall you ever calling him Dean when it was his POV in the present so when I read that, I burst into tears. Amazing writing!

As always, can't wait for more... I know I have to... but it's so hard!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! *sends box of tissues* I've been waiting for this chapter, patiently, but anxiously too. Wanting Dean back!

You're right, until the moment Dean opened his eyes, I hadn't used his name in his POV in the present. (Did that make sense?)

More very soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: latlk (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 08:57 PM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

Thank you so much!  I have been reading this story since the beginning and it's been hard at times.  Don't get me wrong, it's VERY well written, the boys and Bobby are wonderful and the flashbacks are very effective.  But reading so many chapters where Dean has been lost has really taken a toll.  I'm so happy to finally see him back with his family!!!  I've got tears in my eyes!  This is a great warm up for Thursday night, where I'm hoping to see two similarly moving reunions between Dean and Bobby and Dean and Sam.  Now I can't wait for the next chapter.  GREAT JOB, Thanks for the hope!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! And thank you for sticking with me. I know this one has been hard to read, it was taking a toll on me as well, but Dean's back and there is hope. I'm not saying it's going to be easy, but there is hope!

More soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 08:36 PM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

He remembers!!!!! Dean remembers!!!! Oh god!!!! *squeals LOUDLY* thank god it came at the nick of time!!! maybe the other guy triggers something in him that made him remember!!!!!! 

LOL sorry i was so excited that Dean remembers!!!!!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Was that squee for my story? THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm bouncing with happiness! Dean remembers and I promise he won't forget agin!

More very soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 07:40 PM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

OMG!Dean is back. I loved the reunion between the brothers, so moving. What Dean meant by it's not over and it's going to get worse. Gripping story so far, I can't wait for your next chaper Muffy.  

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I needed that reunion. It was getting so hard... What does Dean mean? I 've always known trhat once Dean was back things would take a turn for the worse. He's done something no one else ever has--he's survived.

More very soon! hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 06:49 PM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

Fantastic chapters, so much happening, have you really brought Dean back? can you save him? update soon Please.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Yes, I've really brought him back, and yes, in the end I htink I can save him--it won't be easy.

More very soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: PyroChilde (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 06:40 PM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

No! No getting worse! Guh, you're killing me! I think you've had me in (or very close to it) tears every single chapter. UPDATE SOON!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! *sends tissues* Sorry about the getting worse, it needs to happen so they can defeat the thing once and for all!

More soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: IrishTwilight (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 06:08 PM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

*sqee!* I lurv you!!  you could not have provided better 'actual hope'!! 

It's sooo good to have Dean back!  And your writing of the scene where he comes back was totally flawless.  In fact, this whole story has been amazingly written!  You convey the emotions perfectly heartwrenchingly!!! 

Now the Winchester brothers are back together to kick some demon butt!  Yay!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! *blushing* A squee for ME! I'm so glad this scene worked, I've been worrying over it for a long time. I knew Dean would come back, I knew the bare bones of the scene, but it was so hard to write! I agree with you, once the Winchesters are together, nothing can stop them for long!

More very soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 03:37 PM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

What an intense chapter! This story is wonderful.

Little rollercoaster of emotions there and then Dean is back at the end. Yeah!

Little bit of evil in the cliffhanger though! How can it get worse for poor Dean??

Can't wait for more! Mary xx

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I think this story is creaping onto my list of favorites of the ones I've written. The emotions are killing me, but I am so (yeah this is a little sillly) proud as I finish each chapter!

Dean is back, and it will get worse. Dean's survived and the thing will come for him with a vengeance now!

More very soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 03:35 PM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

Just brilliant.

I'm so glad Dean's back.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad he's back too, I was starting to lose a little hope.

More very soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 03:34 PM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

hope? what hope? you built it up then blew it all straight out of the water with that last line - and i loved it!

yeah, its been a rough ride, and i guess its been kinda hard to write - stuff like that often is, but you've done an amazing job, and it's a brilliant fic, dark and scary and utterly compelling...

so hurry up and weave!



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! Well there was a little hope--Dean is back, but yeah, I guess I did destroy it a bit with that last line. I'm, so glad you're sticking with me through this one! I hope I can keep it up!

More very soon! hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 01:27 PM · On: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love?

Well, This was the biggest gift kind of thing today. U know, I was just checking the reviews for this story, and when I just read that u were like posting it today, I just got the opportunity to read this chapter. Thank you aso much.

Well, This was absolutely awesome. A great applause for you. And yay dean is back. i am almost jumping here knowing that dean is back. But wait, hope this story is not getting over soon. And waht does dean mean by its going to get worse. Oh god let dean and sam be safe. and yeah bobby dearest too. A brilliant chapter once again!!!! good job....

Pranami :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! *blushing* You are too kind! Dean is back, I've been waiting for that moment, I think for the whoel story! Very anxiously, knowing the whole time that once Dean was back--things would be much worse!

More very soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 09:58 PM · On: O Let Me Dying Live, Till Death Doth Come

They broke Dean by making him believed that they killed Sam, how cruel. Dean trying to comfort Sam, what a touching moment, maybe there're hope. Awww...Harry found his way to reach Dean, that put a smile on my face. Amazing work Muffy, I'm at the edge of my seat waiting for more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I knew that Dean thinking his brother was dead would break him, or at least help him on the way. Harry and Dean, they make me smile too, and Harry's back in the next chapter.

More today! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 05:02 PM · On: O Let Me Dying Live, Till Death Doth Come

Wow, what a brilliant chapter.

It's nice that Sam has taken Dean home.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hope taking Dean home will help!

More today! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 07:51 PM · On: O Let Me Dying Live, Till Death Doth Come

WOW....This is awesome. I am totally hooked.


Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like this one! I get so nervous with every new chapter!

More today! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 10:01 AM · On: O Let Me Dying Live, Till Death Doth Come

Again.. absolutely amazing. 

I'm filling up, lol. I swear I'm gonna start crying any minute. I love how he seems to recognise little things, and how Sam is trying to get through to him.

And the whole sacrifice thing... damn freaky. That must have been absolutely horrific to got through, and then Dean having to watch Sam die in that way... damn you. That's just cruel, lol.

Can't wait to read what happens next. ^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! *sends tissues* Dean is starting to recognize a few things! I know that sacrifice was rough and the next chapter is a little worse I think, but I promise a reward at the end!

More today! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 06:29 AM · On: O Let Me Dying Live, Till Death Doth Come

well this went pretty well. I liked the time when Dean was able to recognize his Home - His baby, Impala. That was really really emotional. Well waiting for more.... please post soon.....

Pranami :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Dean is starting to come back a little I think! I will update very soon! Is today ok?

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 03:46 AM · On: O Let Me Dying Live, Till Death Doth Come

Muffy, Wow and I think wow again!

Very intense. Almost reading Mitch's demise through my hands.

Poor Randy, dying and thinking his brother was gone too. Only losing Sam would make Dean try to give up the good fight.

Loved that Dean recognised the Impala and Harry and that sam has brought him home.

The masks make these 'people' very scary.

Looking forward to the next update.

Cheers Mary xx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Mary! I'll be honest and say the next chapter is, at least for me, a little worse. But I promise something good at the end! Promise!

More today! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 11:26 PM · On: O Let Me Dying Live, Till Death Doth Come

i shouldn't really be so amazed that Dean's protective streak towards Sam still exists when he doesn't really know Sam anymore! 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I knew Dean would respond to Sam, even if he didn't know who Sam was!

More today! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 10:18 PM · On: O Let Me Dying Live, Till Death Doth Come

great chapter; poor Dean.

Sam needing Dean and Dean holding him not knowing why; talk about sad.

the torture Dean went through thinking they killed Sam and the constant pain no wonder he doesn't know who he is.

loved how Harry remembered him and is now sleeping on his bed with him.

for dog lovers everywhere they really do know when to cuddle and love you when you need it the most.  that unconditional love they give is awesome.  Hope Harry will help Sam bring Dean back.

hope another chapter will be up soon.

Renee



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Dogs (and cats, actually) do truly understand us when we need that closeness, don't they? I knew Harry would help Dean, and he will help even morein the next chapter.

More today! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 09:05 PM · On: O Let Me Dying Live, Till Death Doth Come

wow those creatures or whatever they are sound like they are pretty nasty..Dean holding Sam at the end because he didn't know what else to do was beautiful. Thanks for writing. Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! They are nasty, I'll grant you that! Thank you for sticking with me through this one!

More today! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 01:02 AM · On: Long Overwhelmed Be, And Swallow'd Up

Oh god.....i think he's remembering the fire that took Mary?? and he's still reaching out to Sam even though he can't remember him. that's so Dean.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Poor Dean, but no, he's not remembering the fire that took Mary. He's remembering something much, much more recent. You'll find out in the next chapter!

More very soon! Hugs, Muffy

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