Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 8

Ooooh!  A sequel!  I'll definitely check that out!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 7

Finally, all the secrets are out.  Well, most of them anyway.  Just need to find out the deep dark about John and Kate.

I think you did an excellent job capturing Jack's state of mind!

Reviewer: kirra (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 8

i really like this story and am totally ready for the next...good luck

Reviewer: hellioness (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 6

Nice chapter. I liked your using basketball to show the contrast between a Jack's normal life and Sam's. I can't help wondering if Jack's "wierd dreams" means Sam gave him more than just a piece of his liver. Ooo. I am intrigued.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 6

I like Jack!  He's got an infectious positive attitude and an eagerness for life.  Something the Winchesters could use a dose of.  :)

Please update soon.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 5

Does Jack have psychic abilities like Sam?

I love that Dean did what he thought Sammy would want and had the boys room together.  More big brother points.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 4

Sam said the only thing that Dean can't argue with.  He's been such a wodnerful big brother he can't keep that from Sammy.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 3

"There wasn't a word Sam knew that had moprepower, more meaning... and more responsibility."  Fabulous!  With just a few words you sum everything up in the most meaningful way.

I got a kick out of Dean referring to Kate's phone call as a search for body parts.  Hee!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 2

Dean's reaction was everything I would have expected.  Fantastic!  An excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow!  That's a punch in the gut!  I think this is worse than facing the yellow-eyed demon.  I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: hellioness (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is a well written fic and a page turner, too. Can't wait for your next chapter. Great job!!

ps: I see Chapters 5 and 6 in the story index, but they are blank when I click on them.  I want to read more, but I can't. :-(

Reviewer: kirra (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 4

i like the idea of this story. it is well written and i think its gonna be a good fanfic. congrats on the first and keep writin.

Author's Response: Glad you like the story. It will get much more exciting in part two and three - promise!!

Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 4

I just read all four chapters. This story is really good, can't wait to read more of this. BTW LOVE your pen name, that's my favorite Dylan song.

Author's Response: Thanks! More to come this afternoon! Glad you are enjoying it!!

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