Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey Boo. god this is lovely...so 'Cal' in its dark, desperate ferocity, underpinned and brought to salvation by the love the boys have for each other. That 'Please' at the end of the fisrt section just shudders through me! You so owe me a box of tissues, Missy! Love it hunny and great honour to beta! bev xxxx
Author's Response: great honour to be beta'd! you made it ten times better than it was - especially stopping my habit of rambling on and on and on and on and never ever ever using full stops...! Glad you like it! thanks
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
If this chapter is set several months after NRFTW, does that mean Dean is out of Hell, you didn't fill in the blanks where his trip to hell was concerned. and it sounds like he's ready to do the same deal thing to save Sam again. Please do write more so we can figure out what's going on.
Author's Response: Maureen - details will come, but this story isn't really about his time in hell, or how they got him out. in fact, it only makes the briefest appearance! as for more, so you can figure out whats going on - if you guys manage to get this first chapter over ten reviews before next tuesday - i'll post the next chapter early!
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow Cal, totally awesome, I can almost feel that storm rattling the heavens. Nothing better than a violent storm whilst running wounded throught the woods. Incredibly atmospheric, poor Dean's desperate struggle to get Sam back to the cabin paints such a vivid, terrifying picture. What have you done to the pair of them? Dean's limping along on his last legs and he's the healthy one! So good to see Bobby in the picture and en route to a rescue. Now I just need to try and figure out what's going on - is it some kind of hell induced nightmare, or is our boy back out and up and running (well, staggering under Sammy's weight) again. That last chapter sounded pretty ominous. What's going on?? Please update soon, nothing like a bit of hurt Dean to cheer a gal up...and you always manage to hurt him so well. Big hug x Jane x
Author's Response: oh, all will become clear soon. Sort of. well, not at all really - do love ta keep ya'll guessing... and thanks for the great review - good to know it works, 'cause i could really feel that storm brewing while i was writing it!
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice writing, like your use of language. Very exciting first chapter, makes me want to read more. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: good, great to know i actually make some sort of sense now and then! more coming next week, promise!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
Terrific opening Cal, seriously well done and now I'm dying to find out what the hell's going on...lol. - ;) Kel
Author's Response: glad you're liking it - and you have no idea how apt your comment is... But trust me!
Author's Response: glad you're liking it - and you have no idea how apt your comment is... But trust me!
Reviewer: danny (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
i sooo give you the thumbs up, this is arsome, i love it, keep going and update soon. LOVE IT!!! =) Danny xxxx
Author's Response: the story's pretty much finished - putting the last touches to the epilogue now, so i should be updating once a week or so! glad you liked it, and VERY glad for the thumbs up, thanks!
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