Reviewer: kika (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 15
What can I say? Beautiful! PS. I'm Italian
Author's Response: Thank you. I guessed right then, I saw your name in your profile, so I figured you are Italian. Your name is beautiful. My 12 year old niece carries the German version of it. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 15
Enjoyed the lighter funny spots in here a lot!! Also you had some very special lines in this chapter - about Sam "He spoke to all of them but his eyes were fixed only at Dean" and then Dean saying "That's what I'm here for, to hold him up", wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the funny spots and you caught the special lines, I have to send you a virtual cookie for that. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: janebear (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 15
What can I say, again a great chapter from a wonderful and talented writer. So glad to see that things are getting so much better for our boys. Loved seeing the humor coming back. Put a smile on my face for my birthday. Thanks for that. Hugs so much to you for all of your wonderful talent and creativity. Hugs, Jane
Author's Response: Thanks you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the humor. Hope you have a great birthday. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 14
Very quick note, I'm on my way to work - definitely LOVED THAT, thank you, you made my day!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read and review before work. Don't work to hard. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 14
great chapter. you caught the bond perfectly between Dean and Sam. i am still crying................great job. Renee
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm sorry to hear you are still crying, but maybe I should be happy. I think I owe a lot of people a box of tissues. I'm happy to hear you think I caught the bond perfectly. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: janebear (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 14
My heart feels so much better after reading this chapter. Thank you thank you for letting the boys be ok. You did still manage to bring tears to my eyes again but for happier reasons this time. I can so feel the brotherly bond between them. You have such great talent. Please keep the great chapters coming. I will as always be faithfully awaiting the next chapter. My heart is happy now!!!!! Hugs, Jane P.S This made a happy early birthday present for me. Thanks again hugs to you!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your sweet review, I'm glad at least this time your tears came from joy. And happy early birthday. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: kika (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 14
I like it very much. I almost had an heart attack yesterday, but tonight... I feel very well!!! I really love this story and the way draw the relationship between Sam and Dean. Keep going (sorry I don't speak English very well, so, please, forgive my mistakes)
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you feel well again. And your English is just fine, don't worry about a few mistakes. English isn't my first language either, but I have lived in the US for 19 years now. Originally I'm from Germany. How about you? Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: kirra (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 13
i really like this story, but wow do you take limp sam and dean to a whole new level. i dont think ive ever seen so many things go wrong for the boys...but its a great story
Author's Response: Thanks, I like to torture the boys, especially Sam, gives a great a great reason for protective/worried brother.Glad you like it. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 13
NO WAY!! Sam, better be dreaming!!!!! Dean can not be dead....i am still in tears here and shock. update soon please. Renee
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and sorry to make you cry. I just updated, it should appear soon. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 13
Heartbeat chapter ending, pure horror! I'm still in shock, didn't expect this at all, when things finally seemed to improve. But Dean can't be dead, he just can't (this is not a death-fic, right??; you will fix this!!!) and Sam never would survive this. You have to update real quick, cause I have to know that Dean is going to be okay!!
Author's Response: Sorry, I can't give things away, but let's just say, you are right, Sam wouldn't survive Dean dying and I don't have the heart to kill Sam. Thanks for your review and I will update tomorrow again. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 13
Oh yeah, thats evil good but evil leaving us hanging. Can't wait for next chapter. Great story by the way. Just keep it coming, thanks for writing and posting.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it and sorry for the evil cliffie. Will update tomorrow again. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: janebear (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 13
OMG !!!!!!!!!! What a cliffhanger. I think my heart just skipped a beat!!! Oh please oh please Dean just has to be ok!!!! You most certainly have me glued to my seat as well as having tears in my eyes. Again what talent you have. Thanks again so much for all of your hard work. And thanks for the nice comment of my mom. She retired 2 years ago but just loved her job. Hugs for all of your hard work hugs, Jane
Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful review. I will update again tomorrow again. In a way, it made me happy to hear about the tears in your eyes, it means I did well. Don't cry anymore, everything will be alright. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 13
AHHHHH OH NO DEAN! OMG hurry update soon, can't wait! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for dropping by to read and review. I will update tomorrow. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: janebear (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 12
Once again another great chapter. I really enjoy reading your work. I am glad to see that things are improving for our guys. I been meaning to tell you that my mom is a nurse and I can relate to all of the medical knowledge you are sharing. Again, great talent and many thanks for sharing it here with us. So glad I joined here. Hugs to you for your wonderful creativity. I will be faithfully waiting for the next chapter to see how Sam and Dean make out.
Author's Response: Thanks, you are so sweet. I bet your mom is a great nurse. Next chapter will be up tomorrow. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 12
Another wonderful chapter, things seem to get better a bit, what feels so good! Just loved the brother moments, showing what they mean to each other, Sam "undeniably the one who was most important" to Dean and Dean the only one who could calm his little brother down, amazing! Also you have such great minor-characters in this story, really like Brenda and Dr. Connell and absolutely fell for Dr. Pangai! Enjoyed this so much!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I love brotherly moments. I'm glad you like my characters, Dr. Connell is a doctor I know, only she is much, much older and Dr. Pangai could be one of several MD's I know. Brenda is modeled after several nurses I know also. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 11
The only thing calming me a bit is Dean at his brother's side now ("Let's go back to Sammy. He needs me, now more than ever" - devotion, that's the secret here, one not imaginable without the other); those were horrifying moments when Sam nearly died (again) and Dean so painfully had to wait for news. Great one!
Author's Response: Thanks, and yes, one can't be without the other and I couldn't write Sam without Dean. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: kika (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 12
Fantastic! You're a very great writer.
Author's Response: Thanks, you are very gracious. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: janebear (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 11
Again, a great chapter from a great writer. I am again on the edge of my seat to see how our guys make out. I so can fell Dean's pain and compasion for his little brother. I was right here for this chapter and will be anxiously awaiting the next. Thanks again for sharing your talent with us.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for another great review. Made my day. I'm going to put the next chapter up today. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 11
A fantastic couple of chapters, really exciting stuff, poor Dean all that brother worry, looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, yeah, poor Dean is going to have premature gray hair from all that worry. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: kika (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 11
You rock!! Okay, now I feel a little better... :)! Ijust love this story more and more!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you feel a little better now and love my little musing. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: janebear (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 10
OMG poor Sam!!!!! I am sitting on the edge of my seat!!!!!!!!!!! Again, you are truly blessed with a wonderful writing talent. I am so loving your story and the compassion you show in Sam and Dean. They both have to be ok!!! Can't wait to see the next chapter I will be waiting right here to see!!! Thanks so very much for sharing your talent with us.
Author's Response: You are welcome and I have to thank you for reading my story. Without readers like you, my writing means nothing. I will update again soon. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 10
So much angst and despair in this chapter, didn't expect Sam still in such bad shape, his condition life-threatening and I'm trying to catch my breath after reading the chapter ending, really thrilling! But there is so much more, what's always there and I absolutely admire how you cover it, their special bond - really liked Dean expressing his pride for his little brother and the flashback was just grand, showing so many years of care, protection and love - wow!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review. The bond between the brothers is really my favorite part, because that's what keeps them going. I'm glad you liked the flashback, I like to write them. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: kika (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 10
"Respiratory and cardiac arrest"? Poor Sammy.... Please keep going, I can't wait to know what it's going to happen...
Author's Response: Hope I didn't give you some respiratory and cardiac arrest. Thanks for your review and I will update soon. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: kika (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 9
I like it very much! I can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Chapter 10 should be up by now. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 9
This is really a great story!!! I love the interaction between the boys- you have caoptured their ways and words completely-AWESOME piece of writing!!!!!! Sammy so sick , and Dean so distraut because he couldn't get to his brother-I could see all of this story so easily-OUTSTANDING job!!! Bobby , as always , the boys rock, loyal and loving and strong when needed-perfect-just perfect. Sammy, so worried that he lost Dean- Dean , withhis typical wisecracks to ease his tension-everything just flowed beautifully. You are a great and gifted writer!! MORE PLEASE. BRAVO!!!
Author's Response: You make me blush, what a nice compliment. Thank you for taking the time to review and I hope you will like the rest of the story as I post it. Hugs, Vonnie
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