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Reviewer: tsweeny (Signed) · Date: 01/08/08 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 16

     I enjoyed the story and I hope that you will write a sequel because the ending and what had been going on with Sam and Dean kind of lost me.  I like the fallen angel thing.  I find it interesting and I like that Angel probably redeemed herself. 

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 16

wow, i'm sad that its over..That was awesome.. I liked the ending..They don't always have to end on a happy note..This story had great twists and turns. I think you done really good portraying Sam and Dean in this story. Hopefully you will continue to write..I love you stories..

 

 

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 16

As much as I hoped for a happy ending (you warned me, I know), I loved this story from start to end, an amazing ride! To see them seperated nearly breaks my heart, but it very easily could happen, some wounds just don't heal, so impressive last chapter! Enjoyed your writing (especially your great humour) more than I can tell, thank you so much for a thrilling, exciting time and I hope there is more!!!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 15

Oh wonderful, so there still is hope, Sam and Dean will find common ground again; keep my fingers crossed it will be this way!!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 14

Just loved this chapter, the end of all hopes, no more bargains and tricks! And Dean killing Angel with the nail of the holy cross, what an awesome scene, an act of mercy (there was a strong connection between Dean and Angel, an understanding, both knowing what hell means and again Angel was a great charakter!). Now I have to know what effect this will have on the brothers!!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 15

Another great update. Can't wait to see how you finish this. Its been a great story. Again, thank you for writing...

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 14

Wow that was a good chapter..I went back and read chapter 13 so it made more since this time..lol..I was to sleepy last night. I feel bad for Angel..Glad Dean didn't send her back to hell. Do you have much more to go with this story?

 

P.S. Thanks for checking out my car..Love getting car complements.. 

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh, so Lilith is behind this and Angel one of the Fallen (I still feel sorry for her, can't help it), you reach here a new level of horror, great update!!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 13

Is Angel, Lilith? Wow that was an awesome update..Can't wait to read more..


Author's Response:

Angel's not Lilith, only one of her many victims, though she is close by.

I checked out your mustang. How sweet is that car?

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 23/07/08 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 12

Is this a trap? Is she just leading Dean there to hand him over to Mammon (I think thats how you spell it) Can't wait to read more and find out. Thanks so much for writing.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 12

Still can't get over this chapter, think we're near the heart of it now, when Dean viewed his hellhound marks and then collapsed, won't forget this scene (you did a grand job with this); and it does make so much sense these two, Dean and Angel, both bruised and shattered do understand and try to support each other, but the Jerk/Bitch exchange between Dean and Angel this really troubled me as it indicates that there is now a distance between Sam and his brother. Hope with all my heart this special bond isn't broken, so please don't do this to me, fix it, please!!

Author's Response:

We're in the home stretch now.  Things keep changing as it's all coming together for the big showdown but when it's all over I'm afraid you're not just gonna hate me, you're really, really, really gonna hate me.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 21/07/08 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 11

AWESOME!!

Angel's story heartbreaking, tragic (the tattoo as penance, this one hit me), knew Dean would understand, great great chapter!!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 21/07/08 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 11

your on a role with the updates..Keep them coming. Thanks for writing..

Author's Response: Thank you for the reviews! If you read Nocturnal Omissions then you know what my dream Mustang is. SHELBY!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 20/07/08 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 10

Great update!! Certainly enjoyed Dean and Angel comparing their scars but when they reached the hellhound marks this was nothing but scary - loved it!!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 20/07/08 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 10

wow another awesome update. Angel is so mysterious can't wait to find out her story. Thanks for updating so quickly. 

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 9

thanks so much for updating so quickly. Another awesome update..Will she get Dean or will it be the other way around. Can't wait to find out. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great idea to have Dean searching Angel's flat for hints, how people live tells so much about them; very interesting and painful what he found there and it seems everything is drifting towards some revealing discoveries! Also hope Dean will be together with Sam then, feel they're going to need each other desperately to fight this!!! Enjoyed the update!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 8

An Angel chapter, what a treat, just what I wished for! Think Dean and Angel really have a lot in common and both are aware of this, so I'm really looking forward to their meeting, this sure will be interesting! Thanks a lot!!!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 8

hmm wondering where you are going with the story. What new found talents will Dean have? I'll stay tuned to find out..lol..Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/08 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 7

Wow, don't know where to start, thrilling chapter, a tour de force!! Angel is back, darkness and tragic always visible in this charakter (great!) and I just loved how determined Sam acted to save his brother. And then Mammon's appearance (with "the stench of hellfire") and the Gehennam Import/Export, the history of the business etc. - you place every detail so precisely, it's such a joy to read! Now I want to hear more about Angel's story and how she will react when she finds Dean. Fantastic!

Author's Response: Thanks again. Even though I'm running amok in the Supernatural Universe, I try to have everything make sense to me and so, hopefully to everyone else. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. It only takes one review to keep us going so thank you for taking the time to post.

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 7

oh wow, whats going on?..can't wait to find out..Please update again soon. Thanks for writing. 

Author's Response: Thank you for the nice post and you are most welcome. Mustang? For the car or the horse? Both are exceptional creatures. I pretty much have everything figured out and will keep posting ASAP. Hope you stay for the entire ride.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 6

Can't tell how much I enjoy this, another stunning chapter! Awesome scenes when the hellhound appeared (and how great to throw in "Dean Winchester, hellhound whisperer", loved it!!) and then hell made it's recall for Dean, scary really doesn't cover this anymore. I'm hooked more than ever!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. You are soooo getting everything I'm trying to convey. I wanted Dean to think twice before using this particular souvenir from his trip to hell. Much better than a t-shirt, huh?

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 6

awesome story so far..Great twists and turns..can't wait to read more thanks so much for writing. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I write out of sequence so I have a lot of chapters in progress. Working hard on the next one.

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yeah Bobby..I just know he'll have a trick up his sleeve..


Author's Response: He usually does, but if not a trick than some much need information. I heart Bobby!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

Dean and Angel, these two are quite a pair, they sure share a few things (a deal with Lilith, the marks and more I think) and I hope Angel will make another appearance here, she really is interesting!

Enjoyed 'Duncan and Declan McMence', funny!

But things now definitely darkened even more - Dean learning that the bounty is on Sam and it seems he has to search his shattering dreams and remember his time in hell to save his little brother, so wow, what a scary prospect, can't wait to hear about it! Great one!



Author's Response: Dean learns something about himself while he's with the McMenace brothers...but its a painful lesson and Angel will be back.  She still has a bounty to collect.

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