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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 13

Wow! Think they should bind little Jacob's powers so he never has the chance to become the antichrist? Good story! You made Sam a mean enough scumbag that I wasn't sorry he was killed. cool that he was killed by Jacob.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 12

You've picked out a lot of details from the canon episodes. Dean stealing Sam's date in WIAWSNB. Fantastic! I liked the trip down memory lane.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 11

That was a shocking bit of news that Lexi held Dean's contract. Excellent!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 10

Wow! What a bastard Sam's turning out to be! I wan to kill him myself.
And great twist recreating the pilot episode for Dean's worst day ever. That was the worst day in his young life, now to have it repeated would be gut-wrenching.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 9

Very interesting perspective! no one else has written a story where Sam isn't really 100 percent Sam. This is a first! I can't wait!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 8

You described Dean's feelings as a new father so well! And Sam just needs to get over himself. Dean only has five months to be with his family and Sam's trying to pull him away.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/09/08 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

Very intense chapter! Lexi is flippin' crazy!!

Author's Response: Thank you. Haha yeah she is. I based her off my sister who we all thought was demonic when she was pregnant with my neice.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 6

Good to have the background about Dean and Lexi's break up.

Author's Response:
They have a whole back story that I have worked out. I'm going to go more into it in the next installement.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/07/08 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 5

A lot happening in this chapter! And Dean says the L word for the first time.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/07/08 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 4

Wow! Dean gave Lexi his mom's wedding ring?! Too cool!

Reviewer: SupernaturalKat (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 4

freaking awesome

Reviewer: Sugar Fairy Dust (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 4

I loved Dean's nervousness and how he didn't really ask her to marry him. Very Dean like just to put the ring on the table and not say anything. Can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 3

A strange twist that Sam always wanted normal but learned to embrace the hunting life and Dean never believed he could have a normal life but is now getting it. Now the fur will fly!

Author's Response: Haha yes it will.

Reviewer: Sugar Fairy Dust (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 3

WOW! I'm hooked. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 2

Wow! Very well written Dawn! Everything is perfect---Dean's thoughts, his empathy for his father, the flashback, his guilt, his search. I'm just bowled over!

Author's Response: Thank you SO much! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

Funny line---"Winchesters don't make girls"! That was hilarious!
Geez, Sam can be a real ass when he's drunk! Good thing he doesn't get drunk very often.

Author's Response: I like drunk Sammy though! LOL. I was thinking of him in Playthings and I just had to add in him being drunk. I like that line a lot too. I think it's a very Dean thing to say, sorta along the lines of him telling Sam he's always right because he's the oldest. I should have ch 2 up shortly.

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