:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 04/10/08 01:24 PM · On: the future, the plan and the suprise

oooo I really lke the way you ened the story!!!! awesoeme job dave!! update soon please!!

Author's Response: this 1 is finished there will be another story though

Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 11:44 AM · On: hi Jen

It's quite hard to follow and you could do with some help in the formatting and vocab department. All in all, interesting ideas, just need to pull everything else up to the same standard.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 08:49 AM · On: the future, the plan and the suprise

so, i read it. Because to give an advice you have to see first right, that's what you told me. And, i just feel like you owe me half an hour of my life back. I'm here to read about Supernatural, about Dean and Sam. You remember them, the heroes of this site? Oh and, another thing you should try to remember is ponctuation. Seriously guys, you might have ideas, and the love of writing, but find another site where to post, because here the subject of this site is in its name, SUPERNATURALVILLE. And please hire a couple good betas, and i said good, not another one of your teen friend.

Reviewer: fireceltiephoenix (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 07:53 PM · On: okay that was wierd

What an interesting twist. I can't wait to see where you're going with this. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 04:20 PM · On: okay that was wierd

I really like this story!! good job!!!
keep your writing going strong!!
update soon!!
( deserves more than a ten...)

Author's Response: thanks jess

Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 01:50 PM · On: hi Jen

on the way

Reviewer: caty (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 01:39 PM · On: hi Jen

wow can't wait for more

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