Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/09 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 12
"...lying liars that lie" Not only hilarious but it shows how truly angry Caleb is. A beautiful piece! so much emotion and yet you keep the balance between everyone. Thanks for sharing this work!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 11
What a heart-breaking scene when Dean confesses his crossroads deal! I kept returning to read it, soaking up all the levels of sorrow, betrayal, and pain. Amazing piece! In my eyes Joshua has redeemed himself. Standing against his father is probably the hardest thing he's ever done. Stupid Harland doesn't realize that by Joshua embracing his craft he's earned a higher status in the Brotherhood than he would have without it.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 10
And here I thought that Griffin's Triad were getting off easy. None of them were injured while all of Jim's Triad had been adversely affected by something. It was wonderful how you took Dean and Gideon's previous words about the role of Guardian and deepened their meanings. Before it didn't seem that both opinions could be right and now we see that they are. I guess not even Griffin Porter can fight against the future Triad now that his choice of Guardian is dead. Although, I have a feeling Gideon, Ethan and Elijah wouldn't have followed him so blindly now anyway.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 9
Not many people would complain about being the melty middle of a Winchester sandwich. That made me laugh! I like how Gideon and Elijah both had bonding moments with Dean. Now they can see the similarities between the two groups and the individual men themselves. Maybe Dean and Elijah will even exchange MySpace addresses.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 8
OMG! What a way for the truth to come out! In the beginning you gave us a hint that it might but I never expected such a dramatic reveal. And now Eli's ability is perfect for the situation. Those poor boys! And all this time Johsua knew his father was part of it. That kid never catches a break! Maybe some good will come from all this.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ohhhh! Caleb would have to drown. I'll bet he's never going near water again! I love how each group is protective of their respective Guardians, and even Griffin's group has accepted Dean as THE future Guardian of the Brotherhood.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 6
Damn! when those boys get together it's like baking soda and vinegar. Since there are more chapters I know Dean isn't being struck down permanently, but what a powerful cliff hanger!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 5
Interesting that both groups stated they trust the people they know and they don't know the other men. So Griffin's group do have cute nicknames for each other. Hee! this is Bizarro world! I like the alternate Triad. They have a very similar dynamic as Caleb, Dean and Sam. I love Bobby's line, "I'm representing." Woohooo! Kind of freaky that Gideon, Eli and Ethan spent so much time with the Triad without Caleb, Dean and Sam being aware of it. I would feel very uncomfortable about that. They probably even slept in the same beds at Jim's farm.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 4
Riley is too cute! His enthusiasm is infectious. He's like Bart Simpson on cocaine (only nice). Good thing Bradley seems more cautious. You can really pack the information into a chapter! I had to read, then stop and absorb, then read a little more, then stop to link it to what I already knew. Ican't wait to meet the Bizarro Triad!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 3
So much is already happening in this story! Wow! To much to comment on. It's amazing all the little subplots that weave through! How do you keep them straight? And Dean's comments about Mac and Esme in the kitchen was hilarious! This is going to be one hell of a roadtrip!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 2
Glad Carolyn finally saw Ian for the rat he is. Now maybe she can find someone better. Maybe Joshua? Wow! So Dean, Sam and Caleb get to meet the guys Griffin thinks should be the next Triad. If Porter's so certain they're the right choice, why is he hedging his bets by taking Dean's group? Does this mean that John, Mac and Jim trained these other boys too? That's freaky to think about.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 12
this story is simply awesome. As the whole Brotherhood universe. And although re-reading the stories is always a sure way to have a great read, i can't wait for your new one to start. Now than Tidia's one is done, i think it's about time, lol... Pleeeaaase...
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
Incredible opening chapter! If I were dean I'd be worried about reliving the elf hunt. Caleb's going to be in trouble. Awww, Scout is dead? I loved Scout! That only leaves Harper Lee.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 11
Caleb lifted his head. "Back in my apartment when you asked me what I was afraid of. You remember? That gut-wrenching, breath-stealing, piss your pants kind of fear? The kind real nightmares are made of?" Caleb shoved him again, but this time it held no heat, only resolution. "This is it, Deuce." He released him, took a slow step away. "This. Is. Fucking. It." you know, i read this three times now, and three times i cried...
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 9
"On why I'm the melty middle of a Winchester sandwich?" this is definitely one of my favorite line from the whole Brotherhood...
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing this story. I'm never sure when I post things here whether people have read them, or they have grown tired of it already. <bg>
Reviewer: Rochelle (Signed) · Date: 25/06/08 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 6
update :]
Author's Response: I do try to be quick. I hope it is worth the wait! I'll be posting a new story on Saturday.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/06/08 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
awesome opening chapter. awesome story btw. that i will re-read. while waiting for Edge of the Winter...
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