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Reviews For Car Trouble
Reviewer: SamGirl2011andBeyond (Signed) · Date: 28/04/12 01:45 AM · On: Epilogue

Love that they have each other's backs.



Author's Response:

Thanks for that, Laina.

This was my second story I'd ever written, and my first attempt at a humour one. But it sort of morphed into a bit of humour and a bit of drama, so I just let the story take me where it would. 

I find writing a very organic process at times. I start out with an idea or a scene, or perhaps a bit of dialogue, and then build the story around that. Sometimes it takes me strange places before the ending, which is usually not too much different from how I first imagined it. This one was a bit like that. I had the idea for the Impala to be possessed by a ghost and to chase Dean, and the poltergeist in the theatre grew from that. 

Glad you liked it.

Jules

Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 06/07/10 01:41 PM · On: Epilogue

 

 Eh' I think that ghost came alive through your story. Shot me in the heart with a candy bar.

I feel all sticky sweet inside!

Aw....this is going in my favorites...

Very special story! I ate it up...

One hundred percent pure Winchester!

Thanks friend of mine!

Karen

 



Author's Response:

Eh! Oh, gosh, you did hit an early one, didn't you? This was I think my second story - I still had a lot to learn back in those days.

I've been tempted to go back and fix the old ones up, but my aunt keeps telling me to leave them alone - lol. 

So glad you liked this one, too, my friend. Hmm, where will the tornado drop you next, I wonder...?

Jules

Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 06/07/10 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 4

Dude, you're tooting my horn all kinds of cool...with this story.

Pun always intended!

Karen

Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 06/07/10 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 3

OH, Dean won't be running for long.

Nobody steals Baby and lives to joke about it.

 This is super great. Should be filmed award!

Two thumbs up,

Karen

Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 06/07/10 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 2

Boo!

Tricked you! My tornado landed me here instead. He he...giggles.

 This is adorable. Food fighting ghosty...what a crack up!

Karen

Reviewer: trickie (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 11:00 AM · On: Epilogue

Great story Jules, 

Dean up in a tree thinking his brother's spirit was in the car. Lol- just loved that, and him promising not to have sex in the backseat while Sam's spirit was in the car. Perfect!

"gathering your nuts..." epic. 

can't wait to read the rest of your stories.

Trace

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 03:01 AM · On: Epilogue

Awwwwww, Dean likes Sammy's chick music. ;P

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 5

I just got one word for this chapter..HILARIOUS! I was snorting and giggling through the whole thing! *rubs aching cheeks* The whole part with Sam under the car! The end when they're both afraid of getting into the car! *rolls around on the floor laughing* ;D

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 4

OH GOD!!!! You can't just run Sam over and leave it there! That's evil! Evil I tell you! Really really evil!....Good think I can just hit next  to see the rest. ;P

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

I just gotta tell you here, cuz I will totally forget later. I think you're Sam and Dean are so close to the real ones, it isn't even funny. Kay, there, I said it....so...yeah. ;P

Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 01:20 PM · On: Epilogue

I feel that you will be bored when I say the same stuff over and over again.  I really like your stories.  I cry, I smile, I enjoy and read some more.  Thanks

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

lol...loved that last line!! Devonshire just gave me the link to this story and it looks great so far!! thanks for the awesome read!! look forward to reading more! bambers;)

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 5

I just have to say that this was an enjoyable story which i read and have come back to review. The part where Dean called Sam from the tree and then when sam called back...that whole conversation just made me laugh. But my favorite part had to be hands down the beginning of this chapter when dean thought sam was disembodied and became a part of the car. totally made me LMAO!!! awesome job.

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 18/06/07 01:35 PM · On: Epilogue

Hahaha!  "How about which friggin tree you decided to roost in, for starters!'  Haha priceless!

Hope Kripke consider this as one of the standalone humor episodes in Season 3!

I actually liked the participation of the Impala, being valuable to Dean and all!

Thanks for writing this story!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 09:33 PM · On: Epilogue

Hey, loved the story, sorry I didn't review chapter by chapter but I ran out of time.  Great job though - Thanks for the read - K

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 15/03/07 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 2

Haha! A food fight and an attack by electrical appliances! You do a great job with the description, it is very easy to visualise the action.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 15/03/07 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

Amateur hour is certainly over once the Winchesters arrive! Great first chapter

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 19/02/07 08:41 AM · On: Epilogue

I loved the way this story ended.  Sam and Dean have a speical bond that not many people have and you seem to have capture that perfectly.  Great Job!  :)

Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/07 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh man, what a cliffhanger.  You have to update quickly.  I am on the edge of my seat here!!!

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/07 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 4

You can not just leave a chapter end like that!!!!!!!!!!  You are killing me here, More up dates soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Reviewer: Freaky chix (Signed) · Date: 17/02/07 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 2

That was sooo good. U r gonna wright more right?

 

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/07 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 2

This chapter was so funny.  I loved the fact that they were abused by food.  The ending was the best where Dean is standing in a parking lot in just his underware while his car drives away.  Poor guy that must of killed him.  Ha Ha

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