I liked this very much, I smiled my way through it and yes I do agree with your sister it needs a follow up. I want to know exactly how Dean gets released from Dept H and restored to Sam and more about Bela's part in things.

I've yet to see the last 2 episodes of season 3 so if the answer about Bela was in there, forgive my ignorance.

I will be looking out for more of your writing. 

 

Author's Response:

Very kind words, thanks very much!

All I will say is, once you've seen the last two parts of s3, all will (kinda) become clear - or as clear Mr Kripke wants it!

Ta again for taking the time to leave a comment - and stars we like. Stars are good - better than pie!

 

YES! Please give us a follow up. 

What a wonderfully creative take on the Dean Deal. Where to begin. All the way through you had me howling with laughter. Referring to the Bible as a "best-selling book" -- awesome.

"The Puppy’s Privates" ??? Is that actually an expression? You Brits are weird. LOL. Wonderful touch with the Big G getting Dean's name wrong throughout.

You wove a masterful tale, sheer genius! I could go on and on about every little thing I loved about this story, but I think I'll just go read it again and again. :)

--cricket 

 

Author's Response:

I almost wrote "the dog's bollocks" and then thought it was a little rude to refer to Him that way, LOL ~ maybe I should have used "the cat's pyjamas"?

 

Ta for your review and energetic response - you really know how to make a girl feel special, LOL!