Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 08/12/08 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 8
This was just delightful. I've avoided it since I started reading your stuff because for some reason Dean's Hell-deal stuff upsets me (can't imagine why), so I usually only read fanfic stuff from pre-series, or up to and including seasons 1&2. I'm a baby, I know, but I seriously feel awful inside whenever I think about Dean's deal, even after knowing how it works out in season 4. I really did love this, though. Funny how close you were, eh? Your characterization of the beaurocracy of Heaven and Hell was just hilarious. Having lived a short stint in England, I TOTALLY get where that comes from. lol. I mean, serioiusly, Douglas Adams was making a serious statement with the whole Hitchhikers' Guide thing. But it worked in such a funny way for this fic. I also loved how touching it was in parts, how you hinted at Dean having a greater purpose than being just Sam's protector. I especially loved the hundreds of letters from people (especially women) pleading to have Dean released from Hell. I take it they were actually prayers of some kind? Just awesome. I haven't added you to my list of favourite authors yet, which is stupid because you're one of my top favs.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 07/12/08 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh you are a cheeky one, aren't you? This was just delightful.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 8
Looking forward to your next "off the waller" This one was pretty damned good. I especially liked the early chapters with Michael and him kicking big bad demons into submission, only to get himself kicked by Dean. That was just so funny. Give yourself a big pat on the back for writing something so innovative and funny.
Author's Response: Thanks very much for ploughing through all of it, it can't be that bad if so many people have managed to get through all the chapters. Thanks again!
Reviewer: seamonkey (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 8
well done! great story thanks so much.. seamonkey
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so happy a few people managed to get through all the chapters! Thanks for your time and review. And stars!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 8
Great ending , it was great that the brothers were o.k with each other Thanks for writing it.
Author's Response: No, no, no - thank you for reading it. :) Very much appreciated - and your time to leave a comment. :)
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 8
Great wrap up to this story. Really sad to see it come to an end. For whatever crazy reason, I really liked the parts where they'd be in the middle of something--of talking or whatever--and Dean would just drift. I also really liked the part where Sam was mad at Dean and yelling at him--thinking that he was purposely doing some of the things just to annoy him--and then it dawns on Sam that Dean ISN'T doing it on purpose. The way you portrayed Dean's reactions to being yelled at and Sam's realizations was terrific.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's good to know the parts people remember the best, or like the best. Ta! Thanks for making it through to the end!
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 8
Awww, it's over? It can't be over. I don't want it to be over. This sucks. The "it being over" part, not the story. So Dean's gonna have a smackdown with Xaphan, huh? You know what they say about payback. But Sam still could use a good asskicking. Total buzzkill. Loved it and can't wait for more of your stuff.
Author's Response: Woah, thanks very much! Thanks for reading all the way through and thanks for leaving a review! Hmm.... a demon smackdown.... No! No! Must not think about that - I have another on the go already! :)
Reviewer: nurple_girl (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 8
At first I wasn't going to read this story - out of my normal likes. But I have to admit it really grew on me and you're writing was awesome that I really enjoyed it. Thank you! Gee, you could almost have a sequel....
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! That's a really big complement that will make me smile all day. And ta for the stars!
Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 8
That was an awesome way to end it. Too bad it's over though I loved the humour and the wit. Looking forward to the other "off-the-waller"!
Author's Response: Thanks for the stars! I'm quite sad to see this one finished - it kinda grew on me, I think! But I do have that off-the-waller coming very soon! Thanks again!
Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 8
Excellent! Very much enjoyed this one.
Author's Response: Thanks! Much appreciated :)
Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 8
When I first started reading this I didn't think I would like it but it really got me hooked! It was so different and the dialogue was the best!!! Great job!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with it! Glad you enjoyed. :)
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 8
*returns wicked grin* I loved this Toza. From start to finish, you had me rolling on the floor laughing, sometime crying, often sighing (longing for Dean), and just plain grinning. :) This line gave me a lovely vision of Jensen in my head as I read it. (highlight of my evening) It was a secret smile, exactly like the one he had used at just ten years old, shushing six year old Sammy the night they had colluded to steal the cookie jar from the top of a father-guarded fridge at 11pm.
Glad you decided against a one-shot! Looking forward to many more off-the-wallers from you. I love your sense of humor! (or should I spell it humour for ya?) --cricket
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you - what a comment! I'm just glad you found it good enough to follow all the way through! Ta, love. Much appreciated - I guess a sense of humo(u)r is a sense of humo(u)r however you spell it, LOL Thanks!
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
haha. yep. definately still addicted. will probably go into withdrawal with the last chapter. it's been good ride. i loved that all three of them had a rough time with Dean returning...and i loved Dean's reaction to being back and seeing things for the first time. nothing taken for granted.
Reviewer: seamonkey (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 7
dean needs to prank sam ..sam needs to lighten up thanks for continuing this one shot ..enjoy it muchly seamonkey
Author's Response: Now that's an idea and a half right there, LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 7
I'm actually enjoying that both brothers are having a tough time dealing with Dean's coming back. At the very least, it would be very disconcerting all the way around. Wonderful chapter.
Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 7
"Stop touching things and licking things and sniffing things and moaning to yourself!" Sam cried. "You've been doing it all day! It's freaking me out! It's obscene!" Hahahahahahaha! Awesome as always!
Author's Response: I thank you, LOL!
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 7
Sam has got to seriously chill out. What does it matter if Dean remembers hell? I would think it'd be a good thing if he didn't. And Dean is happy. Leave the poor resurrected guy alone!!
Author's Response: I'm with you on this one. Sam has to learn, though. Only one person deserves to put him in his place, too... Ta for keeping up with this!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 7
Fantastic chapter, I loved (Old Chap) Michael, showing up again, Looking forward to the next update, will Dean remember his time in hell and share with Sam? Keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response: Yes ma'am! Working as fast as I can on the last one.... Ta for following it all!
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 6
oh wow, toza, you keep blowing me away with every word. hmmm, calling God's archangel a 'lying bastard' was ... inspired :) and your description of Dean's happy dance was so vivid, i had the urge to slap on the ac/dc CD and play 'back in black' so i could join our boy in a mad frolic about the room! this story is pure brilliance. it'll be sad to see it end, but nonetheless i'm looking forward to the next chapter with great eagerness. keep 'em coming toza! --cricket
Author's Response: Awww, thanks! New chapter coming very soon, as long as my ISP doesn't cut me off again... Thanks for ploughing through it all, and reviewing!
Reviewer: jdsreignsupreme (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 5
I have always believed that Dean needed to know he is more appreciated than he thinks he is or deserves to be.......gorgeous boy
Author's Response:
Thanks for the glowing reviews - you seem to get my sense of humour, I think I like you too! ROFL I must admit, I think I'm having too much fun writing this one. And it came out of nowhere - I just wrote the first chapter as a one-shot and never dreamed I'd end up adding all the rest! So glad I did though... Thanks for reading! Your reviews have made my day!
Reviewer: jdsreignsupreme (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 3
*Smug twat*....hysterical!!!!! I absolutely love the way you have turned Heaven and Hell into offices full of workers doing what normal offices do......and the crack about the Apple computers was brilliant. You have a wicked sense of humour. I think I like you!!!! Vicki
Reviewer: jdsreignsupreme (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
I am currently re-reading your story. I had to.......I spent so much time laughing through the first reading that I didn't read it properly. This has been an absolutely delightful story. I hope you don't lose the humour for the rest of it, either. Thank you very much Vicki
Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 6
I loved your crazy Dean! I was laughing so hard I had to keep on wiping tears from my eyes so I could see my computer screen. Your writing style is brilliant, how you can seamlessly go from funny to sombre is a talent. Looking forward to more, as always!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you... I didn't know if ecstatic!Dean was going to be too much, hut hey, I'd put him through, well, Hell, and thought he deserved a little uptime, LOL I'm going to be glowing from your compliments all day... And stars! Thank you!!
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 6
The first half or so of this chapter was just so funny but then it started to sadden me. Dean remembering most of hell but none of heaven.
Author's Response: Thanks for coming back to it! Don't worry, it picks up again...
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 6
A very moving chapter Dean had seemed so O.k but he's not really, it was really moving, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! It'll all come out in the next chapter... Ta for reading!
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