Reviewer: BoojieGirl (Signed)
20/06/08 01:34 PM · On:
Thank god for pinched nerves! (sorry you had to suffer though)
Awesome, awesome story. Loved every word. I could picture that dumb, blank stare with that quirky grin on Dean's face through the whole thing as I read it. Fabulous!
Thanks! And I know - it's weird what I can come up with while suffering a little. Hopefully I don't go there too often - pinched nerves flaming hurt!!!!
Chuffed that you loved it. And yes, the visual - I had a similar picture of Dean in my head while I was writing it, and then my awesome aunt created that banner, and it just captured him perfectly....Jules
Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed)
20/06/08 11:21 AM · On:
Well, as you know I loved this one. Laughed all the way through and you totally had Dean's voice down, and Sam's for that matter. I am of course now forever going to think of Sam as Tickle Me Emo *shakes head* Brilliant story, as always :)
Author's Response: Thanks Michaela. Yes, I know you did. Thank you for being a bit of a test audience - lol. Tickle Me Emo - *giggle, snort*... poor Sammy. And don't forget the tinfoil hat...*grins*...Jules
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed)
20/06/08 11:17 AM · On:
Thank you so much for a laugh. It seems lately the only time I do laugh is with some of the stories here. Dean holding a conversation with his reflection, toasting it. Just too good.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm really pleased it made you laugh, as was intended. Hope it brightened your day a little bit. I like playing with the lighter moments sometimes...Jules
Reviewer: TozaBoma (Signed)
20/06/08 10:06 AM · On:
I effing love this! I've read it twice, and it keeps getting funnier!
Great job, excellent banter, brilliant concussion-babble, brilliant everything!
I am arranging a Chinook to air-lift the hyowj containers of cookies I need to ship to you for this.
A Chinook? Wow... It will have to land down the street, as I only have a tiny backyard - ROFL!
Thank you so much for that. Glad you loved it so much. I love Dean's humour, and I take full advantage every chance I get to throw some into a story. I must admit, this was fun to write, and see just how crazy I could get wtih Concussed!Dean and still keep him vaguely on track.....Jules
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed)
20/06/08 09:38 AM · On:
That was hilarious.i loved it.
I'm looking forward to the ghost story.
Author's Response: Thank you for that. Had to have a break between the angsty ghost story and the angsty Ripple Effect. Glad you loved it...Jules
Reviewer: fredo (Signed)
20/06/08 08:17 AM · On:
absolutely hilarious Jules! So many good lines... And Death by Chocolate? miam!! Though i need chocolate now...
and next week a boring old fashioned ghost story?! yeah well, why not, i'll take a look at it, maybe, if it's twisted enough...
Thank you my friend. Um - hopefully not boring - lol. And it will have a bit of a twist to it.
Man, I'm a bad influence on you - in the space of a few months I've had you adopting strange carpets, wanting barbecued ribs, breakfast, and now Death By Chocolate? I'll have to stop mentioning food - LOL...Jules
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed)
20/06/08 06:47 AM · On:
Oh, I just loved this! I laughed most of the way through it though there were two parts where I got choked up--Dean confiding in his reflection about Sammy's death being #1 on his list and then again at the end with the tinfoil hat comment.
Wonderful, wonderful story, Mizpah!
Thank you Vanessa - and please call me Jules - everyone does, including my boss.
Glad you got a laugh out of it. I had a couple of chuckles when I was writing it - was that bad? Dean is such fun to play with...Jules
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed)
20/06/08 06:39 AM · On:
OMG Jules, I was cracking up when I read this. I had to laugh out loud. Isn't it weird what you can come up with when you are reduced to letting your mind wander around... :) ?
Dean waving at his reflection in the mirror? Just priceless! Loved this little oneshot. Thanks for sharing this great read with us.
Thanks, Dagmar. It is weird - never know what my mind is going to come back with...or if it's going to come back....*chews fingernails*...
Glad you liked it. I have a couple more humour ones in the WIP folder. They'll be ready for posting at some stage and trotted out, hopefully in the not too distant future...Jules
Reviewer: bayre (Signed)
20/06/08 06:34 AM · On:
Great one shot Jules.
Death by Chocolate....yummm....my favorite!
Author's Response: Thanks Laura. You're a braver soul than I am - had Death By Chocolate once, and got about half way through the slice before I had to push it away. Talk about chocolate overload! Think I spent the rest of the afternoon bouncing off walls in an extreme sugar rush - lol!...Jules
Reviewer: Taliena (Signed)
20/06/08 06:28 AM · On:
Fantastic story, Mizpah! I was killing myself laughing - tears and all - especially during the first half. Loved it all. You capture the boys and their relationship so well. Awesome!
Thank you - and please feel free to call me Jules.
Well, that pleases me that I could make you laugh out loud. Means I did my job properly. And of course, the boys do give me such good stuff to work with...Jules
Reviewer: lam (Signed)
20/06/08 06:03 AM · On:
Ah Jules! I've missed you! Not that you've been gone, but I have been awol.... Great story, as always... I wish my concussions were this amusing! Loved all the internal dialogue. I LOVED that you used Signs! I love that movie - just saw the latest M. Night S. movie - pretty good - but I think Signs is my favourite (my freaky roof dude in Dark and Stormy? toally ripped off the alien standing on the roof in Signs...). Love these brotherly moments - I trust Kripke, but I'm worried about how he is going to change the dynamic between the brothers next season.... We may all go back to writing Season 1 and 2 fics! Did I mention I loved this? Promise to go back and catch up on what I've missed and will definitely make a point to try to come to the site on Fridays for your updates! You're my hero - you're soooo reliable!
Lisa!!!!!!!!!! Welcome back!!!!
You have been sadly missed. And here's me being all slack and not sending you an email to find out where you've been hiding. Sorry hon. Alzheimer's....
Oh, don't I wish? I had a mild concussion once, and I don't remember much of anything except wanting desperately to curl up and go to sleep - lol. Ahh, I remember freaky roof dude...*shivers*...
I'm a bit worried too. I know that it is inevitable that Dean will be changed by his experience, but I just hope the relationship isn't fractured beyond repair. Am growing my fingernails just so I have something to chew off...
Aww, thanks for that...*blushes*...Jules
Reviewer: Janger (Signed)
20/06/08 05:05 AM · On:
Mizpah, that was wonderful! I'm sitting here with a huge grin plastered over my face and tears of laughter in my eyes. (Makes a nice change after all the other tears I've shed reading Dean in Hell!)
"Now he's gonna hover over me. I'm gonna suffer Death By Hovering. Kid should get a chopper pilot's licence, way he hovers all the time." Awesome!
Wonder whether he'd twang if I flicked him."What the hell was that for?"He didn't twang.
Thanks to Deans descriptive narrative I can picture Sam so clearly. You have captured the boys perfectly and at their hilarious best!
This is one story I will be revisiting many times in the future. I loved every last word. Thank you so much for making my day. Jane
Thank you Jane. And I know what you mean about the other tears. Here in Australia we haven't seen the finale yet, but me being me - I peeked at the video clips on sn.tv in the media gallery. So I am arming myself with boxes of tissues in preparation for this Sunday night - 29th of June, which is when the finale screens.
Ahh, you liked the hovering and the twanging - *grins*...
I'm so glad you loved it, and that it brightened your day a little. A ittle bit of laughter makes the day go that much easier...Jules
Reviewer: Little Lottie Brittenden (Signed)
20/06/08 05:04 AM · On:
This is a great and funny story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for that. I do like doing the humour ones, I must admit. Just lightens the mood a little....Jules
Reviewer: jdsreignsupreme (Signed)
20/06/08 02:28 AM · On:
That was so totally excellent!!!!!
Thank you so much. The weather has been cloudy and overcast all day and it was making me feel the same way. But your story has brightened me up considerably.
I have tears and my dogs think I'm crazy. It seems to me that you had Dean down pat!! I can totally imagine him saying those things and acting that way.
Author's Response: No problem, Vicki - I'm over the moon that you enjoyed it so much. The weather here has been a bit funny - and we had a storm this afternoon just as I was posting on the other site - I can't believe we're having a thunderstorm in the middle of winter! Kicked me off the computer when we lost power. So glad I was able to give you a laugh for the day. As for pets thinking you're crazy, well, my cat knows I'm cracked - LOL...Jules
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed)
20/06/08 01:42 AM · On:
Hahahahaha.......i love the first part of your story!!! Dean when concussed or out of his mind!!!!! i think he's usually so lovable when he's like that! :)
Author's Response: LOL - thanks for that hon. But you know I'm a little bit biased - I think Dean's loveable no matter what frame of mind he's in - unless he's really got his cranky nappy on...*hides under desk*... Thanks for the review - glad I could make you laugh...Jules