Reviewer: WendyLee (Signed)
17/03/11 08:04 PM · On:
This was hilarious! I could picture Dean talking to his reflection and Sams face as he is trying to get Dean patched up. Great story, thanks!
Aww, thanks for that, Marcia.
And welcome to the site, by the way. Hope you'll have a great time here - it really is a readers' paradise.
I'm thrilled that you could get the picture of the boys while they walk through the worst of Dean's concussion - lol. It was a fun little one-shot to write - well, apart from the pinched nerve that is. Strange how some of my better ideas are borne out of pain or a bout of the flu......*scratches head in confusion*....
Anyway, thanks again for stopping by and letting me know what you thought. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.
Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed)
14/03/10 04:47 PM · On:
Of to read more.
Thank you so much. Sarah (my beta, Ziggy) told me she'd given you a link for me.
I can't join ff.net - I've tried three times and each time it's failed to go through, and since I'm a bit of a believer in omens, I'm taking that as three strikes and I'm out.....
But I just wanted to say that I've been a very happy lurker in your pages. I adored Bumbles Don't Bounce They Bite and quite a few others. I've even printed out some of my favourites, including Bumbles, and added them to my little pile of nighttime reading. So thank you for sharing your stories.
And welcome to UnGen - I hope that you derive hours of pleasure trolling through the pages. There are some truly awesome writers on this site, and it's a pretty nice place to hang out, too.
Reviewer: karmyn31 (Signed)
03/11/09 03:44 PM · On:
One of my favorites. Funny and yet it reveals so much of Dean's personality. Great story.
Thank you for that. I had a great time roaming around inside Dean's concussed head - so glad that you liked what I dragged out of there.
Thank you again, and thank you for the pretty stars. *puts them in pocket for a rainy day*...
Reviewer: birdie (Signed)
15/01/09 11:53 AM · On:
I'm reading your back catalogue (Thanks Petra for the recommendation!) and I came across this gem!
Slightly befuddled Dean is soooo sweet and adorable partially because we know how embarassed he's gonna be when he remembers.
You nailed him here, and Sam's reactions to her were lovely.
Really enjoyed the lightness and laughter. Bev xx
Hi, again, Bev,
The back catalogue? Oh, my gosh, I hope you're not going to be too disappointed - some of the earlier stuff was rough.....
Befuddled Dean is even more gorgeous than Normal Dean, isn't he? If that's even possible.... So chuffed that you loved it. I just ran with this idea - well, my muse did - I was sort of stuck on the lounge with a hot water bottle at the time. I thought - let's go fishing inside Dean's head and add a concussion to the mix. There was lots of good stuff in there for me to play with - LOL....Jules
Reviewer: Hollis (Signed)
04/01/09 09:22 PM · On:
Omg! I can't breathe, now i think i can survive school tomorrow, it's exactly what i needed. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm sorry I'm a bit late getting to the replies - I tend to become a bit of a hermit at times, and stay in my cave - lol. So pleased that you got a good laugh out of this little bit of craziness. And thanks again for your review - they are gold to me.....Jules
Reviewer: luvsamanddean (Signed)
28/12/08 01:12 PM · On:
Hi Jules! This was great! Loved how Dean was trying to tell his reflection what had happened (that handsome devil!) and kept getting lost. The part about Sam's dying made me cry. Then I was laughing again. Wonderful job but so sorry you had to be in pain to get it. Must be an easier way. :D
I had fun writing this....well, I did once the painkillers kicked in - LOL. I just thought - how crazy can I get inside Dean's scrambled head, and ran with it. So chuffed that you enjoyed it. I like the humour stuff - it tends to lift the spirits....Jules
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed)
24/11/08 06:47 PM · On:
Someone recommended this over on the Vaults- and I'm sooo glad I checked it out.
I really needed to read something light- especially since the end of Heaven and Hell is still haunting me.
Thanks for some lighthearted- goofy as only Dean can be- Dean.
Great story- no wonder it won best humor.... (*high five*)
Author's Response: Someone recommended this? Wow.... Thank you, Patrice. I really appreciate your taking the time not only to read, but to review. This story was one of those moments when I let my mind wander and it came back dragging this story idea. Luckily it came back... Oh, thank you - actually, it tied for Best Humour over on SN.tv - um...it actually tied with The A To Z Of Demonology - written by - me (how embarrassing - I tied with myself!) This one just sneaked in, actually, to the nominations - the first round was stuffed up, so they ran it again, and this had just been posted. Just one of those serendipitous things - thanks again....Jules
Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed)
10/09/08 04:30 PM · On:
What? No pie? oh well I guess cake will have to do.
Author's Response: Lol - yep, no pie. Although with the S4 second episode, I believe my theory about Dean and avoiding pie just took a nosedive...*sigh*.... Anyway, hope you enjoyed this little bit of craziness....Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed)
09/09/08 05:52 AM · On:
"Dude - you gonna cut up my food, too?"
"You want me to?"
"You want to be able to sit down for the next week?"
"Good point. Cut your own food."
"Damned rock -"
"...rock - almost split my skull wide open."
"At least the printer missed you - the poltergeist threw that after the paperweight."
I am telling you I can't stop laughing and I can see it actually happening. Very COMEDIAN like.
I don't really know if there is a word to judge this compistion. I love it. My Rating is:) 600 ++++++ if you dont'like it, please e-mail me: firstname.lastname@example.org
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I just sort of let my mind wander - sort of like Dean's, actually - and this is what it came back with. Thankfully it did come back...*rolls eyes*.... I do love the humour in the boys' banter, and I sneak in a bit every chance I get. Thanks so much for that awesome review...Jules
Reviewer: Bitos (Signed)
08/08/08 04:45 PM · On:
That was really funny! awesome job!
Author's Response: Thanks for that. It was fun to play inside Dean's head for a while - lots of good stuff in there - ROFL...Jules
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed)
08/07/08 10:39 AM · On:
I love the little banter at the end. Good one-shot. :).
Author's Response: Thanks so much for that. Glad you liked it - I hope it brought a smile to your face....Jules
Reviewer: kwater (Signed)
30/06/08 09:29 AM · On:
Jules I have to appologize, I read this last monday, only moments before heading off to a week of volunteer work at church and forgot to come back and leave a review...So here I am.
I absolutely loved this one, very funny and I totally have had convos like that with myself, though alcohol was usually a large factor rather than a concussion....too frickin' funny. ;) Kel
That's all right, Kel - I usually do a hit-and-run before work, and then by the time I come home I forget what I haven't left a review for - lol.
Glad you loved it. I must admit, it was quite fun getting inside Dean's addled brain for awhile - took me out of my own addled one....unfortunately I can't blame a collision with a rock...*rolls eyes*...Jules
Reviewer: penmin (Signed)
26/06/08 10:26 AM · On:
Good one again.
Author's Response: Thank you for that. I felt I just needed a laugh between the angsty stories - and of course, the season finale....Jules
Reviewer: cheri (Signed)
24/06/08 11:37 AM · On:
This was very nice; I really enjoyed reading it!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it. Everyone needs a good chuckle now and then...Jules
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed)
22/06/08 03:13 AM · On:
*Big smile on face* Fantastic! I loved the stream of consciousness patter from the concussed Dean! all the weird and wacky things that pop into his head. even the tinfoil hats (SHINY SIDE OUT!) from Signs; every last thing had me chuckling, laughing, snorting even! Loved the banter, and now I'm dreaming of a Death by Chocolate cake. mmmmmm.
Thanks Cricket! Have no idea why the tinfoil hats popped into my head - must have been the painkillers - LOL. That was one seriously creepy movie, wasn't it? *shivers*...
Ooh, I have had Death by Chocolate once - I couldn't eat all of the portion - waaaaaayy too rich, even for a dedicated chocoholic....Jules
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed)
22/06/08 12:15 AM · On:
LOL! That was totally awesome! We loved the 'hovering' comments. hahahahahahahahahahaha! Thanks for another great story! (And we hope you feel better soon!)
~A and K
Author's Response: Thank you both. Ahh, the hovering - well, he does rather have a tendency to hover, doesn't he? In a cute way, of course! Thanks, and I've gotten over the pinched nerve thankfully. Glad you liked this little bit of randomness....Jules
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed)
21/06/08 05:31 PM · On:
Wow, this is amazing. Dean's point of view in two totally different styles, both effective and in character. Funny as Dean's current residence, with occasional chick flick thoughts to boot. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks Sue. I'm chuffed that you enjoyed it. It's sort of sandwiched in between two angsty stories, as I needed a bit of a break and a bit of light relief. And we can always count on Dean to lighten the mood....Jules
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed)
21/06/08 12:34 AM · On:
Loved it!!! Dean talking to himself....what a riot! I liked it so much I shared this one with my coworker. I'm sure she'll love it too!!LOL
Author's Response: Aww, thank you for that! It's always nice to have a poke around inside Dean's head - well, most of the time....lol...Jules
Reviewer: theldybg4u (Signed)
21/06/08 12:28 AM · On:
that is so funny
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you got a laugh out of it. It was a fun piece to write....Jules
Reviewer: birdie (Signed)
20/06/08 04:52 PM · On:
Loved this.Funny and smart and quirky and so true to the boys. Nice job and thanks for sharing. bev xx
Author's Response: Thanks Bev. I love quirky - probably because I'm a bit quirky myself...lol. Thank you for coming along for the ride...Jules
Reviewer: riquitv (Signed)
20/06/08 04:41 PM · On:
ha ha, really really funny, it was so nice to see Dean talking to himself, great idea, i like your style :)
Author's Response: Bit of a departure from my usual style - it's not often that I get that far inside Dean's head- lol... But thank you - I'm pleased that it gave you a laugh....Jules
Reviewer: Rodymenia (Signed)
20/06/08 04:12 PM · On:
I love this story, Dean is adorable like this. I read this a few times today, it brightened my very yucky day.
Well, I'm really glad that it brightened your day. Good to know that the story did what I hoped it would. We all need the lighter moments to balance out the yucky stuff.
Oh, and I agree - Dean is adorable...well, I think he's adorable all the time, but I'm a bit biased - LOL...Jules
Reviewer: hgarf (Signed)
20/06/08 03:51 PM · On:
I am really sorry to hear that you wrote this whilst in pain but I have to say that it was brill!! Laugh out loud funny (which I did, several times, to the beusement of my hubby). You have made my day with this little tale so I salute you. x x x
Author's Response: Thanks for that - lol! I tend to come up with the weirdest things when I'm sick/in pain. Hmm....*scratches head worriedly*... Anyway, glad you enjoyed it, and I'm really chuffed that it made you laugh out loud. *does happy twirl on chair*....Jules
Reviewer: mtee (Signed)
20/06/08 03:04 PM · On:
That was cute. It's nice to get some down time from the whump and angst! Not alot of downtime though!!
Author's Response: Ahh, the angst! Well, angst is coming up in the next story, so I thought I'd have a wee break before I get into that one. And Dean gives me so much to work with in the humour department. Got to love Dean...Jules
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed)
20/06/08 02:13 PM · On:
WOW .... and WOW again!!!
this was totally hilarious!!! I've already read this twice , and I'll probably go back again-just tooooo funny.AWESOME WORK!!!!
the unending banter, the visually dancing verbage, the Winchester's way of trying to ignore any hurts while treating one another's wounds-.Excellent job!!
the timing here was beyond perfect- it just gets better each time I read it. You have totally surpassed yourself in excellence-BRAVO!!!!!
Dean taking to his reflection and totally keeping up with the words he is always throwing at Sammy went a notch beyond!!!!!
This was totally perfect in every way-an entire dinner of Winchester at it's finest!!!!!!!!
you have made my day with this one!!!!!!
ps- feel better soon.
Thanks hon - back's all better now. Just have to shake this cold....
Goodness me - thank you for that awesome review. I'm glad you loved it so much. Sometimes I just let my mind wander off, and see what it comes back with. I don't let it get too far, though - it might forget to come back and then I'd be up the creek without a paddle. But I must admit, I did have a couple of giggles myself while writing Dean's concussion-induced internal monologue...Jules