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Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed) · Date: 29/06/08 08:38 PM · On: Let Loose From The Noose

wow... I mean.... wow... like... WOW!
your writing, your vivid descriptions, the story line, everything is just... wow!
you my friend are an amazing author!

Author's Response: I have to return the wows. Thank you so much. That makes me unbelievably happy. I would do a happy dance but it's way too hot in here, even with the air conditioning. 32 degrees celsius. So I'm afraid I will melt. Lol. Thank you thank you thank you! ^_^

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 07:42 PM · On: Alea Iacta Est

Great chapter! A nice demon in Hell was quite a surprise.

Author's Response:
Thanks! I wasn't sure how people were going to feel about her, especially with the blood feeding. But I enjoyed writing her that small part, she's nice in her own way, she was helping Dean the only way she could. She wasn't able to help him escape but now I'm going to stop talking before I give something away.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 07:27 PM · On: Flectere Si Nequeo Superos Achaeronta Movebo

Yay Bobby!
Geez, five days and nights without water. At least heaven was mourning with him.

Author's Response:
Lol. I'm pretty sure a normal person might have died without water for that long. But Sam's not a normal person he's a Winchester, so he's going to suffer from dehydration! Yay! I'm so morbid. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 04:37 PM · On: Alea Iacta Est

Hey WynterSun. Great update. Was really anxious to read Dean's torment. Well done you! Could clearly picture him hanging there, being tortured. And the female demon. Owh. I love (uhm, you know) her. She is a great addition. The idea of her being the one to heal him by letting him drink her blood. I totally share Dean's view that she is the worst of 'em.
Now a few notes:
...eyes wide with silent agony blood dripping from his full lips, his voice trapped in his broken form... very angsty part. Unable to fight back, not even verbally. Poor, hurt!Dean.
...Don't you know you're more like your brother than you realize?... I wonder in what way. Well in the end notes you promise a special demonic gift. And I always thought that Dean would have something supernatural to guard him, to ward off death. Just think of all the times he nearly died. I put that down to his necklace. Looking forward to your explanation.
....his own personal clock ticking away, telling no time in this pit of timelessness... owh, I just love that line. Isn't hell eternal? And isn't it hell to live in contrasts? To be defined by contrasts? Time ticking away where there is no time. Very evocative and freaking me out a little. LIKE THAT!
Keep 'em coming! Oh, and don't be upset if I don't review in the next 2 and a half weeks. I am in the UK (away from home) und have no access to the internet. Bah! Frigging work. Don't get me wrong, I love England. It's just that I hate not being able to go online for that long...
Cheers, Ilka/RoweenaC

Author's Response:
Glad you think so, that's wonderful encouragement, I really think I do well writing torture scenes as opposed to happy things, but hey I might try my hand at comedy some day.
I honestly was dancing around the idea of whether or not I should have a demon "help" him or not. He was originally going to get free on his own with Sam's chanting empowering him, and find a way to escape that way with hellhounds on his butt. But then I decided it would be more intrigueing to see that there are still demons that are willing to follow Sam and therefore help Dean in any way they can. (Even though it doesn't really seem like she's helping, but I suppose demons have their own way of doing things).
I'm very delighted you've been enjoying the story so far. And don't worry about the two weeks, it's completely understandable and thanks for letting me know :)

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 02:54 PM · On: Alea Iacta Est

This is very interesting. I can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate it :)

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 02:21 PM · On: Alea Iacta Est

Excellent chapter and I'm eagerly awaiting more of the same.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Hopefully chapter three will be up by early next week.

Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 11:53 PM · On: Flectere Si Nequeo Superos Achaeronta Movebo

wow, already I think I'm really going to like this story, can't wait for your next chapter update soon!

Author's Response: Really? Every time I read something like that I giggle with glee, it's such a great encouragement to keep writing. Thank you!

Reviewer: latlk (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 11:24 PM · On: Flectere Si Nequeo Superos Achaeronta Movebo

A very promising start. I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! More is on its way!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 02:48 PM · On: Flectere Si Nequeo Superos Achaeronta Movebo

Short chapter but interesting enough to ask for more.

Author's Response: Sigh, yes I know it was short, but I really couldn't extend it without losing the impact. I'm very happy you found it interesting though, and the second chapter should be up next week. :)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 02:14 PM · On: Flectere Si Nequeo Superos Achaeronta Movebo

Very good.i loved it.
It's great that Bobby's came to help.

Author's Response: Thank you thank you! Be sure to look forward to more Bobby, because who can seriously get enough of that awesome hunter. lol.

Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 02:05 AM · On: Flectere Si Nequeo Superos Achaeronta Movebo

Hey there,
I am so glad you sent me an email to let me know!
I like this! And I am so flattered.
This was the best part. No, I have to get up. Have to. Have to see if. Have to find him... The way Sam forces himself beyond the pain and numbness (like that contrast!). Poor Sammy. He really would be obsessive enough to sit there for 5 days, in the rain. God, his bangs must have been plastered to his skull.
And then in the end Bobby shows up to help. I love that man so much. He is always there to support the Winchesters.
I have to admit you made me laugh at one point. Even tho this is a fairly sad and painful piece. But this: ...Build an ark kind of rain... just had me laughing!
Coooool. I inspired something like this.
Thanks, Ilka/RoweenaC

Author's Response:
Well it was the least I could do. I was worried no one would think that he would do that, but he did go all terminator in Mystery Spot so I thought if there was a chance he could get his brother back he would push himself to the limit and beyond.
Bobby just had to be there, he's dear to my heart and I don't think Sam or Dean will be able to make it through this without him (gasp, is that foreshadowing?)
I'm rather partial to that line and was giggling as I wrote it. I'm very glad you liked it, I feel so thrilled and overjoyed that you took the time to review and give me stars to boot.
Thank you!

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