Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 2 Pain
Man Gordon just keeps popping up in the worst places huh.....lol. Moving on - Kel ;)
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 1 Guilt
The brown, water stained wallpaper was peeling off the walls in a desperate attempt to escape the god awful room.
Loved this description....Great start to your story, I look forward to reading more - K
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 3 Bruised, Bloody, Broken
A little bit of torture is always good for the soul, well the writer's one anyhow. I really like how this story is shaping BUABS is a favourite of mine and they always did just leave the Wandel story hanging out there. I love that you brought Gordon in, he's such a delightful character, I'm glad he's not mad at me! Enjoying this, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you for dropping me a line. I am glad that you liked that I brought Gordon back. I wasn't sure if that would be a good move or not. Anyway, thanks again! ~Kayla
Reviewer: Lulu (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 2 Pain
good story, if you really want to make him suffer you really have to try electro torture, is so much fun, well is because i don't really like blood,
Author's Response: Electro torture, huh? Well I'll certainly have to consider that one. It is already giving me the chills! Sorry about the blood, but thanks Lulu so much for the review! ~Kayla
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 2 Pain
Nice start. What makes torture torture in my book is not knowing what's going to happen or how long its going to last with the total removal of hope being an important factor too. But as its your story, go with whatever scares you, lots of pain and blood works well, and I'm sure Sam and Dean will react appropriately.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the advice! I like hearing what other people's perspectives are, so that way I can adjust to get the readers more entranced. ;0). Thanks for the review, Midge! ~Kayla
Reviewer: danny (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 2 Pain
omg, update soon pleze, god hope he's alright and what is gordon doing there? You sure do have me hooked , you know that? Anyway just got to say i hate cliff hangers. But what a hell of a chapter. Love ya Danny xxxx
Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffhangers! I just am trying to get everyone to keep reading. lol. Yeah, Gordon was a surprise, even for me. I wasn't going to add him to this story, but now I have plans for him. Thanks for the review Danny! ~Kayla
Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 1 Guilt
Good start I love the middle bit, or second bit I guess, with the brotherly chat and how Dean's gorgeousness doesn't just happen. True Dean antics.
Author's Response: Yeah, I love writing Dean. He's so...quirky I guess is the word I would use. lol Thanks for the review! I hope you continue to like it! ~Kayla
Reviewer: kika (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 2 Pain
Ok... no death fic so.... PLEASE KEEP GOING!!!!
Author's Response: I'll keep it going, don't worry. I can't just put this on the back burner, and keep you in the dark! Anyway...thanks for reviewing again kika! ~Kayla
Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 2 Pain
I love this! I love Dean in brother mode and hurt Sam to rescue! Keep it coming; please!!!!!!
Author's Response: awww, thanks cheri! I should have one up by tuesday for sure. I'm glad that you are liking this! Thanks for leaving a great review! ~Kayla
Reviewer: kika (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 Guilt
GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!! keep going, please
Author's Response: lol. I'll try updating it as soon as possible. Another chapter maybe this weekend. Thanks for the review! ~Kayla
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 Guilt
Hi Nice start, poor Sammy, it's not looking good! I think your story and mine maybe have similar veins running through them (not to give too much away) so it will be interesting to watch how they both develop! It's looking good so far though! Mary x
Author's Response: Well, you know what they say, Great minds think alike! I had no idea that you were writing something like this. I can't wait to read yours! ~Kayla
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