Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 5 Strength, Regret, Guilt
Oh Sam! Damn it - Gordon has to be stopped! Get up Dean - save your brother.....Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 4 Say Goodbye
Evil, evil cliffie! I hope the ceiling falls on Gordon and knocks the knife out of his hands before he can hurt Sam any more.....Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 3 Bruised, Bloody, Broken
Poor Sammy.... That sod Gordon has to go down, and his misguided buddies with him. Hurry, Dean - find your brother! Really intense, Kayla - think I forgot to breathe when Joe brought up that sledgehammer....Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 2 Pain
Oh my gosh! Sam's in deep crap. Ooh - I hate Gordon Walker with a passion! The tension just went through the roof on this one now that that psycho has been added to the mix....Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 1 Guilt
Great start Kayla. Poor Sam - I hope that he will be given a chance to tell his side of things, but I suspect that these guys won't want to listen......Jules
Reviewer: sandy (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 6 Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
love it. i can't wait for mother hen dean.
Author's Response: Ah, yes....mother hen Dean is so fun to write! Thanks for reviewing! ~Kayla
Reviewer: mollieclarke1108 (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 6 Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
excellent chapter can't wait to read some more plz update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! ~Kayla
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 5 Strength, Regret, Guilt
Please, please, please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter. I can't stand even little cliff-hangers any more, especially with Sam blood dripping away and Dean chained up.
Author's Response: lol. I'll try my best to update within the next week. This writers block has gotten the best of me, but it won't keep me down! Thanks for the review midge! ~Kayla
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 5 Strength, Regret, Guilt
Not to much of a cliff hanger? Well, I think this is quite a cliffie. Sam's life is still hanging in the balance and Dean is weaponless. You better update this one soon. Hope you don't have another writers block. I sure love this story. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: lol, sorry vonnie. I just had to do the cliffhanger....I just had too! lol. I'll try to update asap. I'm actually working on it now. Hopefully the next one doesn't disappoint! Thank you for keeping with this story and for all the wonderful reviews. They make my heart smile. ~Kayla
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 5 Strength, Regret, Guilt
I liked the fight scene between Gordon and Dean. The continued torture of Sam definitely had me wincing. Good chapter! Writer's block is definitely a killer. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much supernatfem for all of your way too kind reviews. I'm glad you liked the fight scene because I loathe writing those. lol. Thanks again! ~Kayla
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 4 Say Goodbye
I like cliffhangers. Exciting chapter!
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 3 Bruised, Bloody, Broken
Another good chapter! I found myself flinching through Sam's torture scene.
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 2 Pain
Despite torture not being your thing, you did a good job with it. Having Gordon being one of the hunters was a brilliant idea. I can't wait to read Chapter 3.
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 Guilt
Good start! I had been thinking about doing this story a long time ago. I can't wait to see where you take it. Poor Sam!
Reviewer: danny (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 5 Strength, Regret, Guilt
love the story but hurry wiv the update need to now wot happens. I give u a big hug. Love Danny xxx
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Danny! I will try to write another chapter soon! ~Kayla
Reviewer: sooo me (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 4 Say Goodbye
helloAce33,listen,i've just read yr story and simply i loved it,i mean i felt it,so really really THANKS,it's just i'd be even more thankful if u read the following::1-U have 2 finish it (NOT SAM'S LIFE...2-at the begining of the story y said that Sam was "gagged",so how could he scream luodly,talk??...3-Joe slammed "gagged" Sam?sorry it just,i couldnt image it,i dont think it's real enough..4-also,"punching the pounded hands"with the sledgehammer ,really sorry ,just. couldnt help it....so that's it for now..oh,did i mention that u have to finish the masterpiece....KEEP SURPRIZING ME<<
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the review! 1) Don't worry, I fully intend to finish this story. 2) At the beginning of the story, Sam was gagged. He screamed against the gag, and they cut it off because they wanted to hear what his excuse was for killing Steve Wandell. So that's why he can talk...he doesn't have the gag on anymore. 3) I'm sorry, I don't understand what you mean about "Joe slammed "gagged" Sam." Otherwise I'd try to explain that to you also. 4) I'm not sure what you mean by "punching the pounded hands. My guess is that you meant to say bounded hands. Sam is tied up to a chair, with his arms tied in the back. Joe walked behind Sam, and hit them with the sledgehammer. I hope that answers some of your questions! Anyway, thanks again for your review. I hope I keep suprising you!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 4 Say Goodbye
Nice update Ace, can't wait to see how the boys are getting out of this one ;) Kel
Author's Response: Aww, thanks Kel! Yeah, the whole situation looks pretty bleak right now. I guess You'll just have to keep reading ;) ~Kayla
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 3 Bruised, Bloody, Broken
Great story, I'm a huge Dean fan myself and prefer him in the hot seat, but I don't mind if Sam gets a bit of torturing too, then Dean can get all big brother and rescue him, looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: I understand that Dean thing. I figured that Dean is being tortured mentally while Sam is being tortured physically. I'm glad you are looking forward to the next update. I'll try not to disappoint you! ~Kayla
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 4 Say Goodbye
Wow, you sure wrote another very intense chapter. this is awesome. I just feel horrible for poor Sam and now you leave it with another cliffie. Hope you will update soon, because you really torture me here. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 4 Say Goodbye
Wow, you sure wrote another very intense chapter. this is awesome. I just feel horrible for poor Sam and now you leave it with another cliffie. Hope you will update soon, because you really torture me here. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: aww, sorry Vonnie. I never really mant to torture you...well, maybe just a little. I'm sure that Sam will be okay. He's just got to go through more, that's all ;0) Thanks for another great review! ~Kayla
Reviewer: kika (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 4 Say Goodbye
Way to go!!! I'm completely hooked! Please, more!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi Kika....Yeah, I'm starting the next chapter tonight. I hope you enjoy the rest! ~Kayla
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 3 Bruised, Bloody, Broken
Wow, I can't wait for the next chapter. This is causing a lot of anxiety. Poor Sammy, now he probably thinks, he deserves the torture, because Gordon told him that it's his fault. And Dean trying to find him, boy he sounds, like he is out of his mind with worry. Hope you will update soon. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Thanks for your review Vonnie! I'll try to write something by Monday or Tuesday. Lots of craziness around here...anyway, thanks again! ~Kayla
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 3 Bruised, Bloody, Broken
Ok... you got my attention. I really HATE Gordon Walker, but the rest of the Waddell family is getting close to his HATE status also. Excellent writing!!!! I always find it interesting how cowards need a gang to pick on one person. Poor Sam is really hurting and the sub-humans are just enjoying his pain. Your vivid words make this chapter very real . OUTSTANDING writing. Dean and Bobby need to hurry up before there is nothing left of Sammy. You have an interesting style and it lends well to"seeing" the story unfold .Excellent!!!! MORE PLEASE BRAVO!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow...I think the OUTSTANDING writing is the ultimate compliment. You are making me blush here ReccaF! Really, thank you so much for this review, it makes me so happy to know that I grabbed your attention. ~Kayla
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 3 Bruised, Bloody, Broken
Ouch, poor Sam. Completely broken foot and hand (or maybe 2 hands) on top of a bullet wound in his shoulder. Definitely ouch! Dean and Bobby best hurry up and find him, or there won't be much left to find. Although my brain can think of ways to drag things out further without inflicting more damage. Frell where does my brain get these ideas?
Author's Response: haha, I got a few ideas up my sleeve. Yeah, I can't just let Sam off too easily. ;0) Hope you like the rest! ~Kayla
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 3 Bruised, Bloody, Broken
Love that you brought Bobby into it, gotta LOVE Bobby...lol. Thanks for the read and I look forward to more - Kel ;)
Author's Response: Thank you for all of your reviews. I love hearing what you think because you are one of the best writers here! I hope you continue to like it! ~Kayla
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