Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 7 He's a Winchester
Wow, you're now one of my favourite authors, I feel you kept the boys voices authentic, strong and consistent throughout. To me it's the most important ingredient, after all you are writing a supernatural story about Sam and Dean. Some very sweet moments such as Sam being Dean's pillow really added to the overall angst of the story. I was shouting at the screen for Dean to put and end to Gordon!!! - it was a plus cause I had to keep reading it... Overall a great story, with a positive ending. He's a Winchester after all. Thanks for sharing x
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for adding me as a favorite author. You made my day. I find it a little difficult to channel Dean....In the face of danger, he is still witty, but his concern is still completely focused on his brother. It's a bit hard to balance those two sides of him. But thanks for the compliment! You are just too nice! Thanks for the review! :D ~Kayla
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/09 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 7 He's a Winchester
I really enjoyed this one. You have a real talent. I hope you continue to write and post.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review my story! Lately I have had a horrible case of writers block, but I do have a couple ideas in mind. Thanks again! ~Kayla
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 23/02/09 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 7 He's a Winchester
Good ending. I just knew everything would work out alright.
Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews throughout this story! You are so sweet! I hope you check out my other stories! ~Kayla
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 23/02/09 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 6 Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
The end is just so heart-breaking.I feel for Dean. I just hope that Sam wakes up and recovers quickly.
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 23/02/09 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 5 Strength, Regret, Guilt
Sam! I feel so sorry for Sam and Dean. I hope that they kill Gordon.
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 23/02/09 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 4 Say Goodbye
I am happy that Dean found Sam. But is it in time? I really don't like Gordon. This is good.
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 23/02/09 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 3 Bruised, Bloody, Broken
This chapter is good. I know Dean and Bobby will find Sam in time.
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 23/02/09 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 2 Pain
I feel so sorry for Sam nd I hope it's nothing too serious. I wonder who the person with the gun was.
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 23/02/09 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 1 Guilt
This is relly good. I love how you started and finished. It's brilliant. I feel sympathy for Sam and I hope he doesn't get hurt too badly.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 7 He's a Winchester
Sorry, Kayla - I lost track of this one. Saw it on the Just Added list, but my hands were playing up and I filed it away to review when the pain subsided a little. And then my mind went elsewhere and I completely forgot.....*holds out hand to be smacked*.... Lovely scene when Sam woke up and found Dean using him as a pillow. And very typical that he wouldn't talk about his nightmares and worry his big brother even more than Dean already was. He's still got a long way to go, but as Dean said, he's a Winchester. Jules
Author's Response: Oh Jules, don't worry about not reviewing! How are you feeling now? Better I hope! Thank you for reviewing! :D I tried very hard to get the brotherly feel to that scene. I'm glad you liked it. :D You make me smile. ~Kayla
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 31/12/08 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 7 He's a Winchester
Finally found the last few chapters of this story, so went back and reread from the beginning and overall enjoyed it. I do have one or two continuity issues towards the end. If I may explain, in this chapter you tell us that Sam has both hands in plaster, but in the previous chapter you had Dean holding his hand hoping for movement. I can nearly live with that but Sam pacing the room in this final chapter when all 27 bones in his foot were broken stretching credibility too far, especially as there is no mention of a cast. I don't mean to upset, but in future writing I hope you will remember to pay very careful attention to continuity especially if forced to leave a story for a length of time. Sorry this review isn't as glowing as you'd like, but I hope you will continue writing cos I loved the ideas behind this story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Midge! Honestly, I don't mind criticism. Really, if you have any ideas on how to improve my writing, I am all ears. I think the continuity issues was because I had so much time between updates. I understand how frustrating it can be when you read tow things that contridict each other. Sorry about that! Again, thanks for the review and I hope you like what I have planned next!!!! ~Kayla
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 10/12/08 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 7 He's a Winchester
Thanks for finishing this, I loved the way Dean got Sam to open up and talk. Also how he helped him. Too bad it's over, but I sure liked your story. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with this story...even if the updates were few and far between! Thank you for the review Vonnie! :D ~Kayla
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 08/12/08 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 6 Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
*throws labtop down angrily* That's it! No, I'm just kidding, this is an awesome story, and I'm very picky, I've got one story so far favorited, cuz it was a damn good story, and I've read probably around 200 stories or more, but you know what, I'm favoriting this one, I love it so much, cant wait for the next chapter, I'm going to check my computer every day from now on until this story is finished. :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the reviews you have given me. I mean really, what you have said in all the other reviews, they just really made my day. And now I see that you have favorited this story! Wow! Thanks so much! I would write more here, but I better go write more for the next chapter.I wouldn't want you to be in agony for too long ;0) Thanks again ashon! ~Kayla
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 08/12/08 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 1 Guilt
GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! Love the idea for this story, I've always been secretly hoping for someone to write about hunters and friends of Steve Wandell coming for Sam. Of all the people to do, I'm glad it was you. ;P
Author's Response: Awwww, thank you ashon! I always wanted to write a story about Steve Wandell's friends hunting Sam....It just took me a while to figure out what to write! ~Kayla
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 6 Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
No, I can't judge you just yet till you place the final to this chapter, but other than that it was a really thriller and thank you.
Author's Response: No, thank you for the wonderful review! ~Kayla
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 5 Strength, Regret, Guilt
You do have a very intesfull imagination and its good andpowerfull to even close to dangerous.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Those words just made my otherwise bleak day! ~Kayla
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 4 Say Goodbye
This is getting a little out of hand I would have hope that the character of Dean would be smart enough to have awaited for back up. You are one hell of a writer.
Author's Response: Wow, well thank you very much! ~Kayla
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 3 Bruised, Bloody, Broken
THis is socialy a disturbed outrage, and I thought that the hunters would have had the common sense to listen and try to understand, but I guess not.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 2 Pain
No, but I thought Sam killed that SOB with his bare hands; and secondly that other tape was ofcourse well thought of.
Author's Response: This story takes place right after Born Under A Bad Sign....that was before Sam killed Gordon. :D ~Kayla
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 1 Guilt
Okay, I don't think your character of placing Bobby introuble with the WINCHESTERS would be a good Idea.
Author's Response: It just seems like Bobby is pretty much the only father figure that the boys have, so naturally when something like this happens, Dean is going to call the only person he really trusts and loves! Thanks for the review! ~Kayla
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 6 Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
I'm not mad, I'm way too happy you updated. And now I almost missed it. Glad I went back and found the update. No matter what, it was well worth waiting for. Awesome Bobby to the rescue and poor Sammy hanging on by a thread. Poor Dean, he just can't loose his baby brother. Hope your writers block is gone and you will update again soon. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Awww, thanks Vonnie! My writers block has slowly melted, I plan on writing another chapter either tonight or tomorrow sometime. Thank you so much for the review! ~Kayla
Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 11/11/08 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 6 Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
Yeah for Bobby--love that man! You really are good with the cliffhanger stuff----The guilt will eat you up---well thats exactly whats happening to Dean---relief soon---please!!
Author's Response: I love Bobby too!!!!!!! Sorry about the cliffhangers....I just have to! I'll try to pump out another chapter sometime, either this week, or next week. Thanks for the review cheri! ~Kayla
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 6 Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
You don't have to do better next time. I liked this chapter. I liked Bobby reflecting back to a younger Sam. I liked your word choice throughout the chapter. Real life and writer's block some times get in the way of completing chapters and stories. No need to apologize. I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you supernatfem! It means alot to me that you liked the chapter....and that you don't mind if I don't update soon! School has been so crazy lately!!! Thanks for the review, you are so sweet! ~Kayla
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 6 Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
Those poor boys. Thank heavens for Bobby's last-minute rescue, but I fear it came too late to save Sam from horrendous injury. And now he's fighting for his life. I hope that on some level he hears his big brother's pleas. Don't give up, Sammy.......Jules
Author's Response: Awww, thanks for all of your kind words Jules. You are so sweet! I will try to update asap! Thanks again! ~Kayla
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 6 Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
You had better do better with updating or there'll be no chocolate ........ or reviews for you next time. Thank heavens for Bobby coming to the rescue in the nick of time. What would the boys do without him? Now Sam just needs to wake up for all to be right in the world again.
Author's Response: Oh no! Please don't take the chocolate away! I promise I will update this faster next time! lol. Thanks for the review!!!!!! ~Kayla
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