Aw, I almost cried! That's so sweet!

I think you did an excellent job capturing both the boy's mannerisms.

"But I had to shove him. It was shove him or  just plain boot him where a boy ain’t supposed to scratch in public"

That line had me laughing for awhile. Thanks for the read.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a review - much appreciated! I think that's my favourite line too...

And thanks for the stars!

I waited to read this first before i reviewed.AWESOME writing!!!

It's totaLLY great how different the perspective is between the boys.

Dean , always the protector, the guardian , the awesome BIG brother. Sammy, the sheltered child who still believes in his hero-Dean-OUTSTANDING job!!!!

timimg, tenor verbage, combine that with the blantant honesty of our boys-Excellent piece of writing!!!

Totally enjoyed this -thank you fopr sharing!!!!

BRAVO!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Wow, ta for such a nice review! You've done much for my ego, LOL

Thanks again!

(And ta for the stars - better than pie!)