Supernaturalville
Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hey, are you ever gonna update this?

Reviewer: saleminsgirl (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

OMG!! I read this a while ago and had to come back and reread it today!!! I am still holding on for an update with the next chapter. :)

Post again soon... Please...Please...Please!!!!

 

Reviewer: iriseyes (Signed) · Date: 13/03/07 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

loved it. write more soon. Sam could know Dean is hurt but not that he was shot. he does not remember and that would be something his brother would hide.

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 01/03/07 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a happy accident, stumbling onto your story! I needed a fix -- and I've been looking for a good BUABS tag/missing scene -- and here you are!

I hope you post the next part soon; very interested in seeing where you take this.

Loved the little details at the beginning -- the way you had Dean open the door and push it open with his knee -- so could see that. His snark was classic Dean. And then there was the sound of the flask...and the fact that Dean's been drinking a lot more lately in the recent epis -- loved that you included that.

But of course, the favorite is the fact that he's now a heap on the bathroom floor, shoulder in not-so-good shape and I can't wait to see what happens when he's brother, who is busy drowning in his guilt, finds him there....

GS

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 14/02/07 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awww...Poor Dean, he's a mess physically and emotionally. What a great idea you get to pick up right after the end of BUABS. I'm looking forward for more.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 13/02/07 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great missing scene. One of the first things I read on a thread after BUABS aired was the wish (that I shared) for just such a missing scene - thank you for answering the call! While I too am all about the Dean-centric universe, I agree with you that Sam is not unworthy or stupidly oblivious when it comes to Dean. It is perfectly understandable, however, that after being possessed for a week he might be a little tired and self-absorbed... You do a great job with the characterization of Dean - love the snippets of Metallica morphing into AC/DC and his aversion to pink vet wrap (I admit that I gravitate to the pink and buy it whenever I can get it). I am very much looking forward to your next chapter.... I have to admit that I had vowed not to do any more reviewing after I was dissed after my last review, but I had to tell you how much I appreciate this.

Author's Response: I had to throw that in about the pink vet wrap. I always buy the hot pink because it looks so good on my bay horse, but it actually usually costs more than the red or blue.

I'm glad we could give you what you were looking for. We love both boys, and while this is a cowriting team that formed specifically to write Hurt!Dean stories, we love Sam, too, and and hate to see him dissed. There's actually some Hurt!Sam and bigbrother!Dean coming up in the next chapter, and then it will be all about the Hurt!Dean again. Glad to oblige you. And we try to update at least once a week.

Thanks for reading,

~Kripkeepers

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 13/02/07 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

this is reallyy great...I like how you're going into the aftermath of "born under a bad sign", can't wait till the next chapt:D

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. This idea hit me right after the episode aired, and I had to write it. It is a cowrite, and we both have other projects running, but we'll try to update at least once a week.

~kripkeepers

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