Reviewer: monkeymuse (Signed)
08/02/09 07:50 PM · On:
Wow this was great!! I was near to tear. Great stroy writing. WOW Gordon was great in this wow I hate him now more than ever. I rarly cheer when evil gets it but wow I was like YEAH DEAN twist the knife... Great stroy please keep writing I will be looking for more.
Reviewer: cheri (Signed)
17/06/08 02:07 PM · On:
I'm liking this---
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed)
16/06/08 06:56 PM · On:
Glad you decided to post this on SUPERNATURALVILLE, I read this on FanFic and it is a terrific story, but as the other reviewers have stated you need to go back and fix the formatting on the early chapters.
Thanks for the advice, I hadn't noticed as I posted quickly before work. I've gone back in and started to make it right but not being the best when it comes to computers it's slow work. I just wondered if you knew of a quicker way? At the minute I'm literally reading it and putting in paragraph breaks, is that the only way to do it?
I'm glad that you still enjoyed it, and thanks again for the advice, Peanut x
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed)
16/06/08 06:15 PM · On:
I would love to read this but just this first chapter gave me a headache due to the words being all crammed together. Can you fix this because I think the story is going pretty good.
Thanks for letting me know what had gone wrong with the chapters, believe me they weren't written that way. I'm slowly going back and reformatting them, something I'm hoping to have done by tomorrow night.
I would really love it if you would give the fic another try afterwards and let me know what you think.
Thanks again, catch you soon, Peanut x
Reviewer: Midge (Signed)
16/06/08 05:30 PM · On:
This story has great potential but the formating makes it very hard to read. So hard in fact that it makes me reluctant to continue reading. So much so that I have opened later chapters to check the format to help me decide if I can be bothered to continue. I note that later chapters look easier to read, so may I humbly suggest you repost the early chapters reformatted for easy reading.
I don't want to be discouraging because as I said at the beginning the story has potential and has caught my interest, but first impressions say such alot about a story. And the formating doesn't do your story justice.
You didn't discourage me at all, I appreciate you letting me know of my mistake. Coming from ffnet I thought it would be just the same posting here as it is there, but as you found out something went wrong.
Will be reformatting all chapters tomorrow and I really hope that you will give the fic another shot.
Thanks again, Peanut
Reviewer: calUK (Signed)
16/06/08 03:31 PM · On:
Wow, fantastic first chapter - but I e-mailed you about the formatting. Hope you don't mind!