Supernaturalville
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 30/12/10 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 5

Hmmmm.....I'm wondering now if Laura Brennan's dad more of a Zombie and not a spirit since it seems corporeal. She has definitely lost what common sense she had. I hope somehow Bobby and Sam can find Dean soon. I was trying to figure out which season this took place in and since their father is still alive, it is season 1. I just love season 1 fics! I'm going to have to finish reading this story tomorrow since it is now 2:00AM. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 30/12/10 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 4

Either Laura Brennan is crazy or her spirit of her Dad is visiting her and making her nuts. I did not see this happening. Yikes! Poor Dean! Seems like she isn't taking him in but going to do her own kind of justice on Dean's ass. Sam and Bobby are going to freak when they get back and Dean is gone! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 30/12/10 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 3

Gulp, Laura  sounds like she will never accept the idea that Dean is innocent of his crime. She is never going to give up her quest to get Dean and now it seems like she is confusing Dean for the vicious young drifter who killed her family. I'm relieved that Bobby is on  his way to help the boys but I'm crossing my fingers that Dean doesn't have to lose the impala for good. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 30/12/10 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 2

Even when Dean is at Death's door with an injury, the ladies want him (sigh...) and the said same ladies just want to mother Sam. Seem realistic to me! I'm glad that she helped them, but she is right about distancing herself from them. Loved the lie about the decaying calf in the van! Tee, hee. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 30/12/10 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm glad I've discovered this story. I was reading "Addiction" and decided to check out your other stories and recognized several excellent ones that I have read before. There are several that I have not, and this is one of them. I really am enjoying it. This first chapter definitely is a nail biter. I hope the Doc believes Sammy about Dean's innocence, and doesn't turn them in. I find it interesting that the female trooper recognized Dean (he is one gorgeous man and she may have remembered his beautiful face from a list of criminals). Looking forward to reading the rest of this story!

Reviewer: emmahr (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 12

hey awesome story, i enjoyed reading it :D cya

Reviewer: emmahr (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

oooh, good work. this is great :D

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 12

-If I were you, I would have chipped each of the sections of chapter 11 into separate little jewels- (but that's just me, some random creature out gasping in my wordseak.......

In any case, I always like reading your stories --

Please don't let the Season 3 Finale distract you!



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.  I would have posted the last chapters separately but they were all denouement, and I worried that after the action,  three successive winding-down chapters would seem boring....

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great final chapter, enjoyed this story so much!! Wonderful scene when Bobby had his talk with Dean! Do you by any chance plan to write a sequel to this? The demon is still out there and after Dean - there are so many questions, would love to read about it.

Anyway, thank you for this awesome ride!!

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 11

Great Story!!

Thank you so much.

Just the beginning of so much heartache. 

 

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 11

aww..that was an awesome end to the story. I'm wondering if you are going to do another part to it..and include Missouri in it..Thanks so much for writing..

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 11

Another awesome chapter, love this story.  K.

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 11

Awsome Ending! Great job at writing Bobby. Loved his speech to Dean. Also, loved the speech that Dean had with Father Patrick. Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us.

Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 11

Excellent!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 11

As always an awesome story! I was sad, as always, to see it end... Great reflections here on what make Sam and Dean tick. Loved the relationship between Dean and Bobby - great dynamic there. Does this continue in another story? Will we see Dean go to Missouri? I'll  be looking for the next fic.... whatever it is!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, your story was fantastic and I really enjoyed it, you've put down that this is chapter 11 but there is really 13 chapters, is that the end of the whole story? Are you going to write a sequel to it, cos that demon is still out there and wanting Dean's guts on a plate. Anyway thanks for writing this one.  10/10

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 10

WOW, you have a lot in this chapter I strongly believe in ("Priests. Very few of them understood the power they were entrusted with", this so hits the mark!), fantastic update!! And what's always there, and I really appreciate this, is how strong the tie between Sam and Dean is, so again, great one!!

Reviewer: latlk (Signed) · Date: 06/07/08 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 10

Another great chapter!  I have really enjoyed reading this story and look forward to your next update.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 9

Every time when I think it can't get any worse for them, it does! Dean's injuries more than ever life threatening with the infection from the demon and Sam worried sick about his brother, very tense and fearful atmosphere you have here, great!! Also enjoyed the very vivid details of the demon's development!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 8

Breathtaking update!!! Scary scenes, Laura's talk with her "father" and then realizing she was "careless with her prayers", Dean's phonecall and - thought my heart would stop - the demon and Laura finding Dean before Sam and Bobby got there, wow, brilliant! ("for the love of god, don't break the line", yes this is how it felt!).

Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 9

I love Bobby, he`s great. I enjoyed Laura`s story to the doctor and her fully dressed in uniform to make it beliavable. The boys can use this in the future.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 9

Excellent chapter, very exciting and I'm looking forward to the next installment. Can Dean be saved? I do hope so he's so sexy.

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 9

Nice chapter..Hopefully Dean will be okay now..I'm still not sure how I feel about Laura..lol..thanks for writing..

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 9

Another emotional chapter, great writing.  K.

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 8

That was an edge of your seat exciting chapter. Can't wait for the next.

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