:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/12/09 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 7

I liked how you used Dean opening up to Sam about what happened while he was gone in order to get Sam to talk about his experience. Even though it didn't end up working out. I also liked how you revealed Sam's new ability. Great job on Sam and Dean's confrontation about not talking.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 06/12/09 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 6

Thanks for the recap at the beginning of the chapter to refresh my memory. I liked the dialogue. This chapter was pretty action packed. I could help but cheer when Sam said no to Lilith. Ruby's help was a little unexpected given her track record but it was nice to see. I look forward to reading the last chapter.

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/09 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 5

This story is getting so exciting!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 27/07/09 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 5

I loved the recap. I liked how you used a similar scene to the one featured in Everybody Loves A Clown for Dean to express his emotions about Sam's words. I liked Ruby's speech to Dean. I also liked the idea of Ruby having a "spidey sense." Very creative. This chapter was a good setup for Chapter 6 which I can't wait to read.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 4

Thanks for the recap. Excellent job writing the scene between Dean and the demon he was interrogating. I liked the way you introduced Ruby into this story. Fantastic job on the dialogue between Ruby and Dean. You really captured how they feel about each other. Great description of Sam's current physical condition and I also thought you did an excellent job writing Sam and Dean's reunion. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/04/09 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 2

Thank you and congrates . . . I so am willing to await for the true conclusion to this one. Now, i'm ancy to know what will happen next.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/04/09 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

Your service's in giving a hell of a story is paying off.
The images placed in the story where to graphic for me and that is why I'm still hooked like fish.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 3

I liked the recap at the beginning. I liked Bobby's choice for his alias. I also liked the dialogue. Thanks for the excellent update! I look forward to more.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/12/08 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 2

Thank you so much I'd like to know when this nightmare will end please.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/12/08 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good luck and congradulations maybe you can tell me some secrets on marrage. This is goinig to be a very scary winchester moment.

Reviewer: Deansgirl954 (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 2

ohhh this is goood keep going

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/08 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 2

Outstanding chapter! I loved the dialogue. Excellent job on the scene between Bobby and Dean in the salvage yard. The end scene with Sam in chains talking to Dean was very powerful. This chapter really tugged at my heart strings. I can't wait for Chapter 3.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

Congrates to the both of you. This is a story that has hit me hard.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

I can't believe you would leave it there are go get married?!

Reviewer: youthere (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

Good start! I'm looking forwards to more :)

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great first chapter looking forward to the next one. Great Work!!!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Congrats on your upcoming nuptials! This is a promising start to what sounds like a promising story. I can't wait to see where you take this story. I am sure it will be worth the wait.

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