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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/02/09 07:03 AM · On: Route 666 Part 1

I love that there is a song list for every chapter!  And great songs, at that!

Good chapter!  I'm off to the next.



Author's Response: yea me 2

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/02/09 06:58 AM · On: Hell house part 3

It's obvious by Dave's libido that he's Dean's brother.

Author's Response: yea one of them had to right?

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 09:50 PM · On: hell house part 2

Is Amy pretending to be scared?  If she's a hunter then she's seen a lot of bloddy crap.

Thanks for telling the story of how they met.



Author's Response: at that point tho she wasnt a hunter it was dave training her and making her stronger

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 09:47 PM · On: Hell House part 1

I like the spin you put on the episodes.  Good songs posted at the end.  I think Kripke needs to get back to lots of classic rock in his episodes.

Author's Response: me 2

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 07:59 PM · On: Pilot

Great chapter!  I started reading one of your stories but realized I needed to go back for some important points---like Alex and Dave.

Author's Response: yeah they r basically Sam and Dean in a different way

Reviewer: Armybrat (Signed) · Date: 10/12/08 12:39 PM · On: Hell House part 1

this is different lol i am enjoying it tho guys

Reviewer: Armybrat (Signed) · Date: 10/12/08 12:36 PM · On: Pilot

really gud and this is series 1 as well yay :P

Reviewer: Greeneyedangel (Signed) · Date: 21/10/08 10:43 AM · On: scarecrow part 2

this absolutely rocks i am going to read the sequel right now

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it and thanks 4 taking time 2 review

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 09/10/08 02:34 PM · On: scarecrow part 1

Wo awesome job Dave keep it up and Im lookin forward to the next chappie!

:) Jess!



Author's Response: thanks i am doing a chapter 15 cliffhanger that will spill into a new story i dont want the stories to be that big

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 04/10/08 01:38 PM · On: home part 2

I like this alot dave!!

really awesome!!

update soon!!!!!

jess



Author's Response: plan on it when i get it written lol

Reviewer: supernatgrl13 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/08 06:06 PM · On: home part 2

Great job! I really like it!! Can't wait for the rest!

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 07:32 PM · On: home part 1

this was really good Dave awesome job once again!!!

keep it up!!



Author's Response: thanks jess

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/08 06:29 PM · On: Faith

Hi folks

A review as promised. I like how you've put your own characters through the episodes.

Keep going, I'm interested to see what you do with this. I'll keep a look out for your updates.

Mary x

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/08 11:23 AM · On: Route 666 Part 3

Good chapter. Short. But good. I liked it. Keep up the great work.

Tori =D

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/08 11:17 AM · On: Route 666 Part 2

Good chapter. A lot of use on the word "Whilst" maybe cut back on that word. But all in all great job and I loved it. :)

 Tori

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 05:49 PM · On: Route 666 Part 1

Hey Dave, really good chapter. Can't wait to see where this one goes. =D

Tori

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 05:05 PM · On: Hell house part 3

Grea tchapter. Loved it. The next one should be interesting. Update soon please.

 

Tori =D

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 01:43 PM · On: hell house part 2

Great chapter. I love the song Armageddon It. Funny...I just listened to that song yesterday. But awesome chapter. update soon please.

Tori =D

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 02:26 PM · On: Hell House part 1

Great chapter. You didn't use much from the original episode to make it look like you were copying it and that was fantastic. It rocked. Nice song list and can't wait to see the classic rock songs you choose, because I am a classic rock fan. Great job. Update soon please.

Tori =D



Author's Response: thanks tori a lot of thought went into it

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 02:11 PM · On: Pilot

Really good Dave. I liked it. You see now I don't understand why people don't review on this story, because it is freaking good. Great job, but a pointer...use commas to seperate certain things.

 

Tori =D

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