Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 4
Three days at an amusement park? You're a brave, brave woman. Great chapter! Laura
Author's Response: Yeah...my blisters have blisters...lol. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
so, everything is on some sort of five minute time loop...and the girl's are caught in the middle of it. maybe a trickster is at work here. lol...just wanted to let ya know, it's Laverne...love that show!! those girls were too damn funny!! bambers;)
Author's Response: LOL, yeah gotta love Laverne and Shirley.... Thanks for reading B - Kel
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
The woman and Earl, they're what, ghosts?So intriguing, I'm looking to your next chapter Kel, great work so far.
Author's Response: Thanks Oceane, I'm glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the stars. Update'll be on Sunday so that's not too long to wait ;) Kel
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 3
Just heard about this through the "grapevine" as I'm not on the site much anymore... Gee Kel, if I didn't know better, I'd swear you just killed me twice in one chapter! Long brown hair, "crimson" blood spatter, puking, shower stalls at a truck stop, and a disappearing body... Now if you need any help getting Frannie to swear a little more, you know who to ask!
Author's Response: Hey nothing's better than a story that involves all of the above right? LOL. Anyway, hopefully it was good buzz that brought you by, Lisa, and not the 'it's so horrible you have to read it' kind.... ;) Thanks for giving it a go and I hope all is well - Kel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great beginning! The six college friends sound vaguely Amazonish. I wonder who the soccer mom with the mini-van and the three kids is? Hmmm.... I think this is gonna be faaabuloooouuuus!
Author's Response: LOL, Yeah well I couldn't do a road trip with Maggie and Fredo up to Bambers place and not come out with a story... ;) and yeah you tagged me right, though I took a bit (well maybe more than a bit) of license with my own description. What fun is a virtual world if you can't play ; ) Thanks as always for dropping by Shannon, hope you enjoy - Kel ;)
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 3
OK ....you got me hooked on this one. Bodies appearing and disappearing, trucks doing the same thing....Panhandle anything....tooo creepy-AWESOME writing!!!!!!!! Dean and Sam caught in this loop.....like Mystry Spot but not..????? OUTSTANDING!!!!!! your vivid words have created the suspenseful setting that demands more....please!!!!!!!! Excellent writing !! BRAVO!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Sweetie, glad you're diggin it so far. It's very nearly complete so I've been posting regularly. ;) Kel
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great chapter Kelly! Laura
Author's Response: Thanks, Laura, and thanks for the stars, glad to see you're still enjoying ;)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 3
hehehehehehehehehehehe! this story makes me insanely giggling.. these girls are awesome! biased? me? naw...
Author's Response: HEHEHE, good insanely giggly is just what I was hoping for, even if it is only you, Mag and me doing the giggling ;)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 3
Another brilliant chapter. Very mysterious. Have a nice holiday.
Author's Response: Glad you dug it Hunter. Yup, going to an amusement park with the family, should be fun. I'll update just as soon as I can - Kel
Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 3
good thing mel has karen around to keep her from being a hero. somehow, i dont think she's a match for a bad guy. lol. and barry and patty, too funny, i wouldnt wanna give them bad news either. and frannie, thinking mel killed a girl, lol, too funny. now, if only we could get those winchester boys as back up :D. loving this story, cant wait for sunday.
Author's Response: Yeah well I met Patty no way would i want to be the one to explain that I let you get killed. ;) The Winchester boys are on their way, glad you enjoyed ... Kel
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 3
Why do i get the feeling that this thing will get more complicated later? this whole loop thing reminds me of Mystery Spot! although thank god it's not Dean and Sam that's stuck in the loop??? Great update :)
Author's Response: More complicated...lol, well maybe, but actually I think it'll start to make a bit more sense after the next chappy, at least I hope so... ;)
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hmmm....will the girls be seeing the boys?? or are they also in a time loop and they just didn't know it? This keeps getting more interesting... be looking forward to the next chapter.. :)
Author's Response: Update will be posted Wed morning so you don't have to wait too long to find out. Thanks again for the R&R - ;) Kel
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
What a dramatic start....people dying, people getting lost....and the boys of cuz!!! You always know how to hook us readers... :) Onwards to the next chapter....
Author's Response: Hey thanks for checking in Muse, glad you're diggin it so far. Thanks for the stars and review ;)
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 2
damn, kel...is this your someone killed maggie story?? if so, i really need to start one of my own... lol...poor maggie...i mean, mel...bambers;)
Author's Response: LOL, naw, this isn't that one B, but if you're game I am, I'm sure I can come up with an inventive way to kill off Maggie ;)....sorry mags, hehehehe
Reviewer: JLE (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
Hmmm.....Interesting. Some sort of time loop? Keep it up. Looking forward to Wednesdays update.
Author's Response: Glad it's caught your attention, and thanks for the reviews, it means a lot - Kel ;)
Reviewer: JLE (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nice start to this story. I had to laugh at the GPS part. Mine is named Miranda!
Author's Response: LOL, Yup, I go nowhere without Lola...Glad you're enjoying - Kel ;)
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 2
'Love slaves to some coven' huh? Hmm... When shall we three meet again... Do I pass for a witch, ya think? Thrills and chills aplenty at the panhandle, i think - and knowing you - lots more comin' up! Great!
Author's Response: hehehehe, like we all wouldn't sign up for that job ;) Glad you're enjoying Kel
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 2
What's going on. The same truck vanished and reappeared, the scene with Earl and Flo is replaying again and again. What happened to Mel, Karen and Frannie. Can't wait to know what Dean and Sam'll find there. So intriguing, you get me hooked Kel.
Author's Response: Got you hooked huh, well good! Update'll be Wednesday morning so that's not too long to wait. Thanks for the R&R and the stars ;)
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 2
That must be one heck of a long magazine Flo is reading...hehehe....it's creepy. Great job Kel.
Author's Response: LOL, Laura, Maybe it's the World Weekly News...or is the Weekly World News.....hehehehe
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh wow, that was a fantastic chapter. Are they stuck in some sort of time loop? not that your going to tell me lol. I can't wait for more of this story.
Author's Response: Hey if I tell you what's going on, what's the incentive to read...lol. Glad you're enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ooohhh....I'm never stopping anywhere named the Panhandle again! Great start Kels! Laura
Author's Response: LOL, thanks Laura....Actually I have to admit that the panhandle we stopped in lacked all the intrigue and the Winchesters :( Probably a good thing given that if they were there we would never have left..... Glad you're enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 2
"Oh no, bastards, they killed Melanie!" LMAO our italian mama... take5bars... pop tarts... your van... i can't believe the amount of stuff we said you put in this story, too frigging funny! Gotta be careful what i'll say this fall, lol. i love it, of course. Ominous truck, and unless there's a lot of guys named Earl around who all decided to have pie at the Panhandle, something here's seriously wrong huh...
Author's Response: Well, you just have to remember when you come back, that I take notes ;) Glad you're enjoying ;)
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 14/06/08 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
Intriguing!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Rachel, Intriguing works for me...lol ;) Kel
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/08 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 2
Kelly, so far very interesting. look forward to see where this story goes. Renee
Author's Response: Glad you're liking so far Renee, hopefully, you'll continue to enjoy - ;)
Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 14/06/08 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 2
oh no! what happened to mel. and that truck appearing and reappearing. creepy creepy... at least the winchesters are there, :D. maybe mel needs some cpr. (hint, hint) haha. another great chapter! cant wait till wednesday.
Author's Response: LMAO, 'Oh, No, I killed Maggie' naw, no worries Mags, if your alter ego needs CPR I'm sure I could find a Winchester to administer it. Only problem is then Fredo's ;) gonna want CPR. The whole story will end up be nothing more than the Winchesters giving the breath of life to you two... I know, I know, like the two of you would complain...Glad you're enjoying - Kel
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