Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 4
The ladies are too funny! Not that I'd want to get stuck in a ghost rest stop with a mass murderer but at tleast they'd die laughing. The bit where the three women ambush Dean with explanations was a riot. Lucky Sam!
Author's Response: LOL, yup at least they'll die happy and if Dean and Sam are the last things they get to see well you can't ask for much more ;)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 3
Very bizarre! Are they in some kind of time loop or death echo? where are the Ghostfacers when you need them? ;) Oh well, we'll just have to make do with Sam and Dean.
Author's Response: lol, yup, I guess the Winchesters'll have to get them out of this one ;) Glad you're enjoying- Kel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 2
Love the repetition! At first I didn't get it---slow-witted. Then when the girls found Mel I realized who Earl was and the tingles began. Eureeka! I'm rushing off to read more!
Author's Response: LOL, glad it finally clicked for ya shannon ;) Thanks for reading - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 7
"standing there with nothing more than his good looks.", hey that's already more than much people... lol! another great one Kel! And like you said, married, but definitely not dead...;)
Author's Response: hehehehe, yup, married not dead is my motto.... ;)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 6
This is the first chapter I hadn't already read and I have to say - what a chapter that was... Dean getting a VERY 'close shave' and landing on Frannie...that was scary and cute all at the same time! And although things are hotting up big time with the personal danger element of this story, I could still see Sam's dimples at the end... Awesome chapter to a fantastic story Kel, glad your due to post today!!!!
Author's Response: I have to admit Louy, with my vaca last week I'd forgotten just what you'd beta'd and what hadn't been done...lol. Nice right. Oh, well, at least I know what to send you from here on out. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you're getting a kick out of it - Kel ;)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 5
'..like to play dress up...' ROFL I'm really enjoying the banter between the brothers and these ladies, you've really captured a believable relationship between them all. None of what you've written is cliche, or redundant, it all just adds to painting a great picture.
Author's Response: Glad to see you're hanging in there...lol
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 4
Loved the 'Government testing..' and the 'Scooby Doo' and 'Charlies Angels' nod in this...you had me laughing into my coffee first time I read the...moving on...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 3
Reading back through this chapter again, I just realised there's actually hardly any of the boys in there...yet I'm still completely captivated by this chapter. And thats got to be a credit to your skill in creating OC's and making them believable. The different POV's and dialogue all go to layer this into what could easily be an episode. Moving on to next chapter...
Author's Response: Honestly the no boys thing was a mistake in chaptering...lol. I wrote this as one continuous story with never a thought as to how I was gonna break it up....lol. - Kel ;)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hey Kel, and sorry I'm so late to this party, got well and truly sidetracked after chapter one - but I'm back, and want to make sure you get the reviews this great story deserves. The snark between these ladies is a perfect match for the brotherly banter between the boys and I don't know if you did that on purpose or not, but it makes for a great set up. I already like them as characters but now I'm invested in what goes on with them too...and I'm glad you're not rushing the pace, (you have a real nice instinctul way of moving a plot along) Moving on to next chapter...XXX Louy
Author's Response: LOL, never a worry Louy. And thanks for the pacing comment, I'm always worried I build too slowly ;) Kel
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 30/06/08 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 6
Frannie saved Dean's life. These women're something, lol. They finally learned who's the killer. Awww...Flo realized that she was dead and she moved on. Chuckles, Dean can be so funny,lol. Captivating story so far, can't wait for more.
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 29/06/08 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 6
This is so freaking entertaining! Great job. Laura
Author's Response: Glad I could make you laugh ;)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/06/08 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 6
Already on his way to regaining consciousness Dean had the woman pinned, his head resting on her stomach. okay, i'm happy with this image, i stop reading here. lol, naw, kidding. Mel did an awesome job with Flo, she'd deserve a position as Winchester personal ghost whisperer... And i just wanna say, they were talking for hours, so why shut up now, killijoy Dean, we need to chat in such a situation if we don't wanna turn crazy or totally hysterical!!!
Author's Response: hehehe, you just wanna stay pinned huh.....LMAO, can't say as i blame you ;)
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 29/06/08 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 6
“No rest for the wicked, huh?” he said as he reached one hand up to gently touch the cut on his neck. LOL. sweet, the allusion to the last eppy of the season...i love Frannie...all the 3 women have quite the personalities when you think about it... :)
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying the ladies, this was written for two friends of mine and they've had a ball with all of my characterizations, well at least they say they have...lol. So I'm glad to find others like them as well ;)
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 29/06/08 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 5
LOL Love the way Dean teases the women...usually it was only Sam, so it''s refreshing to see him teasing someone else.... :) Onwards to the next chapter...
Author's Response: thanks Muse, glad you're still enjoying, yeah has to be a relief to Sam to have Dean picking on the ladies ... ;)
Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 29/06/08 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 6
:D another AWESOME chapter. i'm loving it. fran saving dean, mel, the ghost whisperer. and really, all three have been talking forever, silence wasnt needed before. lol. another great, great update. i loved it when flo realized she was dead. that's gonna throw a kink in the plans.. paul smith showing up to kill her and she's not there. cant wait for me. great story!!
Author's Response: LOL, yup, imagine Dean's nerve shushing them ;) hehehe, glad you enjoyed, Kel
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 5
Poor Melanie, she got the scare of his life. After what Karen found in the duffle bag no wonder the women're afraid of Dean and Sam. Now they're trapped in that place, it's going to be a long night. Great work Kel, can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: LOL, yeah I know I'd have questions...lol Thanks for reading ;)
Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 5
lol, mel the ghost whisperer. and all the layers ;)..... but hey, it kept gen from freezing at the state park. and flo, i forgot about that poor woman. i am loving the fact that the place has been a 'ghost town' for ten years... so creepy. cant wait for me :D
Author's Response: True, poor Gen would have froze if not for your assortment of hoodies ;) Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 25/06/08 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 5
Another great chapter Kelly! Laura
Author's Response: Thanks much, Laura, glad you're getting a laugh out of it. ;)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/06/08 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
“Stop,” Dean ordered, his voice leaving no doubt that he’d issued an order, not a request. guh... and i just gotta love Mel, the ghost whisperer... the over clothed ghost whisperer... lmao
Author's Response: hehehe, Dean barking orders does it for ya huh?....lol, can't say as I blame you. ;)
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 4
That was great. I enjoyed the moment where Dean and Sam met the "Charlie's Angels" so funny, lol. I love these ladies. Kel, you did a great work describing their physique and personality and the brothers as well. Captivating story so far, I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 4
Roll on Wednesday! Wanna see more baby!Dean and mama!Karen - and I bet they make one cute couple in the face of terror... bring on the ass-kickin'! (did any of that make sense?)
Author's Response: LOL, of course it made sense.. well I think it did ;)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 4
hehehehehehehehehehehehehe... hehehehehehehehehehehehehe... oh, and, hehehehehehehehehehe...
Author's Response: hehehe *snickers* hehehe, I know ;)
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 4
Finally!!! they are actually in the same time zone.....ok, that helps clear things a bit. and you described both boys beautifully!! they are so many words to describe them.. :) Can't wait for the next chapter..
Author's Response: LOL, yeah I hear ya, enough playing around and bring on the boys right..... ;)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 4
Another brilliant chapter. I'm loving this story it's so exciting.
Author's Response: LOL, glad you're finding it exciting Dark....It's been a lot of fun to write - Kel ;)
Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 4
Yay!! we found dean and sam. eh hem, i mean, good thing the boys are there to help out frannie, karen and mel. great update, i loved fran kicking a rather shady looking dean. lol. and dean getting broad sided by the women, too funny, i can just picture the look on his face when a bunch of chattering women started their approach. cant wait till wednesday. :)
Author's Response: Yay!! finally we found the boys. I mean Fran, Mel and karen did...hehehe. Glad you're enjoying
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