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Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/09/09 04:27 AM · On: Part 14: Black and Blue, a fight for freedom.

A very good chapter, it's moving along nicely.

Author's Response:
Thank you, yes I thought so too, I think shorter chapters are better as well. Especially in verse!
Jacq

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/08/09 09:06 AM · On: Part 13: Time is running out, "Dean, where are you?"

A very good chapter, exciting.

Author's Response:
Thank you, it seems to be moving along a lttle better at the moment
Jacq

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/06/09 03:33 PM · On: Part 12: The Morning after the Night Before

Good to see an update, i enjoyed this chapter.

Author's Response:
Thank you I am determined to finish it, come what may...
Jacq

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/08/08 05:00 PM · On: Part 11: Dean-cam

Great update.
Poor Dean.
I loved this line, he's holding my i'm so not going there lol.

Author's Response:
Thank you. Reckon I need to go rescue Sam now!
Jacq

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 09:40 AM · On: Part 10: No Rules to Possession

Very good' i enjoyed this chapter.
Looking forward to the next part.

Author's Response:
Thank you, next one may take a little longer, paid work V writing!
Jacq

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 11:08 AM · On: Part 9: Louisa Jones, Reading the Future.

Great update.
Looks like Sam's in danger again.

Author's Response:
Thank you. Time for action and less angst I think.
Jacq

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 07:42 AM · On: Part 8: Revelations and Death

Great chapter.
looking forward to the next part.

Author's Response:
Thank you, its fun to do.
Jacq.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 03:57 PM · On: Part 7: Darkness in her Soul

Very good.
I'm enjoying this story, it's different.

Author's Response:
Thank you Different is what I aim for . The weather is sunny now so gardening/lawns will take priority for a while.
Jacq

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 03:53 PM · On: Part 6: Parallel Beginnings - Demons and Dreams

Four great chapters.

Author's Response:
Thank you. Its all down to too many rainy UK days. Can't do the garden when its wet so I write instead.
Jacq

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 02:07 PM · On: Part 2: Watching, waiting, contemplating.

Very good,i enjoyed that.
I will be waiting for part three.

Author's Response: Thank you, part three is ready and waiting , will post soon.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 06:39 PM · On: Part 1: The Fire Exit Opens

Very good! An interesting tale of which I'm eager to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you Part two will be posted soon

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/06/08 12:57 PM · On: Part 1: The Fire Exit Opens

That was great,i'm looking forward to part two.

Author's Response: Thank you , I see poetry every where. Dont always get it right though.

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