Supernaturalville
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Farewell

Wow Jaylan.

Lovely!  I admire but am no good at poerty so this is cool!

 bev xx



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, Bev

I appreciate that you liked it 

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 12/06/08 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Farewell

This is great, very well and beautifully written. There are many lines I could quote... I chose these 'cause they are so heartbreaking:

"Sometimes I see your shadow, I have a lot to say

I reach out for your hand, you smile and fade away

Your presence still lingers here even though you're gone"

Yeah, we definitely have to get Dean back.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your warm review

I'm glad you liked it

Come back, Dean! 

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 12/06/08 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Farewell

That made my heart pound. And a strange nostalgia washed over me... strange. I'll have to ponder that now.

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review

I'm glad you liked it

Reviewer: Diswildeyes (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Farewell

wow amazing loved all of it all of your refrences, I loved it was so well writen.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot

I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Farewell

Oh wow,that was amazing.

Heartbreaking but beautifuly written.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot

I'm glad you liked it

Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Farewell

I don't usually read things like this but if there are more like this maybe I need to start. It is, well, for lack of a better word - wow.

While I think the whole thing is beautifully written here's the lines that stood out to me the most.

Water froze in the oceans and angels ceased to pray - the wording is perfect and meaningful, simple, maybe, but they make an impression.

Sometimes I see your shadow, I have a lot to say

I reach out for your hand, you smile and fade away - you painted a perfect picture with those lines.

Thanks for the read. Merrie :) 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing I'm glad it made a good impression on you

The lines you chose are some of my favourites, I'm glad you picked them specifically :)

This means so much to me, thanks again

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Farewell

Heart-wrenchingly beautiful! Great poem, very tear jerking and so raw cause we've just lost Dean:(

Farewell Dean...for now! Can't wait for Sam to haul Dean outta hell ;)

Love ya

Schelz x



Author's Response:

Schelir baby, I'm sorry I made you cry

Come back Dean we all need you :(

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