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Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/06/08 03:15 PM · On: The Hell Spawn

hehe, nice oneshot, glad kwater recommended it. Tentacles huh... and bulbous black eyes... yikes!

Author's Response: Wow really someone recommended me to someone else? I'm flattered. *blushes*

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 10/06/08 02:59 PM · On: The Hell Spawn

Hey I really enjoyed this little one shot. Nice action and great banter my fav's gotta be...
“I’m trying” Sam yelled back before pulling the trigger before Dean could answer. Sam aimed at it’s face, it was a big enough and ugly enough target what with it having several bulbous black eyes of various sizes.

The largest of these eyes exploded as a bullet entered it and made it’s way into the creature’s skull. That seemed to do the trick, the hell spawn’s tentacles dropped and it started to wobble around the alley like a drunk looking for a place to take a leak.

Dean finally arrived on the second balcony, “see?” he smiled at Sam, “easy as pie”.

hehehe, thanks for the read - Kel

Author's Response:
Your very welcome. I'm happy you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 10:38 PM · On: The Hell Spawn

Nice action scene, very seat-of-the pants fighting style, full of Winchester luck and dialogue. Sue

Author's Response: I'm very glad you think so. I hope to continue to be able to deliver fun and exciting action sequences that involve the boys.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 04:42 PM · On: The Hell Spawn

That was great,very funny.

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! ^^

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 02:52 PM · On: The Hell Spawn

what you mean better than the let's shoot it in the face and hope it doesn't notice plan??
I loves that one it was my favorite!!! awesome job!!!

Author's Response: Haha thanks. It seemed very much a Sam thing to say, so I couldn't help myself.

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 02:23 PM · On: The Hell Spawn

Well done action!! "Bits of hell spawn landed in his hair, I’m so having the first shower tonight." Haha, that was grossly funny. This was such a delightful tale, especially after the depressing season finale. Loved the last chat between Sam and Dean, and the brotherly "Bitch/Jerk".

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm very proud of this. And I'm also glad I could cheer someone up after the season finale. I'm hoping the next installment will have more action and more laughs.

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