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Reviewer: TrippleP (Signed) · Date: 09/09/11 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is a wonderful story! I loved the thought of the boys being in the sun at the beach. The priest and his brother were very likable characters. I also especially like the part when the saint came to his senses enough to contact the guys to help them help him. Good story. Love all your work. Thanks for the pleasure.

Reviewer: bartlebead (Signed) · Date: 02/02/11 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 16

Enjoyed the story very much.Thanks for writing it!


Author's Response: Thanks for your comments!  It's a good day when an old story receives attention.

Reviewer: bartlebead (Signed) · Date: 02/02/11 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 6

Good cliffhanger! Nice setting, interesting plot. Thanks!

Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 27/09/08 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 16

Another good one! Enjoyed this one very much, too!

Author's Response: Very happy to hear that.  This one did not want to be put to paper,  for some reason.---ml

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 27/09/08 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 16

Mal,

great story.

hope your next one will be up soon.

renee



Author's Response: Thanks,  Renee.  I'll post fairly soon...ml

Reviewer: jp123 (Signed) · Date: 27/09/08 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 16

great story

thank you so much



Author's Response: Thanks for telling me.  It always helps to know someone enjoyed it---ml

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 14

Glad you are back to this story, still really enjoying it, hope to see another update soon. K.

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with it.  It was driving me nuts,  the writer's block.

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 14

ouch - poor Dean! Do i dare hope help is on the way? then again, you beat him up so nicely...

great story!



Author's Response:   No no no--not ME beating him up--why that'd make me some sort of monster....lol   I'm just the narrator

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 14

Don't think this is complaining in any way, but you posted so fast I didn't get to leave a review for the last chapter!!! This was awesome! I love the way this story is falling out! Go Eli! I'm thinking that Dean is hurt pretty bad again... Hope that Jorge is ok too! Loved that Dean had managed to snag the cross... and so typical -- don't worry Sam.... Aw!

Author's Response: Should I slow down,  lol?   Thanks for your comments as always. 

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 13

OMG!!! Evil, evil cliffie!! Please tell me the next chapter will be up soon?!!!! Jorge pulled into a burning building -- and Dean taken by vicious cops again! Great update! Surely, the brothers have to know someone who can get Dean sprung???

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 12

Thanks for the update, its a great story. K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 12

No worries! Short but sweet! Really a chapter with a flaming dog turd? It doesn't get much better than this...

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 13/08/08 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 11

Yeah! They saved the dog! I think the church and Eli just got a new mascot.... I have a feeling that whatever they need it's not going to come from the dog, though....

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 10/08/08 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 10

For anyone else this would be an average length chapter, but yours are so good this does seem really short! But awesome cliffie! I just knew when Dean found the body of the nun it was going to be a bad thing.... So I'm thinking zombies knocking at the door?

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 10

Short but sweet, I liked it. K.

Reviewer: seamonkey (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 9

hate to be a downer but chocolate is poisonous for dogs.. so sams happiness at helping the dog may be shortlived..good story enjoying very much thx


Author's Response: A valid point.  Although the small amount af actual cocoa in the so called milk chocolate of north american sweets is pretty minimal.  My dog managed to find and consume a small box of dark Godiva truffles hours before a 17 hour car trip.  Oh THAT was fun.  He was fine,  but it certainly did a number on his system for a day....

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 9

I'm just catching up with this story and am enjoying the read.  I really had to smile at this chapter and their dealing with the dog (esp. Dean's reaction to having to collect the dog poop.  How funny!).  When I got to the end though, Sam's petting the dog and hoping that today at least they'd managed to save the dog, I found myself hoping that the dog does find a good, loving home in the end.  (Yeah, I'm a sucker when it comes to animals/pets in stories.  hehe).

Author's Response: Somehow a story is just not complete without a dog...

Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 29/06/08 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

Awesome chapter, loved the action and the hurt of course!


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 6

And the pain begins, great chapter, more please.  K.

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 4

Loving it, eagerly waiting for the next chapter.  K.

Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 4

Nice and creepy, I love it!

Reviewer: betty1069 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 3

Please update soon!! Can't wait too see what happens next!!

 



Author's Response: Thanks--updating soon...

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 2

I really like this story -- it's fun to read about the brothers just kicking back, enjoying life for a change.

Can't wait for more 



Author's Response: Thanks!  Yeah--'bout time they had something go their way....'course that never lasts long......

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 10/06/08 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 2

Ok, dumping a saint into a shoebox just can't be a good thing! I'm really hoping that Dean will get at least one night of party and buxom girl before all hell breaks loose - and then you are both free and encouraged to handle him in your usual impeccable (and rough) way....

Author's Response: But of course--how could I deny the poor thing that?  heh heh

Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 10/06/08 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

Love the story. I have a beautiful image in my mind of Dean in wets shorts and tee-shirt. Thanks for that.

Have no idea whats up with the Father but he seems creepy.

Can't wait for more! 

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks!  Yeah--that picture stuck with me too........

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