Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 10
Excellent chapter, a bit of a revelation at the end, poor Dean is he ever going to catch a break, looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi Maureen Thanks, don't worry, Dean's moment is about to arrive! Glad your still enjoying it. Mary x
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 10
Ok... that last line certainly put things up a notch..... so , how does Sam know he can't die???????AWESOME twist-very, very , evil to leave us at that point Bobby is stumped.... that does not bode well for Dean and his little hitch-hicker. Why do I have this lump in my stomach- another twist coming?????? OUTSTANDING writing- you have everyone waiting for the next shoe to fall... MORE PLEASE!!!! BRAVO!!!!
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the review. I'll give an answer to Sam's mystery in the next chapter, but there maybe a twist to come on that too! I know- Bobby stumped! I couldn't resist it! Glad you are enjoying it. Maryx
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 9
Mary, it just keeps getting better and better! "How much do you think this car weighs?"....that was intense, and we still don't know if its her plan to hurt Sam or to make Dean hurt him?????The entire tire changing scene was awesome. You had me a little worried when Dean's lips started to bleed. If it did that to them what must his stomach and through look like? Ouch. You have more than made up the angst in this chapter. *thanks*:) --GTS
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts on this, I really appreciate it and I'm glad your still enjoying this. She will reveal her plans soon I promise. Mary x
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 9
You are an evil person for leaving it here. LOL good job. But hurry with the next one, k?
Author's Response: It was evil of me and I apologise in advance then for the end of the next chapter!!lol. Thanks, I'm glad your liking this. Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 9
Excellent chapter, Please update as soon as possible, I can't wait.
Author's Response: Hi Maureen Thanks for the review, update is on its way. Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 8
Brilliant chapter it was so exciting, can't wait to see how Sam is going to save his big brother, looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks, I am finally get this to go where I want, I think! Mary x
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 8
best chapter so far:)
Author's Response: Cheers, it was fun to write, but poor Dean, I know how Sam feels! Mary x
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh God, is it Meg, Lilith, or someone new? Poor Dean
Author's Response: Hi, you'll have to wait and see! I know, poor Dean and it'll get worse before it gets better! Thanks for reviewing! Mary x
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 7
What a great concept! The idea that she was WITH him in hell and refuses to leave not to mention "...it didn't seem to have a particular soft spot for his brother." I was so shocked when Dean spoke openly about his time in hell. All the stories have him refusing to discuss it so at first I didn't like it because it felt like he was OC---then you wrote how he had to "use their pain to mend his walls"----that was awesome! The best parts were: 1. when Dean hesistated to cross the salt line then hisses and finally feels her absence. and 2. (my favorite) Sam's last line:) The only thing missing is a little more angst from Bobby and Sam. I know to them he was only gone for 2 hours but after Dean told them it had been more than a year I expected a little more reaction from them.
Author's Response: Hi Glad you like where this is going. I must admit I liked the two parts that you've highlighted as well. I willhave more angst for Sam in the next chapter! Maryx
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 6
ooo, this is getting creepy. You have done a great job with the dialogue. Looking forward to the next post:)
Author's Response: Thanks. I struggle with the dialogue so I'm glad it sounds ok, can't always tell when you're writing it Hope to increase the creepy factor as we go! Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter and a little sinister thrown in at the end, looking forward to the next update, hope your able to keep Dean out of Lilith's creepy hands
Author's Response: thanks, glad you like it, a little bit more sinister for you before I (hopefully!) rack up the pace a bit! Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 30/06/08 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 5
Interesting chapter, kinda short, but with lots going on I can hardly wait for the next update to see what happens.
Author's Response: Hi Maureen Thanks, I apologise for the shortness of this chapter, I really need to just get this on to take the story forward. I had written more but wasn't sure if I was 100% happy with it. Will post shortly, promise more next time!! Thanks again for review. Mary x
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 28/06/08 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 4
I guessed the bandage was going to give him away--that was really good! So is Dean really trying to protect Sam? and if so from what? OR does he really just need a break from all the sacrificing? Looking forward to see where you take this:)
Author's Response: Thanks Glad you liked the bandage idea, Sam misses nothing! Dean's a bit confused but something will happen soon that will bring them back together. (Unless I change my mind again! lol) Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter am looking forward to another update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks Maureen Glad you are still with me and enjoying this. I will try to post update asap. Its almost there. Thanks again Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 3
Have read all three of the chapters and am really enjoying your story, Please keep writing this tale.
Author's Response: Thank you Maureen for always reading and reviewing. I think you've read everything that I have written and you are always encouraging. It means a lot. Thanks again Mary x
Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 07:45 PM · On: Tears Of The Phoenix
Ok this is very different but you have my interest--
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 05/06/08 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 2
Thank you soo much for updating it's an awesome story!! please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you for always reading and reviewing my stories, it means a lot.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 05/06/08 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 2
Dean can't just up and leave Sam, hope he gets all that nonsense out of his head, It's a great read.
Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted to do something that for Dean would be out of character and so I let him leave, wanted to see where I could take it and what it would take to get him back. Glad you are enjoying this Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 05/06/08 07:43 AM · On: Tears Of The Phoenix
I'm glad that you've brought Dean back, not sure about him leaving, can't wait to see how it ends
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 04/06/08 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
Well, this makes sense now. Personally, I'd go back to the first chapter and tweak it just a little, add some line about Dean leaving, "Although it broke his heart to leave, he knew he couldn't stay" something like that, so that the reader knows that, at least to Dean's way of thinking, he has a valid reason to go. I'm not a big fan of Jo, I think No Exit was the weakest ep of second season, hands down. But, I did like Jo in BUABS and I like how you've continued Jo's life in Duluth. And Winchester Arms is a great name for a bar, esp if you're going for the pub vibe;-) Are you setting up a similar scene to Dean's lying to Ellen in No Exit? Sam calls and Jo pretends to be shocked that Dean has vanished? It also occurs to me that Bobby and Sam don't think that Dean's alive, they must think that someone or, more probably. someTHING stole Dean's body and his car... I'm really interested in seeing where this goes next. Sue
Author's Response: Thanks, I love your reviews, nice that your interested enough to add your thoughts and suggestions. Gives me something to chew on for the next chapter. Not sure yet about going down the lying road, but I might. I couldn't resist the Winchester Arms! Thanks again Mary x
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 11:21 PM · On: Tears Of The Phoenix
I'm with badaiwind. Why did Dean leave Sam? Granted, his brain's pretty scrambled from his time in Hell, but whatever happened to "we're stronger together, we just are"? Dean would leave Sam if he thought he was a danger to Sam, and maybe you're hinting about that with the Dean had known torment comment, but it doesn't come across as sufficient reason in the story as presented. I thought using Sam's tears and the amulet was an interesting way of bringing Dean back. Sue
Author's Response: I'm going to post another chappie to this soon am I promise I'll explain why and were. Thanks for the comment about the tears and the amulet. it's appreciated. Mary x
Reviewer: badaiwind (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 10:36 PM · On: Tears Of The Phoenix
Why did he leave Sam?
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 02:30 PM · On: Tears Of The Phoenix
wow you did an awesome job! I absolutely loved this story! it is just soooo awesome!! just a quick question?? where did Dean go??
Author's Response: Hi I was just going to leave this as a one shot and leave you guessing but I've got a few ideas to throw around on where Dean went. Promise to update ITNC for you soon too!! Mary x
Reviewer: Darkmoon_90 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 12:14 PM · On: Tears Of The Phoenix
Great start. Looking forward to the next chapter! DM90 x X x
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