Reviewer: shaz_44 (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 18
Wow - that story was just captivating. It was brilliant! You still need to work on some of the grammar but all in all that didn't distract me from the story. Excellent work & I'll be catching up on some of your other work. Thanks.
Author's Response: Hi there Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed this, it was one of the earlier things that I wrote. Hope you enjoy any of the other stuff that you read that I've done as well. Grammar, tricky thing. My brain, hands and eyes all work at different speeds, and sometimes it just gets away from you! What can I say, glad it didn't distract you too much. Thanks for the review, cheers Mary x
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 18
That was really great!!!! I loved it. Hell I enjoyed it!!!! Awesome work. I really wish I could give it more than 10. Unlucky me the rating's maximum limit is only 10 :( Well then 10 it is!!!
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Hi there, Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this. This actually started life as a little one shot, then a reviewer asked a question and this story was born. I have to say that I hated writing it until it was about half way, the storyline fought me the whole way to there, and then it grew a little life of its own. I'm happy with the 10 but thank you for thinking that it's is work more than that becaused it really was hard work!! Great review, thanks again. Cheers mary xx
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 23/07/08 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 18
This was a great story! I loved every minute. Thank you so much
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I liked writing this even though I did struggle with at some points. Thank you for sticking with it! Mary x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 23/07/08 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 18
that was a great story. Like how you tied everybody in there. It was a great read. The brother moment at the end was awesome..Sorry I didn't review the last few chapters. Got kind of busy..Thanks so much for writing. I'll look for other stories by you.
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! There was rather a lot going on at some points so I'm glad that it all came together and that you enjoyed this. An awesome is high praise indeed! Thanks, Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 18
Fantastic ending, Dean finally managed to get to the Grand Canyon. Great that everything worked out well for the boys. Thanks for giving us this story.
Author's Response: Thanks Maureen Your support on this story is appreciated more than you know. I want Dean to get his moment in the sun, doesn't get very many of them. Glad you enjoyed. Mary x
Reviewer: jeanne (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 18
Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed this. Mary x
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 18
really liked the end. Glad they didn't stay immortal. The way Dean handled finding out about the elixer was very well done!
Author's Response: Hi Glad you liked the ending. I didn't want them to stay immortal, not very Winchester! Thanks again for all the reviews. Mary x
Reviewer: Silverot (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 17
oooo! More Please!
Author's Response: Hi Glad you are still enjoying this. Last chapter is up now so I hope you like how it ends. Thanks for the review. Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 21/07/08 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 17
A fantastic chapter, a great idea to bring The Ghostfacers website into it as a means to saving Dean, I'm sure that it works too. Can't wait for the next chapter, The story must be nearly finished.
Author's Response: Thanks Maureen Last chapter is up as we speak. Hope you enjoy it, thank you for constantly reviewing this, makes it worthwhile! Mary x
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 16
LOL, the only black, growling beast taking off with Dean is the Impala! And Bobby behind the wheel. Oh man, Dean is gonna be pissed.
Author's Response: HI Thanks for the review Was trying to think of something to scare Dean's little furry friend off and the Impala just sprung to mind. Dean's beautiful black beauty coming to the rescue! And yes Dean will not be a happy chappy when he finds out Bobby wrecked his car! Mary x
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 16
The Impala went to Hell to pick up Dean!! What a car -- but all that damage.
great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks My baby just always gets to sit on the side lines and watch so I thought I'd give her a starring role in this chapter, and Bobby too! Cringed when writing the damage but don't worry it'll get fixed! Can't keep a good car down! Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 16
Fantastic chapter and once again Dean just doesn't catch a break, right when you think it might go right for him something jumps up and kicks you in the mouth, can't wait for the next update to see how Dean fairs. Great writing. 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks, just a few more chapters left. Dean'll get his break soon, promise. Thank you for the 10/10!! *blushes* Mary x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 16/07/08 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 15
Another awesome update. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Hi Thank you kindly. Thanks for reading and reviewing, its nice to always get a bit of feedback, keeps you going. Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 16/07/08 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 15
Please update as soonas you can, This chapter was so exciting but it finished way to soon, I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. Fantastic work.
Author's Response: Hi Glad you liked this, boys turn next I promise and a little action for Bobby. Will post asap. Thanks again. Mary x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 14
another awesome update. Again you got Missouri just right. Can't wait to read more, Time for Dean to kicks some butt..
Author's Response: Hi, glad you still like Missouri. Dean needs to wait for one more chapter to get his shot at Lilith, but it will come, promise. Posting right after this! Thanks again for reviewing. Mary x
Reviewer: Silverot (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 14
My gosh! Don't you dare quit now! This is really great! Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Hi Glad you're still with me! Don't worry this story will go all the way. Thanks for taking the time to review, it's appreciated. Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 14
Fantastic chapter, sorry it was all over too soon please give us the next update soon, Poor suffering Dean, Great work.
Author's Response: Hi Maureen I just love hurting Dean, it is so much fun, wouldn't mind getting to comfort him too though, although just not in print!! Glad you like, one more chappie for Lilith and the boys will get their shot. Mary x
Reviewer: Silverot (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 09:46 AM · On: Tears Of The Phoenix
I like your story alot! I have only read the first chapter, and am very new to the site, but I love it! I will read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Welcome to the weird and sometimes wacky world of Supernaturalville. I hope you enjoy the stories on the site, some of them are wonderful, better than the episodes!! Glad you are liking this and hope you enjoy the rest. Mary x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 13
i'm very curious as to where this story is going, i'm loving it so far..I just knew it was a matter of time before Dean ended up in handcuffs..lol..Please update soon..Thanks for writing..
Author's Response: Hi, There is quite a lot going on but I promise it's all about to come together. I hope !! I know Dean in handcuffs, is any story ever complete without this! Thanks again for reviewing. Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 12
Great chapter, Dean seems to be running the show at the moment but I'm sure Lilith has something up her sleeve, Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Hi, yep Dean's got the bit for the moment but Lilith's still holding the reins. Hope you enjoy the update.Thanks again for the review. Mary x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 12
Oh wow..you captured Missouri perfectly. I hope she's in the story for a bit. Thanks so much for updating so quick. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Hi thanks for reviewing. Glad you like Missouri, I loved her but she is a hard woman to get down in print. Mary x
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 11
Dean's fury, Sam's devastation, Bobby's comfort, Dean's softness and then.....the boys are back! :) *what a ride*
Author's Response: Hi GTS A little range of emotions, something for everyone, glad you liked. Mary x
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 11
That's our Dean -- we're going ito Hell!! Love it -- a man with a plan!
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the review. He never lacks in courage does he? Hope that you like his plan went it's revealed! Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 11
Great chapter, an angry Dean is a dangerous Dean, didn't see Dean's invisible friend as being Lilith, looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Hi Maureen I love angry Dean, but then I love him sad, hurt etc! His little friend was going to be someone else at the start but I liked the idea of his soul somehow dragged her to hell when he died. Served her right! Thanks for the review. Mary x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 11
wow, great story so far..wondering how you are going to make it all work. thanks for writing, can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Hi there, glad you are liking it. I sometimes wonder that myself! But its ok 'cos Dean knows even if I don't .lol Thanks for the review. Mary x
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