Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 31/12/08 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
I liked it. It was short. Simple. Well written. And all those emotions - both expressed and suppressed - we love to read were there. It was a bit confusing, like a blurry dream, but you made it work. I like the way it was written because it created an image without being overly descriptive (like I tend to be :*) *blushes and hides*). Very nice. Hugs, Andi :D
Author's Response: Awww...don't hide. Thanks so much for your comments, I appreciated them so much. Laura
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/12/08 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
This story was very COSMIC and I like it fit with a lot of details.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
A very interesting episode. I did likie it thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's the first in a series, Terror Town is the next story, it's a work in progress right now, though it's nearly finished.
Reviewer: downbythebay (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
A very interesting idea. Great story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow. I loved that. I'm not sure what happened...but I loved it! Yeah. Wonderful story. ;).
Author's Response: Thanks so very much.
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice one,maybe Kripke read it and will use it for Season 4? Would definitely get my approval. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 06/07/08 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nice one,maybe Kripke read it and will use it for Season 4? Would definitely get my approval. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Thanks very much, that's quite the compliment.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
interesting read, and saw it's part of a series, so curious to read more...
Author's Response: Thanks so much fredo! Yes, there's gonna be some more. Laura
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 10/06/08 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Cool, beginning, Laura, I look forward to reading more in the series...and can I say I love Dean waking up upside down on Bobby's porch... ;) Kel
Author's Response: Hehehee...thanks Kel!
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 06/06/08 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
Bayre, What a wonderful take on Dean's "Resurrection". You've nailed so many of the nuances of Dean's character - his ability/his need to "lean" on Bobby, telling Sam he sent him "Home" and his never ending need to see and feel Sam. You present an interesting thought with regard to Dean's torture and duration in Hell - time spent while only a week in Hell seemed like decades for Dean. Also compelling is the effects of the torture on Dean while in Hell - something Dean will push to the background and move Sam to the foreground. You've presented an interesting question - although Hell definitely put Dean through torturous pain and loneliness, Hell's angels unwittingly may have given Dean more power and weapons to wage the Winchester War. Dean seems to have a new sixth sense about him, an unspoken knowledge of things surrounding him, of things Hell has given up to him and Dean seems to have a renewed energy to defend "what is his Sam and so much more." I love the fact that Dean's body vanished after death -- makes his return that much more conceivable. Also love his response to Ruby's question of being one of them now. Great. Always enjoy your truly talented work. Carry On, Pook
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind, and well thought out comments. Laura
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hmmm.....this is very interesting....i've always wondered how Kripke is going to justify Dean coming back from Hell without a body, and the thought of his body just disappearing does make sense... Damn Ruby...and thank god Sam's okay..
Author's Response: I agree...damn Ruby. Thanks for reading! Laura
Reviewer: youthere (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
I would really like to see this continued, even though oneshots with open endings are my favorite kind.... :) It seems like it would make a very interesting story Cheers yt
Author's Response: It'll be continued, stay tuned...lol The others are more likely to be chapter fics. Thanks for reading and commenting. Laura
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it! Now what about this knowledge Dean has and Sam's ability to command lesser demons? Intriguing... ~A
Author's Response: Hehehe...thanks so much.
Reviewer: jensengal3 (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
i really enjoyed this! How did dean get back??.. great job! Sarah
Author's Response: I'm not saying anything about the how, but Dean sure needs to work on his landing skills me thinks...hehehe Thanks for reading. Laura
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, mysterious ending! hope this gets a sequel ... i enjoyed it, thanks! --cricket
Author's Response: With any luck it'll get a string of sequels. Glad you liked it, thanks!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
Terrific read. Sam didn't remember what he did to get Dean back, so intriguing. Laura, I enjoy very much your writing, I'm looking forward to your series.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hey you, You already know my thoughts, but I have to say I really enjoyed this. That scene with Sam tracing the scars, I so saw that happening before I even got to that part in my head. The way you write Sam is one of my favorite ways and this whole story was very touching and intriguing. Sounds like there will be several questions surrounding how Dean came back, and I can't wait to see the demon war in this AU fleshed out. Also, loved the humor. The "dry heat" comment made me snicker.*laugh* Love that Dean came back Dean, with scars only he can see and that his memory is safely locked away...he's able to be there for Sam now that what has happened to him appears to be hidden from him. Looking forward to the series ;) -SJ P.S. Your artist is awesome! Please pass along that I love her banner.
Author's Response: Awww...thanks SJ, that's so sweet of you. The whole idea of the demon war has fascinated me ever since it was first brought out, I hope to do it justice. I will certainly pass word along to Maygin about the banner, she did an awesome job! Laura
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
Awesome story! As much as I feel for Dean and the awful memories of Hell, I just can't help but feel worse for Sam....especially since he blamed himself...This story had a lot of heart and angst. Some of my favorite things. Great job! ~Kayla
Author's Response: I feel the same way Kayla. I'm thinking Dean may not remember as much, but Sam certainly remembers every bit of what he saw. Thanks so much. Laura
Reviewer: Noelani618 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, this was a fantastic read Laura! I really wish Kripke would do something like this but I highly doubt it. Anyway I loved having Dean back and how he just knows where Sam is, knows when Ruby comes... Brilliant! I look forward to more in this series.
Author's Response: Thanks Tamara.
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love your stories, Bayre, and this is no exception. Looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so very much.
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ahhh, see, I knew eveyrone was gonna like this one. I certainly did when I read it through. As people have mentioned, you write the brotherly dynamic wonderfully.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Ness, it means a lot from you.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was brilliant,i loved it. I'm looking forward to your series.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm looking forward to writing it.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great story,glad Dean is back in the fight, Hope that's true for the show.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
Laura, I just hope that whatever Kripke has in mind for us in the opener to season 4, it's as eloquent and as beautifully put together as this... Great work. XX Louy
Author's Response: Awww...what a kind thing to say Louy. Thank you.
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was really good. I enjoyed it a lot. Like the way you paint the brotherly dynamic in all of your fics and this was no exception. Looking forward to the whole series. Kirsty x
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
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