Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed)
08/07/08 02:46 PM · On:
That was beautiful. You actually made me cry when Sam hugged Dean - umm, and I don't *ever* cry.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm very happy you enjoyed it. Ooh, and I made you cry... that makes me smile!!
Reviewer: Sweet Oblivion (Signed)
25/06/08 05:16 PM · On:
I loved it. Its really deep. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much and for saying so! Very happy you loved it.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed)
07/06/08 07:36 AM · On:
Wow! Great job Helen! I had to stop reading at the line "until my brother was no more." That made me shiver---very powerful!
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon!! Sorry for the shiver, but we all know that Dean will not be no more for long!! (ok, did that make sense?)
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed)
05/06/08 11:47 PM · On:
Wow, this was intense. I like that you used rhyming poetry, instead of free verse. Very Sam-like, trying to impose order on devastation and loss. Sue
Thanks Sue! Never written a poem in my entire adult life, so thanks for the confidence boost!
Reviewer: Live1970 (Signed)
03/06/08 01:05 AM · On:
No chicky, it didn't suck. It was actually very good. My heart just breaks not only for Sam but Bobby too. He was obviously the heavy hand on Sam's shoulder that cried as he dug the hole. Very nicely done, I really liked it.
Author's Response: Thanks girlfriend!! I am very curious to see what Bobby's reaction will really be when he sees poor Dean on the floor. God, I hope we get a scene like that!!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed)
03/06/08 12:32 AM · On:
i think this poem is a very good summary of how Sam feels.....and i'm sorry if this wasn't your intentions, but i was smiling as i read it...it was cute! although i don't think that was your purpose, and no, it's not bad at all, just funny... :)
Author's Response: That's totally ok, you can take it anyway you want to. That's what it was meant to do! Thanks for reading it too...like I always say, I'll try anything once, twice if I like it.
Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed)
02/06/08 10:32 PM · On:
wow... I don't ususally like reading poetry but this one I absolutely loved!
this poem is so far from sucking that you thinking it might, forces me to comment and inform you that it simply does not! good job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am thrilled that you took the time to read it. I am also thrilled that it inspired you to comment too. That really means a lot to me and thank you again!!!
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed)
02/06/08 04:10 PM · On:
Helen, i thought this was wonderful. and it most certainly did not suck! i really like how you ended it, with one heckuva promise.
thanks for bucking up and posting this :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much Cricket! I have to say, if Vanessa hadn't inspired me to try something different, I never would have done it. I am thrilled you enjoyed it and as for the ending...well, that's what I'd like to see come September, but we'll see.
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed)
02/06/08 12:37 PM · On:
Ok u can release ur breath now..... It was truly awesome. Honestly I LOVED it. It is so touching. I guess u r a poet after all. Anyways......... good job!!!!
You're too kind...but keep saying it anyway!! (Ah, just kidding..well, not really but...)
Thank you so much for enjoying that little mental diversion of mine! I really do appreciate it. Ok, back to torturing the poor boys now...but thanks again (can't seem to say it enough!)
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed)
02/06/08 12:22 PM · On:
Ooh! So good! Very well done.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Coldfire (Signed)
01/06/08 11:43 PM · On:
Awesome poem! I like Sam's determination at the end, it makes me feel better. : )
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! We can only hope that Sam finds a way because I'd really hate to have to watch Dean crawl out of hell all by himself. I have a feeling he's going to need all the help he can get!
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed)
01/06/08 07:14 PM · On:
No this definitely did not suck. I liked it. It rhymed and I think you did a good job expressing how Sam felt about Dean's death in the season finale.
Thanks so much!! I am happy to hear you liked it! I am dying to see how Sam really ends up dealing with Dean's death because, let's face it, if Mystery Spot is any indication...well, season 4 is going to be pretty interesting!!
Thanks again, it meant a lot!!
Reviewer: bayre (Signed)
01/06/08 05:28 PM · On:
I liked it!
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! I am thrilled you liked it and took the time to read and review it!!
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed)
01/06/08 04:26 PM · On:
OMG.......that was beautiful. the rhyming and meter were flowing! And the pain in the words..........I got all teary!! No it did not suck, nor would I consider it drivel! Great job!!!! (OK....you can stop holding your breath now!)
Oh no, I think my lips have turned blue...whew, that's better!
Ok, seriously, I am thrilled that you enjoyed my rambling thoughts and thank you so much for the wonderful compliment!
See, I'm smiling!!!
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed)
01/06/08 03:19 PM · On:
WOW THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!!!! I THINK THAT YOU DID AN AWESOME JOB!!! KEEP IT UP!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I am really glad you loved it and even happier you told me so!!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed)
01/06/08 01:47 PM · On:
Don't know what you were worried about that was a wonderful poem.
Author's Response: Aww, come on. You know me by now, I freak out about everything i write, don't I? Thanks so much for enjoying it, it means a lot that you liked it!
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed)
01/06/08 12:30 PM · On:
I always liked poetry and this poem sums up those last minutes perfectly. And then the funeral... gawd, heart breaking. Could clearly picture it in my mind. And Sam's rage is palpable in the last verse. Thanks, it isn't bad at all!!
Thanks Ilka! First attempt at a poem and probably my last. (That's hard stuff to write, and I'm not the touchy/feely kind of person to spit that out on a regular basis)
Really glad you liked it and thanks for the R&R!!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed)
01/06/08 12:27 PM · On:
Cool, sounds like a poem to me and also sounds like sammy would feel
"We placed Dean into hallowed ground" That's the line that choked me up and this one
"To make that hell bitch truly pay."
The one that made the huntergirl blood in me boil for a fight!Let's go get the bitch!
Thanks Bev, you made me smile!
I know that in real life (Well, SN real life) that Sam and Bobby would have salted and burned him but in my opinion he's going to need a body to come back to, so better to keep it intact, right?
And hey, I'm right behind you on the hunt...let's go hunt that little bitch down!!
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed)
01/06/08 12:14 PM · On:
Who says you are not a poet - lol? Seriously, I really liked it and you captured the feelings of the end of the finale (and what might lie behind it) very well. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Author's Response: Thank you soo much, you are way too kind! I am really glad you liked it and I am grateful you told me so!! One decent poem in 38 years...guess that means I've got until I'm 76 to write another.
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed)
01/06/08 10:50 AM · On:
Okay, you totally made me blush with your story notes. But I'm so happy I was an inspiration. I'm always amazed when someone says I am as I never expect to really be one.
I think you did great. You summed up those last vile, evil scenes perfectly. (Damn that Kripke.)
And all I can say is I so very much want your last stanza to come true. Though with some things I'm hearing, it might not.
Great work, Helen. Again, thank you so much for finding inspiration in that tiny poem I sent you. Should I really post it here?
Aww, thanks Vanessa! I have been hearing some not so uplifting things about season 4 too but I gotta say I think I like what I've heard. (Sounds all angsty!)
You are way too kind to me sometimes and yes, I think you should post it here...hey, I did, didn't I? (and having the overwhelming lack of self confidence that I have, it took a lot for me to do it too)