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Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 15/12/08 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 12

Oh my God, the undressing of Dean's personal items was just so heart-wrenching.  My stomach was clenching, my throat constricting.  It was just so horrible!

But I was really hoping to see how that scene played out!  You tease!

Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 26/08/08 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 12

Love it, again I really like your writing.  Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 12

I think I missed a chapter.  All the action seems to be in summary and I know that isn't your style.  Did you forget to post a chapter?

I like this chapter.  I'm glad everyone ended up at Jim's and that Sam and Dean are okay and especially that Duran and Syria are dead but what exactly happened?

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 11

Brilliant!  Now that's thinking on your toes.  I knew Caleb would save Dean somehow, but I didn't see that coming.

Glad that son of a bitch Kline finally got a sense of what he was doing, who's life he was taking.

The idea of Duran stripping Dean of his personal sentimental items and using Caleb t o do it was a piece of genius!  What torture and it didn't even draw blood.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 10

Holy shit!  That was incredible!  So Dean was the intended victim all along.

I can't believe Kline wants his son back so badly that he's willing to let other people lose their children.  He should know how painful the loss of a child is.

the repeated line about semantics was amusing.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 12

Another brilliant chapter.

Reviewer: youthere (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 11

I loved this chapter, can't wait for the next :)

Reviewer: youthere (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 10

ohh, didn't see that one coming.Very cool!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 11

Two amazing chapters.

I'm looking forward to the next part.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 9

OMG!  Duran is going to use Caleb or Dean for the body!  Brilliant!  They'll do anything to save Sam.  They'd better come up with an escape plan.

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 9

this is a great story!!!

I check every week to make sure I don't miss an update. OUTSTANDING work!!!!!!

I love the interaction between the boys and Caleb- you have made him mean so much more than  they did  in the series. AWESOME job!!!

I really like all of your stories-they are so poignant and so together. They read so smoothly and your readers are NEVER disappointed.

I can't wait for Dean and Caleb to take care of Duran and his witch.

I like the distinction Caleb made about wearing the ring, and just being in the Brotherhood.Excellent!!!

As far as wolves go, they do use Ravens to pinpoint kills.

You are so right about the loyalty factor in the wolf pack- exactly what should be with the Brotherhood.

because of the huge spiritual and mystical meanings attributed to wolves by the Native people, the Brotherhood could only benefit from those attributes.

as always , a perfect piece of writing for a great writer.

more please.

BRAVO!!~!!

 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 8

Bird is a wonderful character!  I hope we see her again! 

It was nice getting a better view into Caleb's past.  We know so little about before Mac took him in.  I like getting little snippets of his history.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 7

Amazing chapter!  You described Sam's pain and Dean's helplessnes wonderfully!

Not sure I'd trust Caleb to shoot me up with morphine.  I guess Sam's hurting so badly he really wouldn't care.  Death might even be a relief.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 6

Wow!  That was a lot of drama, but unlike Hughes I liked it!

When Dean tells Syria there's a first time for everything I wanted to cheer.  I hope she gets hers in the end.  She an Hughes both deserve their comeuppance.

I'm hurrying off for more!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 9

Brilliant chapter.i see what you mean about the brotherhood and wolves,i love wolves,i have quite a few wolf pictures hanging in my house.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 5

Amazing chapter!  Love the interaction of Caleb and the Winchesters.  They're so funny.

I didn't expect Duran to show up in the middle of the night.  Obviously his tiemtable is short if he couldn't wait until morning.

Wonderful, creepy scene with Duran, Dean and Caleb.  I don't know if it's good or bad that Caleb can see Duran's depraved thoughts. 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 4

Damn!  Duran and Syria did something to Sam to blackmail John into doing what they want!  There goes Dean's lust for the witch.  If he gets his hands on her she'll be burned at the stake!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 3

So either Duran tried something or Caleb used his psychic abilities and knew the nasty fantasies swirling in the creep's mind.

I love Dean and Caleb's cracks at one another.  Especially when Caleb calls Dean Captain One Helluva Bullshitter.

It's cute the way Dean has to check on Sam as soon as he gets in.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow!  John and teen-age Sam getting along (at least for a little while).  It's so cute how they miss Dean.

Hey, are we going to find out in this story what Duran did to Caleb?  You've had me curious for the longest time.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

How wicked!  Poisoning poor Sam.  Dean and Caleb are going to kick Duran's ass.  Well, if there's anything left when John gets done with him.

I know she's evil, but I kind of like Syria.  I don't know what she sees in Duran though.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 8

I loved that chapter,the banter between Dean and Caleb is really funny.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 8

I love this story soo much!! Caleb is my favorite character ever!!!

thank you for creating the Brotherhood!!!!!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great update,looking forward to chapter eight.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/06/08 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 6

Brilliant update,

I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 04/06/08 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 5

Two great chapters.

I'm loving this story.

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