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Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 30/05/08 02:30 PM · On: A Guest for Dinner

Very nice.

Possessed Bobby is not good.  



Author's Response: Thanks. And possessed Bobby will have a - hopefully interesting - explanation in the next chapter. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 30/05/08 03:43 AM · On: A Guest for Dinner

Oooh, another good chapter. 

I have a question though, given that Bobby was the one to give the boys their original protection against possession, wouldn't he have taken similar precautions himself?  Or is it one of those 'high level demons don't follow the rules' kinda things?

Yeah, ok, I'm being a nit-picker.  Really enjoying this story and looking forward to next update.

Kirsty x



Author's Response:

Yeah, you're touching on kind of a sore point there (one which I had hoped people wouldn't notice too strongly, lol). There will be an attempt at explaining it in the chapter to come, though I don't know whether it's enough to satisfy a nit-picker (which btw is a trait I've always welcome in my readers). If it isn't - I am aware of that small plot hole, and once I find a good way to fix it I will do.

Thanks a lot for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying this tale so far. 

Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 09:50 PM · On: A Guest for Dinner

Great , I really can't wait for the next chapter , we are all heart broken  here about Dean, please be kind, and keep up the good writting, Di................

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm just as heartbroken as everybody else on the site here...which doesn't mean that I'm going to make anything easy for the boys though. Thanks a lot for the review.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 09:04 PM · On: A Guest for Dinner

Nice twist to the story... where is Dean's soul?  will be waiting for the next chapter. Great chapter

Author's Response: Well, that is the question Sam would very much like to have answered, lol. Thanks a lot for the review.

Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 12:22 PM · On: A Night in Darkness

Intriguing beginning.  Like your writing style.  Got a really good grasp on Sam's state of mind.  Looking forward to next update.

Kirsty



Author's Response: Thanks. More should be to come soon.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 28/05/08 01:49 PM · On: A Night in Darkness

This chapter was so moving, I'm sorry to say that I was actually crying while reading it.Great stuff. 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I didn't mean to make anybody cry, but I'll take it as a compliment since I was going for the heavy emotions with this one. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks a lot.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 28/05/08 01:11 PM · On: Prologue: Behind the Veil

Loved this first chapter, looking forward to reading more

Author's Response: Thank you, I hope you'll enjoy the rest too.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/05/08 10:30 AM · On: A Night in Darkness

I love Sam's sentiments about Dean's gun and his thoughts concerning Dean making a deal that Sam was forced to live with.  No matter how much Sam may have tried to imagine what Dean had suffered at his death, he couldn't possibly understand until this moment.

 



Author's Response: Yes, I agree with you there - Sam didn't understand until he went through it himself. This story is interesting for me to write because I'm a Dean girl through and through, so getting into Sam's head was a new experience for me. I'm really glad you like it, thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/05/08 09:45 AM · On: Prologue: Behind the Veil

Wonderful beginning!  Dean crying out Sam's name is so touching!  I love the way you describe what the power of his brother's name is to Dean.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Glad you liked it so far.

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