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Reviewer: jennie81 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/10 09:54 PM · On: Family Business

good story clap clap

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 07:19 AM · On: Subtle Shifts

I thought that they shattered the copy of John Winchester? I am seriously loveing it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 07:00 AM · On: Awakening

Its emensly and unique that this story has made it to the top three and that is great.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 05:52 AM · On: Soulbound

This is getting me a bit over worked, and the only reason its like that is because your a damn good story teller. With so much illustrations and graphic situations it even scared me. So, thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 05:11 AM · On: Everything in Reverse

Thank you for allowing the character of Bobby still exisit. Again, many of the details rock. Thanks.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 04:16 AM · On: The Demon's Trap

This story is trully a meat eater of cheating and distruction. I enjoyed reading all the vivid illustration of what is happening and of how the prognosses was going to end and it doesn't look good for either of them.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/12/08 10:45 AM · On: Backtracking

Damn Lilth spoth them and that isnt fair. This is like a full hit for me and I'm enjoying this heavenly. Thanks.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/12/08 08:32 AM · On: A change in plans (2)

Well, I can't be beotching about it now. It is good, with on its action and total perpoall the imagery and strong words is all that I can take it keeps giving major emphasis to a major purpose and that is cool.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/12/08 05:16 AM · On: A change in plans (1)

This is one damaging critter of enemy. Again, you have choosen words that make me stop and visualize the senerio. I like that. Thanks.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/12/08 04:58 AM · On: Heaven and Hell and in Between

MERRY CHRISTMASS . . . . this is a hell of chapter to this stry. Thank You.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/12/08 07:59 AM · On: Fight or Flight

Seriously a killer ass thriller.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 08:11 AM · On: A Test of Strength and Trust

See your bad to the mystic bone of the story. Damn you, you have me at a cliff hanger. I will stat this that this is trully a game that I feel someone on the good side may not make it.

Then again I cant read this too quickly 'cause i'll miss the best part. So I keep reading and I keep likeing it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 04:43 AM · On: A Small Legacy

Hey, I will state it once again you are doing a hell of a thriller.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 03:56 AM · On: Just Another Road Trip

"Yeah. We got some shopping to do." . . . . Now, that is a statement that Dean would so state. Your flowing ideas in that mystic brain of yours kicks bonedified congrates to a story that keeps me crying and waiting for the best of the characters to succed. SO, again thanks.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 02:31 AM · On: In Between

No, no mistakes. No pun needed. Anyway, man this is getting to pain full, but I do like the vivid imagrey of your story. I do hope that sams  ? is answered.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/12/08 11:44 PM · On: Going Deep

This is a very heroric time. The visual aid of torment within the character eyes of SAM I could bare witness to and that is scary. I think the incedent that happen to me in 98' gave me something that I don't know feels strang thats all.

The imagery you've stated has propably left readres like my self hugh advantage of feeling what SAM is feeling so thanks.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/12/08 09:24 PM · On: Fickle Human Emotions

The character of Ruby is like a five year old child throwing a tantrum. I approve the images that where placed in this story is highly affected and it feels like I am witnessing to this conflict and also want questions and answers. So, thanks for the hard work. I love it eternaly.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/12/08 07:01 AM · On: A Guest for Dinner

CRAP!!! This story is getting tricker by the milasecond. Lilit is in bobby, and thanks for those vivid illustration of what is occuring.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/12/08 03:31 AM · On: A Night in Darkness

This is one of the sadest, heroric, and lovable moment in time that would probably will never forget.

I enjoyed how you elaborated the sentamental status of SAM and DEAN. The symbolic unite of SAM & DEAN in the Chevy. His protection over his brothers body in the form of SLEEP.

How hypnotic, the attrihbutes of SAM carrying his brother to the entrance of BOBBYs home. Followed by the role of the mental state of his esense of being DEAN, and makeing sure that all the wounds were taken care of. His spiritual entity was transformed mentaly as if it where DEAN fixing SAM. Thank YOu.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/12/08 01:45 PM · On: Prologue: Behind the Veil

This is almost exactly if not completly the same as the one that was presented.

Author's Response: I'm afraid I really don't get what you're trying to tell me...sorry, it's probably me, but I really don't understand. What is the same, and what was presented? I've been thinking about it again and again, and I just can't figure it out. Help me understand it, please? Thanks, and sorry, lol.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/12/08 05:16 PM · On: A Night in Darkness

The characters of SAM and DEAN are like my brother and I. As a 4 or 5 year old I took care of my brother from any harm and damage and I can't see a day without him. It makes me feel only closer. Thanks.



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I think the best compliment is when a story of mine makes a reader relate to what I'm writing about. Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/12/08 07:48 AM · On: Prologue: Behind the Veil

very intense and vivid.

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 10:40 AM · On: Family Business

Thank you for a brilliant story.

I have really enjoyed reading it.

I'm looking forward to the sequel.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for reviewing so faithfully. I always enjoyed reading your reviews. And I promise I'm working ahrd on the sequel.

Thanks so much.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/08/08 06:09 AM · On: Subtle Shifts

What a brilliant chapter that was, i really enjoyed it.

I'm looking forward to the next part, with Dean, finding out what's been going on.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the chapter, I put a lot of effort into it. The next chapter is going to be the last one, and it'll answer a lot more questions, at least I hope so.

Thanks a lot for the review.

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 26/08/08 06:41 PM · On: Awakening

OMG! Dean's back! yay! I can't blame Sam for laughing, he has to be so relieved. I actually started laughing too!

I love this story. It's great to see Dean back, but the whole thing with Ruby betraying Sam, and Dean not coming back the same..... will they ever get a break?

I'm dying to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. But you're right, the boys just don't get a break. There's still a whole lot of issues to work through, and we all know how good Winchester men are at working through their issues, right?

Again, thanks for the review, and I'll work on getting the next chapter up as soon as possible. 

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