Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 5

And here my silly mind thought that Dean had passed on, you crafty devil you! This story was super, though I really can't imagine them simply dying from old age, but still it was beautiful and a little sad. Loved it to bits!

Author's Response:

Aw, thanks for reading all the way through and leaving a review - and stars! Love me some stars, LOL

I thought Dean would have been gone, seeing as he'd be older and seemed to have had more than his fair share of wounds over the series. But then I just couldn't leave wee John without a great-uncle, and I certainly could not imagine a grandpa Sam without his brother. I'm just too soft, I suppose!

Thanks again - much appreciated!

 

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love Dean's ecstatic hanging from the ceiling upside down, man! That's awesome.  :)

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

As soon as you said the grandpa was tall I knew it was Sam. This is very intrigueing have to read more.

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 31/05/08 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

Hey Toza,

I really liked this story. Guess I needed to read about Sam and Dean both still being around in 2051. And I loved the overlapping timeframes, with John and Sam interrupting Sam's story with comments from the peanut gallery;-) Really glad that Gud was there after all, from some of your earlier chapters, I wasn't sure he was alive and kicking.

Love that Sam has a great family and a good, understanding (if clueless) daughter-in-law in Sarah.

And, yeah, I can buy Dean having three ex's - and I'm betting they're all younger than he is, too. I'm also wondering if John is ever going to have to be a hunter, like his namesake.

Good, interesting and fun read!  Sue

 

Author's Response:

I didn't really know if Dean would turn up until Sam finished the story, and then I knew he had to come back!

Thanks for the review, and the shiny shiny last sentence. This is better than pie, LOL

:)

Ta! 

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 5

haha now I understand who Gud is!! sorry I was kinda confused for a sec!!awesome job!! please update soon!!

Author's Response:

LOL, glad it caught up with you!

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review - and yours stars! Woooooo-hooooooo, do we love stars! And not just cos it's Friday night over here in Hong Kong and we've been on the Purple Nurples, LOL

Ta for reading! (And love your user name!)

 

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 3

LOL Love the Assuming thing am always sayin it!

Nice chapter! good build up...

I'm glad you took my constructive criticism well on the last chapter...some people don't and so I usually don't bother...but I really thought your story was good and you write very well so...

Loved how the mom walked in just as Dean was saying "bitch" in the flashback!

 Looking forward to the next installment of this one! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

I really wanted to have lots in interruptions in the flashbacks, like every time one of The Boys was about to swear, but that would have been overkill or just a drag... But I'm glad the moment pulled off!

Thanks for coming back to continue reading!

 

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 28/05/08 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 3

I loved this chapter!!please update soon!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

More up tomorrow, if all goes well at work, LOL

Thanks for the stars! I'm lovin' the stars! Better than pie!

 

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 2

Great chapter! My only comment would be to change point of views when grandpa Sam in telling the story...When you tell someone a story you are usually doing it from the "I" point of view... would make it easier to differentiate between what the story being told his and where we are back to John and his Gramps.

But Seriously good development as far as the story goes! Nicely done!

If you do want to change the point of view thing and need any help with it feel free to contact me. I am currently working on a story in first person point of view so I can definitely help!

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a review!

I did think about using the first person POV but ditched it in favour of an episode-like scene shift. I hoped the older story being told would appear to be wibbly-wobbly flashback moments, rather than Sam's voice dominating. Not that there's owt wrong with a dominating Sam, LOL

Ta for your concrete con-crit (not many people leave it) and thanks again for taking time out to read it.

Good luck with yours, too! 

 

Reviewer: Supernatural24 (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow ! Great job ! Awesome story. I'm not that quick so it took me little while to get it was Sam and who Gud was but it was a really original idea and you did it pretty well. :):):)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Next part coming soon...