Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 08/06/08 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sam
That was sweet. I was wondering at first why Sam's favortie toys was being written from Dean's point of view but I loved the ending. The smiles reflecting each other .... beautiful. Off in search of more. Thanks again.
Author's Response: Kim, wow. That was quick. Thx. Yeah, writing Sam's POV isn't my speciality. I am a Dean-Girl. Oh and I love the way children smile in their sleep and it is just so like Dean to look at him and smile unconsciously... Catch you at the other stuff. Hope you like it. Bit scared though... Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sam
Two wonderful chapters,i loved it.
Author's Response: Hello Lindsay. Thanks for the review and I am glad you like them. I am really fond of both the kids. And the grown ups for that matter. Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 1 Dean
Ilka, Definitely a "something in my eye" story! I really enjoyed it at the London gathering and I'm so pleased to see you've posted it. It's a lovely insight into "what might have beens" and lost childhood and a great way to bring in the Bowie knife habit of Dean's. Alison
Author's Response: Hey ya Alison. Oh. It's over a week ago already. I had the greatest time meeting you guys. Thanks for the review, hunny. A lost childhood is definitely what they had. How could that ever be funny and not ask for something in our eyes... Cheers Ilka
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sam
So beautiful!!! I'm almost speechless, written so powerfully;) Lou weren't the only one with something in her eye! lol I'm so pleased I got to finally meet you and can't wait for the next one Schelz x
Author's Response: Schelz. Thanks for your kind words. I wasn't sure at all about the story. Didn't want to read it out at all. Thought we all were supposed to do something, so I wrote it. When it came down to the three of us, I immediately thought I had no chance at all. And I so loved yours. Was so sure they'd pick it for the winning bit... Which they did! So, thanks again and those stars are great... Hugs and snogs. Ilka
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 Dean
Ilka-babe so sweety and sad and just...*blinks away wetness* The first part just pulled me in. *In happier times, when Dean still was able to be a regular boy* I loved it when you read it out and I love it even more now it's in print! This is one of those stories I can read more than once, more than three times even... Love Schelz x
Author's Response: Oh Schelz. Sorry didn't want to make you cry... well, actually I did, hehe. The best part in writing is the influence on the reader... that is if it works... Thanks for those lovely stars babe! Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 2 Sam
Good choices a softball and the ever great Winnie the Pooh (my hero). i am 39 years old and i will always love that bear. curious as to what the others will chose. Renee
Author's Response: Hey Renee. Glad you dropped by and left a review. Dean's toy was really easy to come up with and to write, done in about 30 minutes. Sam however took me almost the whole two and a half hours left.... Winnie is great isn't he! Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sam
Aw! so cute! :) Loved it!
Author's Response: Again, thank you guys. Sam is always harder to do for me. I'm an obsessed Dean-girl, so... But still, you left a review and an honest rating! GREAT. Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 1 Dean
Beautiful! I love that his toy became the weapon. Wow!
Author's Response: Hey you two. Not sure if it's April or Kelly, so I thank you both for reading and leaving a review. Especially those stars lighted my spirits! Ilka
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sam
that was so sweet it makes me just want to hug both boys. thankyou
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks. Glad you connected to them. Ilka
Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sam
that is so sweet!!
Author's Response: Hey Jaymie, glad you liked it. Sweet kids those two. Thanks for the review... Cheers, Ilka/RoweenaC
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sam
And just as beautiful as the first, loved it...and ok, I may have a little something in my eye right now...ehem...XX Louy
Author's Response: See? It's just touching. Love Sam's mile and Dean's love for little baby bro... Makes me wanna cry too. And I don't do humour anyway. So, why are you so surprised it turned out to be a sad one? But I am so pleased that I brought you to tears, seeing as you are always so in control and all. That was even better than the poster... Gee, I sound mean, don't I... Sorry... Ilka
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 Dean
'Something in my eye...?' What a cheek...anyway on to the story...and I still can't believe that you not only managed to write something poignant and beautiful but incredibly fast too...just incredible...moving on to Sam.
Author's Response: HAHAHHAHA! Sorry, couldn't stop myself from quoting that bit! You know me and my quoting obsession!! Thanks for the Poignant and Incredible. Coming from you, that's just ... ehm... think I've got something in my eye now... XXXX And thanks for the wonderful day! Ilka
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sam
ilka. I think the line that really gets me in this one is the last line "The tiny fist closed reflexively around the cuddly, soft fabric. A smile, deepening dimples, blossomed on the slumbering face and was instantly, yet unseen, mirrored in Dean's face." Gee hunny that's a soul stealer of a line! Great work, Ilka. Very proud for ya! Bev xx
Author's Response: Thanks again. Yeah. I just like the way children smile in their sleep unconsciously. And I just love the way Dean looks at Sam sometimes when lil bro doesn't know. He is such a loving big bro.... aaaahhh where's me bucket? xxxx Ilka
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 1 Dean
Ilka. This is a beautiful piece of writing. Its soft and gentle and resonates with a poignant sadness that is very touching. It has had the LouLou - 'something in my eye' effect on me big style tonite! So glad you came all that way Ilka, your prescence made it extra special. Loves ya babe! bev xxx
Author's Response: This story is so dedicated to you and the gals from last Saturday. Don't mean to make your eyes water, but I just didn't know how a Winchester-boy could have something funny as a toy having such a damaged childhood... And I don't do humour anyway. Like them sad and angsty... you know me. Loves ya too. Ilka
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