:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: WendyLee (Signed) · Date: 04/04/11 04:23 PM · On: Holding Back

I love this story, hope there will be another chapter soon!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/09 07:15 PM · On: Holding Back

I loved the recap. Thanks for that. I liked the Superman reference along with Dean's pep talk to Sam in the motel. Great job on the dialogue as well. Fantastic chapter! I look forward to reading Chapter 5.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 03:16 PM · On: Slowly and Painfully

This is to close to end. Please take extra care of your self. I can't wait fo rthe next one. Thanks.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 02:47 PM · On: Watch Me

I must thank you before hand if no one has, but at the end of the story I do approve of the short cliff note of the next chapter. It has true edicate of a writer.
The words and the determination of sense that are placed on each character are very strong and me as a reader can sense it.
You where trying very hard to get this story published with stress of course, but I tell you that this story it self has carried its strong message and wait and llike that thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 02:27 PM · On: To the Limit

This is to intense that even my sense of abilities are starting to bother me. I can feel warmth in what the character is doing, but its getting brighter to me and that's it.
The graphic words that have been portrayed has been very well enginered.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 01:30 PM · On: Shades of Gray

I do hope that you are feeling very well. The story that I'm reading is very impacting visual of what is happening and like the character of Sam Dean would not allow him to go forth.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/04/09 02:52 PM · On: In My Arms

No . . . no I love it and the demised antics that Dean creates to confuse his little brother, but words that can make one trully sense that their is someone beside them with no questions asked.

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/09 11:21 PM · On: Slowly and Painfully

Lol! For some reason that last line really cracked me up! "Sam sighed."..Cuz that's probably EXACTLY what he'd do! They have such a hard, weird life, that a sigh is pretty much the only thing left to do to portray feelings. ;D

Author's Response: I'm glad you understood the mood I was going for with that. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 09:05 PM · On: Slowly and Painfully

Thanks for the update. I loved this chapter. I liked how you did the recap of your story like a SPN episode. You did an excellent job describing both Ellen and the Gypsy's possession. Having Mary helping angels and having visions were nice twists to this story. I liked the cliffhanger at the end. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and sticking with the story. I wasn't sure about the angel angle, but I wanted to bring my story a little bit closer to the show's. Hope you like the rest of the story as well!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 08/10/08 08:09 PM · On: Watch Me

Another enjoyable read. I liked the setup of the chapter with then and then now just like a SPN episode. Summoning Botis should be interesting. I look forward to reading that.

Author's Response: Have I told you how much I appreciate your feedback? If not, thank you! I am glad that you are looking forward to the next part of the story.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/08 06:50 PM · On: To the Limit

This update was definitely worth the wait. I loved Chapter 3. I liked the idea of Sam's genetic memory being the key to unlocking his psychic abilities. I liked the dialogue. The cliffhanger at the end was a good way to end this chapter. Poor Sam! I can't wait to read Chapter 4.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. You are always so great to review for me. I really appreciate the support.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 04:55 AM · On: Shades of Gray

CONGRATES TO THE BOTH OF YOU!!!! This is a total bitchen story, can't wait to hear and feel the final conclusion. Thank YOU!!!!!!! my rating is different but worth it 200++++

Author's Response: Glad to see that you also found this story. Thanks for the reviews and well wishes. I hope to update soon.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 04:22 AM · On: In My Arms

This is more than that of a rating system of a ten, its more logical to 100++. Thanks! A wonderful masterpiece.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 07:22 PM · On: Shades of Gray

I liked this chapter. I liked Dean's recap of his talk with Ellen in the diner. I liked your word choice in describing Sam having a vision. Genetic memory-interesting. I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for your detailed review. I hope you find the next chapter good as well.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 21/05/08 10:14 AM · On: In My Arms

I love this story!! awesome job sooo far!! update soon please!!

Author's Response: I will begin work on it this weekend as well as my other story and hope to post both soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 08:35 PM · On: In My Arms

Good start to the story, will be looking out for updates.

Author's Response: I'll be happy to bring you one real soon and I hope you stick with the story! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 09:33 AM · On: In My Arms

Great start!
I like the by play between the boys.
You have the Winchester way right on the money.
Excellent job!
More please.
BRAVO!!!!!!

Author's Response:
Oh, I will be happy to give you more! Bravo to you for leaving the nice review!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 19/05/08 09:31 PM · On: In My Arms

Don't apologize for your first chapter being short. I thought it was well written. I liked the conversation between Dean and Sam when they patched things up between them. I look forward to Chapter 2.

Author's Response: Thank you for your throughful comments. I really appreciate your taking the time to do it!

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