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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 6

"Good to see the brain scrambler didn't put the smartass lobe of your brain out of commission." Hilarious!
"He's telepathically impotent." Now that's a mean cut! It had me practically rolling on the floor.
Great ending! Smart of Dean to return and gather the psychic fry daddy for inspection. I'm sure that will be useful in upcoming stories.

Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 6

Excellent! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow! This is as good as public television---okay much better! It sounds like fairly soon Dean is going to have to take his place as the Guardian. Things are really coming to a boiling point.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 4

Damn that Ian Hastings! If he wasn't such a great antagonist I'd want Dean to shoot him. I still want Dean to kill him, but his place in your stories is too good to eliminate. And Silas Fox is equally useless.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 5

Great update,I enjoyed that very interesting.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/05/08 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

Fantastic update,looking forward to more.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 22/05/08 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 4

noo Caleb and Sam got hurt again???? anyway another awesome chapter done!! update soon and looking forward to the next one!!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/05/08 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 3

Now that's the Winchester luck in full force! They check out an old crime scene and run into the bad guy.
Love the update! Keep 'em comin'!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/05/08 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 3

a very exciting chapter.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 21/05/08 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 3

another awesome chapter!! you aer doing an awesome job!!! please update soon!!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

two great chapters,looking forward to more.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 2

haha awesome job!! I loved it when Caleb said you realize that makes you tinker bell right!! awesome job!!!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 2

I like the way the boys shift the responsibility of one another between them. They are a typical family.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yay! The boys are together again! Just mix two Winchesters, one Reaves, and a good plot and I'm yours for the duration!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 2

OK... the RV... it surpassed my expectations....I'm still laughing.
Caleb and Dean are in hog heaven ...Dollywood.....missing front teeth on the clerk...beyond funny!!!!!!
Poor Sam, he has 2 smart asses to deal with.
Excellent vivid verbage and timing- perfect display of the counterpoint among the hunters.AWESOME.
The underlying argument still simmering, and the raw emotions exposed by it-OUTSTANDING.
You never disappoint your readers!
More please >
BRAVO!!!!!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

this is great!!! i love your stories of the 3 boys together.
Caleb to me is the 3rd Winchester brother, and he really knows how to stir up the pot with them.
the bit about the Yoga...Tai Chi made me laugh out loud-I could picture Sammy doing this, and the other 2 just busting him about the "girly" moves-AWESOME writing
You always have the boys characters right on the mark-
OUTSTANDING job!!
the 3 of them in an RV...oh I can see the craziness already. Excellent
more please
BRAVO!!!

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