Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ooh, this is a good start.  Werepebble?  Scary!  Very funny and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.

Kirsty x

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/05/08 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 2

Damn, Eva, what a great concept and a fantastic way of telling your story too. I found your whole style really laid back and easy to read, and I'd worked my way through both chapters in what felt like seconds...

I'm adding this story to my fav list as I think it's really original, thanks for sharing and update soon! XX Louy

Author's Response:

Hi Louy

Thank you so much for your kind words (I get all tongue- tied when people are so nice to me...:) ) 

I'm very flattered and I hope the rest of the story doesn't dissapoint :)

cheers yt