Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 12:49 PM · On: Weight of the World
What a witch making Sam leave. Things are never good when Sam and Dean are away from each other.
Author's Response: Thank you, darkhunter. Nurse Perdue IS a witch, isn't she? More to come soon.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 27/07/08 03:19 AM · On: Weight of the World
Can't tell how much I do abhore nurse Ursula, some threat! Knowing that Dean will be all alone in this room makes me really nervous, he's so not up to fight anything on his own. Hope Sam will be concerned enough (he did feel something strange about the room, right?) to stay at least at the hospital. Tense chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, bia. I'm happy a few are still reading this story. It's very good to hear that you abhor Nurse Ursula. That makes my day. :-)
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 05:52 PM · On: Weight of the World
Ok, the coffee is just gross. Poor Sam. sent off by himself. Grrrr...mean nurse. Great chapter Ness! Laura
Author's Response: Thanks, Laura. I'm glad you liked the description of the coffee. I read it aloud to someone and when she wrinkled her nose in distaste, I knew I'd done a good job.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 02:07 PM · On: Weight of the World
Fantastic chapter, can't wait for the next one that will hopefully shed some light on whats wrong with Dean's room. Great work.
Author's Response: Thank you, Maureen. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 10:20 AM · On: Do You Know Where You Are?
A great update. Can't wait to find out what's wrong with the room.
Author's Response: Thank you, darkhunter. I'm so happy you're enjoying this one.
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 21/07/08 03:41 PM · On: Do You Know Where You Are?
Hey Ness, great chapter. As always I loved the stuff between Dean and Sam. Poor Dean, ouch, makes my head hurt. Laura
Author's Response: Hey, thanks, Laura. I appreciate you leaving me a review on this chapter. Yeah, that "stuff" between Sam and Dean always makes my day.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 21/07/08 02:44 PM · On: Do You Know Where You Are?
Just loved this update with Sam so worried and protective about his brother; then a nasty turn when an already sick Dean now will be treated in this mysterious Room 4-22 (great idea!!), hope Sam will be on the alert! And as always, the poem was a special treat!!
Author's Response: Thank you, bia1007. Was a little worried about this chapter since it wasn't getting any reviews--thought maybe my writer's block shone through and it sucked. You like the Room 4-22 idea? I was wondering if maybe people were rolling their eyes and thinking it was too trite. Thank you again for taking the time to keep reading this and for leaving a review. AND for the stars. It's much appreciated!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 04:13 AM · On: War Path
This is automaticly thrilling except for the bitc****ness of the security garude. I'd of smacked him personally.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 04:05 AM · On: Twenty Stitches in Time
HELL NO !!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't really care less whom HE or SHE is no STINKING FOOT ON BUMBER of a beauti 67' Other than that its looking good.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 03:51 AM · On: A Multitude of Restraints
No, you didn't but it has freaked me out a bit.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 03:40 AM · On: Open Your Eyes
If i knew what the hell of a job they were doing this time I'd so tell you. It sounds very interesting, but don't hurt either of them so much.
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 25/06/08 07:50 AM · On: War Path
So glad Sam defended Dean's baby! Nobody should mess with the Impala. Trumbull is an idiot. Chocolate and Spam? That was clever.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 08:43 AM · On: War Path
Oh Boy - lets face it, Trumball just doesn't know who he's messing with does he...but I have a feeling he's gonna find out...lol Great chapter mate and looking forward to a lot more of this...XX Louy
Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 03:32 PM · On: War Path
Chocolate and spam... yuck!! Great comparison though. I love the thought of poor Dean with a skull fracture... but that probably doesn't surprise you, does it? Love it, like I love all your stuff Vanessa, keep it coming please!!
Author's Response: Maybe I should share the little story behind the chocolate and Spam comparison?! lol Everybody's liking it so much. Somehow I DID know that you might like seeing Dean in this condition. I don't think I hold a candle to your doses of afflictions to him but I'm trying very hard to improve in that area. lol I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 10:29 AM · On: War Path
Your muse most definitely is back, great chapter!! Enjoyed Sam setting some limits to this guard - still can't believe he tried to spit on Dean's car, what a halfwit! Why do I have the feeling Dean is not out of the wood yet (maybe it's the concussion or the 'enough is enough' comment what's bothering me, can't really tell), so could you please update soon, because I have to know!
Author's Response: Thank you for saying my muse is back. Thank God for it. (I even wrote and posted a oneshot this morning--when he comes back he does so with a vengence. lol) I think I'll chain him up for awhile so he can't get away again. Yeah, Dean's not quite out of the woods yet. I've still got a few tricks up my sleeve for him. I'll update as quickly as I can.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 07:21 AM · On: War Path
Great update.i'ts good that Dean's coming around. Loved Sam putting the security guard in his place, he was a nasty man.Lol. And can i just say chocolate and spam yuck.
Author's Response: Thank you! Ooohhh, I had so much fun writing that Sam/security guard scene. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, chocolate and spam--sounded much more exotic and "Winchesterish" than oil and water.
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 02:41 AM · On: War Path
Great chapter Vanessa. and by the way, chocolate and Spam? EW! But a great visual! probably exactly the reaction you were hoping for! i'm enjoying this tale you're spinning. -cricket
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Everybody's liking the chocolate/spam comparison. hehe And there's a story behind why I used it too.
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 08:07 PM · On: War Path
Hehehee...chocolate and spam...yerk.....Great chapter! Go Sam, telling that guard off. Laura
Author's Response: Thank you, Laura. Yeah, I really had fun writing Sam there. And I'm glad you liked the chocolate/spam comment.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 06:51 PM · On: War Path
Great chapter, you have to keep going, to appease the fans of your work, More chapters SOON PLEASE!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, Maureen. I will work hard to appease the fans of my work--how could I do any less? :-) I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/08 04:54 PM · On: Twenty Stitches in Time
Liked Sam's exam, Dr. Ward really is cool (but aren't you too young to remember Doogie Howser?), also it was fun how Dean's beloved car was included. Still I'm worried about Dean!! This time the stars are for the chapter's poems, these are awesome and round off the chapters in an unique way!
Author's Response: Ahhh, thank you, bia1007. I really, really appreciate the nice review. Especially the nice comment regarding the poems. Ooohh, I only WISH I was too young to remember Doogie Howser. hehehe Let's just say I remember the days of Emergency and Starsky & Hutch (though admittedly I was a kid then). LOL
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 12:23 PM · On: Twenty Stitches in Time
Nope, still not boring. How clever that for once a flickering light wasn't a sign of something demonic. And I liked Dr. Ward! Keep it coming.
Author's Response: Thank you, Sanna. I'm thinking I like Dr. Ward too. I'm so glad you liked this chapter.
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 02:46 AM · On: Twenty Stitches in Time
I just started this story and I am really liking it so far! I loved Dr. Ward - oh, poor Sam, another car junkie :) Luckily Dean can't see the security guard and his baby. What's going on with Dean? Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a review. AND for the pretty stars. I'm so happy you're enjoying this one so far.
Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 09:02 PM · On: Twenty Stitches in Time
So, as I'm reading this and laughing at Sam's crack at the muscle car lovers and him thoroughly wishing his brother would get a room with the damn car all I can think about is poor Dean getting stitched up in the other room, still unconscious and needing x-rays. I sure hope you're going to tell that part of the story really soon!! Please...pretty please...with sugar on top...(groveling now, I'm so pathetic, aren't i?) Oh yeah, and let me just say too that's a really good thing Dean can't see where that security guards foot is because if he did, it would have been forcibly removed from it's leg and promptly shoved somewhere it really doesn't belong...if you know what I mean. Thanks Ness...Not slow, not boring!!
Author's Response: Oh dear, the pressure's on now. hehe I will do my level best to fulfill your wish, Helen. And, yeah, Dean would NOT be pleased if he could see the security guard. But I think Sam will handily take care of 'im. Thank you very, very much for the lovely review and the beautiful stars.
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 06:30 PM · On: Twenty Stitches in Time
Well the security guard obviously isn't one of THEM, foot on bumper...indeed! Great chapter Ness! Laura
Author's Response: Thank you, Laura. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave me a review.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 04:55 PM · On: Twenty Stitches in Time
Another great chapter. It's a good job Dean can't see what that security guard's doing.Lol. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: hehe Yeah, as I was writing it, I was thinking the same thing. I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed this chapter.
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