Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 10:30 PM · On: Gone Astray
Yikes! I hope they put Dean in another ward, I don't think he should go back to room 4-22! Get him away from Nurse Perdue!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 10:27 PM · On: It's Hungry
Ok, that nurse is some kind of supernatural entity, I just know it! I hope Sam finds Dean soon! Seems like he has hurt himself even more so! I wonder what the gray mass is?
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 10:21 PM · On: Dark of Night
Yikes, is there really something there? Nurse Perdeau seems off, too. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 10:14 PM · On: Weight of the World
i really do not like the nurse. I'm afraid for Dean! I do like Geri, though! Wondering what's going to happen next to Dean???
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 10:07 PM · On: Do You Know Where You Are?
Poor Dean! I have a feeling there is something dreadfully wrong with room 4-22! I'm really enjoying this story. Wonder what is in store for Dean next! I don't think Sammy can take much more of Dean being hurt!!!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 04:51 PM · On: Predator After Prey
OH MY STARS! My eyes raced through this so quickly I had to reread it for pleasure. The first time was primarily to see who 'dunnit'. Post again soon, please!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter so much. Thanks again for the review.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 04:43 PM · On: Stealth
Death shadows?! That sounds ominous! Thank God for Bobby. He'll know what to do. I'm rushing off to the next chapter---my boys are in trouble.
Author's Response: Glad to know you were worried about them. Thanks, Shannon.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 03:20 PM · On: Predator After Prey
GUH!! That was just friggin' creepy as HELL! Must resist the shudders at the head-rotation thing. Nope. Still shuddering...
Author's Response: Really? You thought it was creepy? I was hoping so, but I wasn't sure. I'm so glad to hear it all worked. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 15/02/09 07:02 AM · On: Open Your Eyes
Ooh! Hurt Deany-babe. And freaked out Deany-babe, by the sounds of that last yell....*rubs hands together with unholy glee*.... Love the little girl's thought about Sam - the tall man with the pretty eyes....awwwwwwwwww - out of the mouths of babes but so true. Could picture Sam trying to distract the spirit with everything he had - even though the actual scene was told in retrospect, I was still taken there. And what an a/h to run a stop sign and almost wipe out the boys on their way to hospital! Hope there was a cop at the next corner and the d*ckhead was pinged for speeding! Wonderful start, Vanessa - we're off and running! Oh,and sorry I haven't replied to the email yet - I've been unwell, and my hands have copped another infection - well, an allergic reaction. But the rash and blisters are clearing up, so I'll be back on the keyboard with a vengeance soon. Jules
Author's Response: Thanks, Jules. I'm happy your introduction to this story was fun.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 14/02/09 11:43 PM · On: Stealth
Ack! And I thought the previous chapters had evil cliffhangers! Girl, you'd better be updating this quick. The image of Dean's bed surrounded by all those sinister black shadows...yikes! Sue
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 08:22 AM · On: Stealth
The last line of this chapter brought me out in goosebumps, black shadows, so creepy, yikes lol.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 03:19 AM · On: Stealth
Scared out of my wits by now, to fight death shadows is a nearly impossible task and there's so much damage done already, Dean seriously injured, feels like he's tainted by these shadows, Sam has to do something NOW! To top it all your little tyburn is one of the creepiest I've ever read, wow!
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 05:51 PM · On: Stealth
Ok, this is seriously freaky! That just gave me chills! And that stupid nurse Hack'n'Slash needs to have her teeth kicked in. Calling Dean a worthless man. Taste cold steel, bitch! (And I think I should get serious points for quoting Leonardo from the Ninja Turtles).
Author's Response: hahaha Hey, I'll give you points for that. I'm glad you're liking the story and that you found this chapter "seriously freaky". You made my day.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 10:21 PM · On: Extrinsic Motivation
Hi Vanessa, Well, I've been reading this in several chapter clumps over the last few days. You've got a nice, creepy vibe going with the hungry shadow-thngy. I liked Protective!Sam ordering Ursula to stay away from Dean in this chapter. Arg, you left with an evil cliffie, I hope you're updating this soon:-) Sue
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Sue. I'm happy to hear you're finding the story creepy. Good to know!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 05:35 PM · On: Extrinsic Motivation
Nooooo!! Another evocative evil cliff hanger! I can't wait to find out what's haunting the hospital and why it affects the nurses. Run, Sammy, run!
Author's Response: Thanks, Shannon, for all the lovely reviews on the chapters. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 05:24 PM · On: Gone Astray
Of coarse we're still reading! As I see it the creature is body jumping from person to person---first Nurse Perdue then Nurse Martin. I'm eager to find out what it is!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 05:16 PM · On: It's Hungry
Exquisite descriptions! Marvelously written!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 04:29 PM · On: Dark of Night
Oooh! What chilling words with which to end the chapter! I especially love the description of Dean's nightmare and the dark around him after he awakens. And hey! How does Nurse perdue know he's a womanizer? He's been unconcious all this time.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 04:18 PM · On: Weight of the World
Great chapter! My guess is that you know a Geri and a Nurse Ratchet from your hospital. Poor Dean. He doesn't know what he's in for by making Sammy leave. Now he's all alone with the boogeyman.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 08:09 AM · On: Do You Know Where You Are?
Ahhh! So here comes the monster du jour! Bring it on! You would think there would be more manifested hauntings in hospitals.
Author's Response: Yeah, you would think hospitals would be hotbeds of activity. In fact, I swear the little conference room attached my office here at the hospital is haunted. After all these were all patient rooms once... hehe Happy to hear you're liking the tale.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/02/09 05:46 PM · On: War Path
Chocolate and Spam---ewwww! I get the point! I'm glad Sam didn't take the security guard's attitude. He was assertive without being a bully. Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks, Shannon. Glad you're still enjoying the read.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/02/09 04:22 PM · On: Twenty Stitches in Time
It's a good thing Sam came out to move the car. If it had been Dean someone would have gotten a whoopin for touching his baby!
Author's Response: Oh, heck yeah. Dean woulda been furious. But really Sam was too. :-)
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 11:33 PM · On: Extrinsic Motivation
Wonderful, a new chapter and a poem, you saved my whole week with this!!! Nurse from hell Purdue torturing Dean who couldn't really defend himself was hard to watch, but I loved Sam coming to the rescue; very protective Sam and scared Dean, simply adorable! Such a great update, can't wait for more and this devouring entity is more than scary!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, bia1007. It truly does thrill me to hear you like this story so much still. I promise to update soon.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 07:26 PM · On: A Multitude of Restraints
What could be boring about Dean beating up medical personnel in a fear-induced frenzy? I thought it was great! I always love the way the brothers respond to one another. It always makes my insides melt like marshmallows over a fire.
Author's Response: Yeah, makes my insides melt like marshmallows over a fire too. I truly love it. Thank you again for the review. I'm so excited you're reading this one.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 06:59 PM · On: Open Your Eyes
WOW! So much action and it's only the first chapter! I love the poem, Nessa! It's a unique and fabulous way to kick off the story. You are so gifted! How did this story get past me? And ten chapters?! Where have I been? Well, I'm here now and since I've found it, I'm going to read till I'm caught up.
Author's Response: Awww, Shannon, you're gonna make me blush. I'm so thrilled you liked the poem. I start each chapter with one so I hope you like them all. And the chapters themselves too. Glad you discovered this story and are liking it so far. Thank you for the review!
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