Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 04:05 PM · On: Twenty Stitches in Time
Not boring at all vanessa! i loved the part with the flickering light being just that -- not some demon omen for once! nice touch! i'm enjoying this story so far, looking forward to seeing how it goes! --cricket
Author's Response: Ahh, thanks, CricketBee. I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 02:11 PM · On: Twenty Stitches in Time
OOOHHH I like that doctor and a charger huh? Hope he's gonna be in this a lot, have a feeling him and Dean will either hit it off big time, or come to blows...lol Great chapter Ness, as ever, not even slightly boring nor rambly!!! XX Louy
Author's Response: Yep, a Charger. Twas the only other muscle car I could think of at that precise moment that seemed equal to our beloved Impala. As always, I was happy to see your sweet review and stars. Thanks for the smile.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 02:31 PM · On: A Multitude of Restraints
Boring us, you are kidding, right? This was pure thrill and I'm so worried Dean's condition is much worse than expected (this is more than a simple concussion!), also I have a very bad feeling what his dream about Sam could mean. Great chapter, loved it!!
Author's Response: Thank you, bia1007. I'm so very happy to hear that you're liking the story so far. Hopefully you will continue to do so. Thank you for all the pretty stars too.
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 02:12 PM · On: A Multitude of Restraints
I'm not bored at all! A great chapter, it was so intense. I definitely look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you, Sanna. I'm so happy that you took the time to read and leave a review for this chapter. Good to know you're looking forward to more.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 07:07 AM · On: A Multitude of Restraints
so not boring....!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and review. It's much appreciated.
Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 06:54 AM · On: A Multitude of Restraints
No not boring at all, looks like it's going to be a really good story. Iv'e not read any hospital horror stories, don't know how I missed them, but this looks great. Looking foreward to up dates. Many thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you, bunnykins. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 05:51 AM · On: A Multitude of Restraints
Yes I was so 'endlessly bored' I had to read it 3 times... Absolutely perfect, we never get enough of the boys looking out for each other on the show, hope that will change in season 4... Great chapter Ness, looking out for more! XXX Louy
Author's Response: Three times? Really? Aww, that makes me incredibly happy. Thank you, Louy, for taking the time to leave me such a nice review.
Reviewer: Live1970 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 08:58 PM · On: A Multitude of Restraints
Roll Him!--that made my heart skip a beat! Love it, keep it coming please.
Author's Response: Isn't there just something about those words? They kinda make my heart skip a beat too. I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed this chapter. Hopefully you'll like the new one as well.
Reviewer: Live1970 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 08:57 PM · On: Open Your Eyes
OH, Snoopy bandaid---that was too cute! OH OH, bloody, screaming Dean---even cuter!!
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 06:17 PM · On: A Multitude of Restraints
I don't know who I feel sorrier for Sam or Dean. Me thinks Sam's heart isn't the only thing that's gonna be thudding if Dean gets loose....hehehe....maybe some doctor's head who tried to put the poor guy in restraints. Nice touch with the delirious flashback. Laura
Author's Response: Thank you, Laura. I'm really glad you enjoyed the whole (finished) chapter. As you know, I had a really good time writing it.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 05:48 PM · On: A Multitude of Restraints
Great chapter,i enjoyed it.You didn't bore me at all.Looking forward to more of this story.
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it and that you're looking forward to more.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 05:31 PM · On: A Multitude of Restraints
Ness. Bored when you have Dean injured shouting for Sam and in restraints? No hunny you can bore me like this any day! Lovely. (oh take his shoes and socks off for me tho please? bev xx
Author's Response: Ahhh, YAY! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I had a superbly wonderful time writing it as you now how much I adore hurt!Dean. And, yes, I do intend to get him barefoot, I promise. For your pleasure and mine. hehe :-)
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 05:21 PM · On: Open Your Eyes
Ness I do love a slightly confused vaguely agressive head injured Dean! Let's face it the thought of sturing that boy is a pleasure in its own right! On to chapter two! bev xx
Author's Response: Bev! Thank you so much taking the time to give this one a read. I'm so happy you liked the first chapter!
Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 03:04 PM · On: A Multitude of Restraints
That, my friend, in no way, shape, or form even came close to boring me. I loved every word you wrote! My stomach still has butterflies in it. LOVED IT! (Thanks for the fix, I was kinda jonesing there)
Author's Response: Ooh, ooh, ooh--I gave you butterflies???? I can't tell you how much that pleases me!! I've certainly experienced my fair share while reading your wonderful stories, so I take this as THE highest compliment! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, Helen. It brings a huge smile to my face.
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 24/05/08 08:33 AM · On: Open Your Eyes
What a cliffie! Not sure I can handle it 'cause of the extremely evil cliffie at the end of this season... (I've just watched the finale.) But a great start, I'm very curious to see what happens next. That little girl and her Snoopy Band-Aid were really cute. Beautiful writing as always. I also love it how you started this with a poem. Could you let me know when you publish your next poetry book? I'd appreciate it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Sanna. I really, really appreciate you taking the time to read and review the beginning of this little tale. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/08 09:07 AM · On: Open Your Eyes
Ness, you tease, you know we are desperate for more!! Cool cliffie, ending with a Dean bellow sure has our attention. This work is classic Vanessa with your trademark phenomenal description. Your scenes are clearly in our heads - the brothers relationship, the emotions, the physical environment, the adventure, the drama, we see and live it all. We feel Sam's fantic worry with a clout that makes us suck in our breath -beautifully done. Your little girl offering a bandaid was too darn cute. And a Snoopy bandaid to boot!?! Too sweet! And starting with one of your poignant poems (and you know how I love your poetry) sets the ambiance perfectly. Very nice. Hope you've got this series already mapped out, looking forward to a great ride!
Author's Response: Thank you, Petra. As always, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. Your kind words toward this chapter mean a lot to me and bring a smile to my face. I'm glad you enjoying the first chapter and are looking forward to more.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/08 08:30 AM · On: Open Your Eyes
Certainly enjoyed this start, always love the hospital stuff, great - more please!
Author's Response: Thank you, bia1007. I'm happy to hear you liked the opening chapter. More to come soon.
Reviewer: beth9874 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/08 05:39 AM · On: Open Your Eyes
Dean and hospitals, i love that combination (I'm wierd like that) update soon please
Author's Response: Yeah, the two just seem to go together so well. Thanks, beth9874.
Reviewer: Hunter4Life (Signed) · Date: 16/05/08 10:25 PM · On: Open Your Eyes
whoa what hapened good suspense =-b
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it so far.
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 16/05/08 07:20 PM · On: Open Your Eyes
Great start V!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 16/05/08 03:16 PM · On: Open Your Eyes
I seriously needed one too Vanessa, so thanks so much!! Bloody Dean is one of my most favorite things. I will wait anxiously for an update!!
Author's Response: Okay, so we'll feed each others addictions then. Deal? 'Cause your stories are addiction ambrosia. I'm very happy to hear you liked this first chapter. There IS just something special about bloody Dean, isn't there?
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 16/05/08 02:12 PM · On: Open Your Eyes
Great chapter. Fantastic beginning to the story love having a hurt Dean, More Please!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, Maureen. So happy to hear you're liking this story so far.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 16/05/08 01:12 PM · On: Open Your Eyes
WOW, atention grabbing intro, and very well written. Loved the little girl trying to give Sam a band aid. And I can't wait to see how this develops...it's never a good thing when Dean's being pig-headed in a hospital, you just know that's gonna spell disaster for someone...lol XX Louy
Author's Response: LOUY! Missed ya, girl. Thank you so much. I'm happy you enjoyed the opening chapter. I hope it was detailed enough to paint a good picture.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/05/08 12:32 PM · On: Open Your Eyes
great start,poor dean, hurt again.looking forward to more of this story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm just such a Hurt!Dean, Protective!Sam junkie. I can't help but feed my own addiction sometimes. Glad you like it so far.
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