Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 22/05/08 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Hell is a State of Mind
Is this like a kind of thought as to how and why and when Dean begins to lose his humanity? it's eerie in a sense, and i can so relate to the emotional part when Dean will be left alone and that was when his mind starts to slip away....i want Dean to be saved!!!!
Author's Response: I think this was my reaction to the stress of not knowing what Kripke had planned for our hero in the finale. I think this is the path on which Dean would lose his humanity eventually, but Sammy's presence in his mind is allowing him to hold on. He's waiting to be saved even tho he can't remember why or who, he just knows he is supposed to hold on. I do think being alone would be the breaking point for Dean. The mental tortures are always more insidious than the physical ones. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: Hunter4Life (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Hell is a State of Mind
wow more please a mental asylum? more!!!! =-b
Author's Response: I think everyone is ganging up against me. This was supposed to be a oneshot, but it is looking more and more like I'm gonna have to flesh out the story a little more. I hope I can carve out the time. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Hell is a State of Mind
Nice!
Author's Response: Thank you! Appreciate it! Later, B.J.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Hell is a State of Mind
Wow! Great job! It's vague enough to peak my interest and precise enough to let me know who in involved.
Author's Response: Thank you, that was precisely what I was aiming for. Good to know I succeeded. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: anniesmom (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Hell is a State of Mind
It would be really interesting to see where this goes. I vote to continue. You hoooked me with just this little bit.
Author's Response: Your vote is duly noted! LOL Yeah, there seems to be a lot of interest in this so maybe. We'll have to see what the show gives us tonight and then what my warped brain can come up with over the summer. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Hell is a State of Mind
Freakin' Hell BJ!!! Please don't leave us there!?!? My breath is stuck cos I think I read that in one breath! So few words, such agony. A white room of nothingness. My God, the very idea shrieks madness and desolate loneliness. It's just...bleak... Your line "He hoped they would and that just made it harder to be lost" is just spectacular. Adds dramatically and depressingly to the feeling of being alone and confused. Strange? No! The deal is hanging around us like a feeling of doom, no wonder your muse mumbled in the haze. I loved this, much as it freaked me out...
Author's Response: Thanks, Cookie, Yeah, I think the loneliness and feeling lost would be the worst agony for Dean. I really thought this would be it, but maybe with the summer I could pursue a longer story. I'll think about it. Thanks for all the lovely comments. Much appreciated. Later, B.J.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/05/08 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Hell is a State of Mind
Damn, BJ I so want this to be the first teaser of something...and that twilight time when the brain hasn't engaged yet? Isn't that just the best and most creative time out of the whole day? For something so short, I was amazed at how spell bound I was...please please please continue this into something bigger - I KNOW you can do it!
Author's Response: I guess we'll have to see what happens tonight on the show. Honestly, I thought I was gonna get away with writing a drabble, short and to the point. Yeah, my best critic and encourager and pusher-to-do-my-best friend also told me this had to be the start of a bigger story. Maybe... Thanks for all the encouragement. Take care, B.J.
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