Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/03/09 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 7 It just wants what it wants

Well, what a welcome commiette shall I say . . . to someone whom is protective about his grandfathers museum is befar credited.

I do like the enhance attitude you have currently displlayed on SAM.

Harch though, but the way it balances the whole story I like it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/03/09 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 5 Killing more than time

Why cant the idiot look in his back pocket for the answers he needs, and get in contact with SAM.

The image of DEAN being that way and form is scarry and haunting enough to get in contact  with KING or KOONTZ.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/03/09 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 4 Of all things dead

This is impecable lonelyness that I feel along with SAM, and I don't know what to do if I wher in his place.

Just imagining to be in his place is unconcolable and untrusting that something may happen and not in a good way eighther.

 

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/03/09 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 2 About being sad

I have always wondered who invented the cross roads mystery tail.

I've always wanted to try, but i've had fear of the after effect.

Anyway this has been a severy punch in my stomacke and I'm losing my breath cause of it.

you did well placeing a lot of the sentemental values between 2 brothers that mean the world to each other, and being without the other was not allowed to their standereds of being a WINCHESTER.

Thank you.

Reviewer: youthere (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 3 Losing my mind

I liked the understated creepiness of the demon Sam. And I don't know why, but the fact that he was barefoot made him extra unsettling to me. Some kind of uncanny effect. Odd, huh?

"Well actually, his great big, freaking gloomy, stormy, black shadow..."- oh lovely dark humor :)

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 7 It just wants what it wants

Whoa. You're getting very good at adding last-minute complications to the mix. The three wierd demon sisters are creepy as hell and probably a force to be reckoned with. Awesome.   Sue

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 3 Losing my mind

Oh, this was wrenching, Dean asks Sam to stay in the car because he doesn't want Sam's last memory to be that. "I'm not scared anymore, Sammy." Then the demon looks like Sam.... oh, wicked. And you've left Sam and Bobby hanging, wondering which seven Dean has to endure. I'm off to find out in Chapter 4.    Sue

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 8 This world or the next

Okay Louy, I've hemmed and halled all I could but finally I just couldn't resist catching up to you.  I need and update, in fact I'll forfeit my next chapter to be beta'd for it...lol.  Just get his fabulous story moving ;) Kel

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 6 Deep out of sight

Sam had gone to his own personal hell at the same time as his brother; it was just that his body didn’t know it yet.  - Guh, just an absolute killer line. 

Great work you're doing here.  - Kel ;)

Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 8 This world or the next

Dude.  you're amazing.  i'm so strung on what lomax has up his sleave, you have no idea.    and defensive david?  very sweet.  nervewracking, but sweet.

can't wait for more!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 4 Of all things dead

Damn, so Dean came back as scheduled just not in the right place...Crap, excellent chapter ;)  Kel

Reviewer: jensengal3 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 8 This world or the next

Did i mention how much i love this story? Poor poor Dean. Again great descriptions!

Sarah