Reviewer: TozaBoma (Signed) · Date: 30/05/08 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

I had a notebook of my mum. And now she's gone, too.

This was lovely. I loved it. So maybe parts of it were a little chick-flick territory, but hey, it worked for me.

I doubt Dean ever held onto anything as tightly as memories of his mam. I know I do.

Ta for sharing this - it's very special.

 

Author's Response:

Thanks, TozaBoma.  I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate the critique.  Thanks for sharing your own experiences with me.  You're awesome!

 ~A

Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 14/05/08 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a lovely Mother's Day tale. I love Dean angst, and you captured that fantastically. You created a nice picture in my head of the two brothers with Dean sharing childhood memories, and Sam soaking it all up like a sponge.

I loved this line the most i think (at least it got me the most teary)

"You showed me and Dad more love than either one of us showed you. And every day, I know my family loves me because of all the things you do for me."

Mahhhhhvelous, simply marvelous.

-- cricket

Author's Response: Thanks Cricket!  I'm so glad you liked it!  Thanks for reviewing too!  You're awesome!

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

awwww that was reallly sweett

Author's Response: :D Thanks!

Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

i really enjoyed this story.  i always get a kick out of symbolism.

Author's Response: Thanks Prop!  :D

Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was sweet.  I, for one, can't remember a damn thing from when I was four.  Wish I had a notebook to remind me.  Nicely done and thank you.

Author's Response: Your welcome and thank you!  I can't remember being four either, but I bet if I were six again then I would.  Thanks for reading and I'm so glad you like it!